Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct subject-verb agreement and article use.

예시: I prefer Japanese-style clothes because they look clean and elegant. For example, I often wear simple dresses with neat lines for formal events, and their modest designs make me feel comfortable and confident.

제안: Clarify what you mean (probably 'casual' or 'comfortable'), use a direct topic sentence, and give a specific reason with a linking phrase. Remove hesitations and vague fragments.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely. For instance, I usually wear loose trousers and sneakers to school since they are practical and keep me comfortable during long days.

제안: Good content but reduce fillers and improve grammar and word choice. Give one specific example of when you wear T-shirts and link ideas coherently.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are practical and comfortable for everyday activities. For example, I wear cotton T‑shirts when I run errands or meet friends since they allow easy movement and look casual.

제안: Use natural expressions (e.g., 'I don't spend much time') and give a clear reason with linking words. Remove hesitations and improve word choice around timing and convenience.

예시: I don't spend much time choosing clothes; I usually pick my outfit the night before because it's more convenient and helps me feel more organized in the morning.

제안: Answer directly whether you change styles, then give specific contrasts between weekday and weekend choices using linking words. Correct grammar and reduce repetition.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I tend to wear neat Japanese-style dresses that look professional, while on weekends I switch to more casual versions of the same style, such as loose dresses or skirts that are easier for relaxing and leisure activities.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating phrases. State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with one supporting detail or example. Fix grammar and unnatural phrasing.

예시: I usually choose black because it looks clean and elegant and gives a professional impression. For example, I wear a black dress or blazer when I have meetings or formal events because it feels polished.

× I like to wear Japanese style dresses because it's looks like a clean and elegant for certain occurrence.

✓ I like to wear Japanese-style dresses because they look clean and elegant for certain occasions.

The sentence misuses the contraction 'it's' and the pronoun agreement. 'It's' (it is) is singular and does not agree with 'dresses' (plural); use the plural pronoun 'they'. Also 'looks like' is incorrect for describing appearance—use 'look' with plural subject. 'A clean and elegant' needs no article and should be 'clean and elegant'. 'Occurrence' is not the correct noun here; use the plural 'occasions' or 'events' to match 'certain'. Suggestion: match subject and pronoun number, use correct verb form for plural subjects, and choose the correct noun ('occasion' -> 'occasions').

× I prefer to choose Japanese style clothes.

✓ I prefer Japanese-style clothes.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed directly by the object or by 'to' plus verb, so 'prefer to choose' is awkward and redundant. Remove 'choose' and use 'prefer Japanese-style clothes' for a natural expression. Also add a hyphen in 'Japanese-style'.

× I prefer to wear small clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes.

'Small clothes' is not idiomatic and likely a misuse of a quantifier/type word. The intended meaning is probably 'casual' or 'comfortable' clothes. Replace with a clearer adjective like 'casual' or 'comfortable'.

× Umm, because it can. Uh, it can.

✓ Umm, because they are comfortable.

The original fragments are incomplete and lack a clear subject and verb. 'It can' is vague. Use a complete clause that explains why: 'because they are comfortable.' Make sure the pronoun matches the plural noun ('they' for 'clothes').

× Whenever I go to school or go to work, it's the best choice to choose.

✓ Whenever I go to school or work, they are the best choice.

The sentence uses 'it's' (it is) and a redundant 'to choose'. Use 'they' to refer to 'clothes' and remove redundancy. Keep the sentence concise and clear: 'they are the best choice.'

× I like wearing T-shirt UMM because they are practical and make me feel relax and easy to umm moving.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they are practical and make me feel relaxed and free to move.

Use plural 'T-shirts' to match the general statement. 'Relax' should be the adjective 'relaxed'. 'Easy to moving' is ungrammatical; use 'free to move' or 'comfortable to move in'. Also remove filler 'UMM' in formal responses. Ensure verb forms and noun forms match their roles.

× Also it shows my daily activity.

✓ Also, they show my daily activities.

The subject should be plural 'they' to match 'T-shirts' and the noun 'activity' should be plural when referring to various daily actions: 'activities'. Add a comma after 'Also' and keep subject-verb agreement.

× I spend few time to choose clothes, umm, I usually choose them before night because it's very it's more convenient and umm more clear conscious to choose.

✓ I spend little time choosing clothes; I usually choose them the night before because it is more convenient and makes it easier to decide.

Use 'little time' not 'few time' for uncountable 'time'. Use the gerund 'choosing' after 'spend'. 'Before night' is unidiomatic—use 'the night before'. Remove filler words. 'It's very it's more clear conscious to choose' is ungrammatical; rephrase as 'it is more convenient and makes it easier to decide.'

× Well I usually wear Japanese style clothes, especially dresses because they are very a clean and elegant and also easy to moving to do some casual activities.

✓ Well, I usually wear Japanese-style clothes, especially dresses, because they are very clean and elegant and also easy to move in for casual activities.

Remove the extra article 'a' before 'clean'. Use 'move in' for clothing mobility and 'easy to moving' is incorrect—use infinitive or 'move in'. Add hyphen in 'Japanese-style' and commas for clarity. Ensure adjectives are in correct order and forms.

× I usually choose black color because black color is clean and elegant color on them bring people umm about the professional feelings, so I usually choose black one.

✓ I usually choose black because black looks clean and elegant and gives people a professional impression, so I usually choose black.

Do not repeat 'color' unnecessarily: 'choose black' is sufficient. 'On them bring people about the professional feelings' is ungrammatical—use 'gives people a professional impression' or 'conveys professionalism'. Remove filler words and redundant phrases. Ensure verbs match subjects and choose correct collocations ('give an impression').