Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct small grammar/word choice errors (e.g., 'suitable for me').

예시: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical for everyday activities. For example, when I meet friends or run errands, casual clothing lets me move freely and feel relaxed.

제안: Avoid repeating words and give a clearer reason with better vocabulary. Use linking words like 'because' or 'since' and correct awkward phrases ('very high value restaurants' → 'very formal restaurants').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I rarely go to very formal restaurants or events. Since my daily routine is informal, T-shirts and jeans are more practical for me.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence and support it with a specific reason. Avoid repeating 'feel' and tighten phrasing (e.g., 'they make me feel relaxed' or 'I like their texture').

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because I like their soft texture and they make me feel relaxed, especially on warm days or when I'm meeting friends.

제안: Be more organized and avoid hesitations and repeated phrases. Provide a clear reason and a brief example. Correct grammar ('choosing my clothes', 'I don't have many clothes') and explain what 'smart casual' means for you.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have a small wardrobe and usually stick to smart-casual outfits, like a nice shirt and jeans, which are easy to put together.

제안: Clarify and avoid repetitive or unclear phrases like 'wear a dress for dress'. Use linking words to contrast (e.g., 'whereas' or 'but') and be specific about typical weekend choices.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear a school uniform because I have classes, whereas at the weekend I usually wear casual clothes, such as a T-shirt and jeans, when I go out with friends.

제안: Avoid informal or exaggerated claims like 'become very famous' and produce coherent descriptions. Use correct adjectives (e.g., 'red looks energetic and passionate') and link reasons logically. Keep it natural and concise.

예시: I like red because it looks energetic and attracts attention. For me, red clothing expresses confidence and passion, so I often choose it for social events.

× It is because it's more convenient for me and I like to hang out with my friends.

✓ This is because it is more convenient for me and I like hanging out with my friends.

Use of 'It is' referring to previous sentence should be 'This is' to indicate reason. Also use 'like hanging out' (verb + -ing) after 'like' when referring to general preference. Suggestion: replace 'It is' with 'This is' and use 'hanging out' for natural phrasing.

× So casual work, casual clothing is more suitable suitable for me.

✓ So casual clothing is more suitable for me.

Redundant words and repetition ('casual work, casual clothing' and double 'suitable') create awkward structure. Remove redundant phrase and duplicate word. Suggestion: keep 'casual clothing is more suitable for me.'

× I would prefer to wear comfortable comfortable clothes.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

Repetition of adjective 'comfortable' is incorrect and unnecessary. Use single adjective before noun. Suggestion: use only one 'comfortable'.

× It is because I seldom go to some very high value restaurants, so comfortable T-shirt or jeans is more suitable for me.

✓ It is because I seldom go to very expensive restaurants, so comfortable T-shirts or jeans are more suitable for me.

'Some very high value restaurants' is unnatural; use 'very expensive restaurants'. Also countable nouns need plural forms: 'T-shirts' and subject-verb agreement requires 'are'. Use articles appropriately: no article before plural general nouns. Suggestion: 'comfortable T-shirts or jeans are more suitable for me.'

× It is because I enjoy the texture of T-shirts and the feeling of it's giving me a relaxed feel.

✓ It is because I enjoy the texture of T-shirts and the feeling they give me, which makes me feel relaxed.

Incorrect 'the feeling of it's giving me a relaxed feel' mixes forms. 'It's' is contraction for it is and wrong reference. Use noun clause: 'the feeling they give me' and use relative clause 'which makes me feel relaxed.' Suggestion: rephrase to clear subject and use base verb 'give' and 'feel'.

× No, no, I don't spend a lot of time for choosing my clothes.

✓ No, no, I don't spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

Use 'spend time doing something' not 'spend time for doing'. Remove 'for'. Suggestion: 'spend a lot of time choosing'.

× It is because I don't have, I don't have many clothes in my in my laundry and I would prefer just smart casual.

✓ It's because I don't have many clothes in my wardrobe, and I would prefer smart casual.

Repeating 'I don't have' is unnecessary. 'In my laundry' is wrong location for owned clothes; use 'wardrobe' or 'closet'. 'Prefer just smart casual' should be 'prefer smart casual'. Suggestion: streamline sentence and use correct noun for clothing storage.

× All good.

✓ That's all.

'All good' is informal and ambiguous in this context; 'That's all' or 'That's it' clearly ends the response. Suggestion: use 'That's all'.

× Yeah, I will wear a different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

For habitual actions, use present simple rather than 'will'. Also use plural 'styles' to match 'different'. Suggestion: use 'I wear' for routines.

× On weekdays I will go to school and study, so I will wear uniform and weekends I will hang out with my friends, so I will wear a dress for dress and go out with them.

✓ On weekdays I go to school and study, so I wear a uniform; on weekends I hang out with my friends, so I wear casual clothes when I go out with them.

Use present simple for habitual actions. 'Wear uniform' needs an article 'a uniform' or 'the uniform' depending on context; 'a uniform' is appropriate. Original has 'a dress for dress' which is unclear; replace with 'casual clothes' or 'a dress' depending on intended meaning. Also separate the two clauses with proper punctuation. Suggestion: use clear nouns and present simple for routines.

× I like red color for my clothes.

✓ I like red for my clothes.

Do not need the noun 'color' after color when specifying preference; 'I like red' or 'I like the color red' are correct. For clothing preference 'I like red for my clothes' is concise. Suggestion: use 'I like red for my clothes.'

× It is because everyone will keep an eye track on my clothes and I will become very famous.

✓ It's because red attracts attention to my clothes and I will stand out more.

'Keep an eye track' is incorrect collocation; use 'pay attention to' or 'attract attention'. 'Become very famous' is unlikely and imprecise in this context; 'stand out more' fits better. Suggestion: use natural expressions like 'attract attention' or 'stand out'.

× And red clothes is also mean, active and. High. High passion.

✓ And red clothes also mean energy and passion; red is associated with activity and high energy.

'Red clothes is' has subject-verb agreement errors; 'clothes' plural needs 'are' or rephrase. Original fragments 'mean, active and. High. High passion.' are ungrammatical. Clarify idea: 'red signifies energy and passion' or 'red is associated with activity and passion.' Suggestion: use full sentences and correct verbs and vocabulary.