Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and use correct collocations (e.g., 'wear' not 'use'). Start with a clear topic sentence and add one specific detail. Avoid redundancy and keep within 1–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing pajamas and other loungewear because they are very comfortable. For example, I often choose soft cotton pajamas at home because they help me relax after a long day.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence, avoid repeating 'because', and add one specific reason with a linking word. Use clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'fit' or 'fabric').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they allow me to move freely. For instance, I like clothes made of soft fabrics that fit well, so I can walk or cycle without restriction.

제안: Start with a direct answer and add one or two specific examples using a linking word such as 'for example' or 'especially'. Keep sentences natural and grammatically parallel.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially like wearing T-shirts when I go for a walk in the park or when I'm relaxing at the mall, because they are lightweight and easy to layer.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then specify how time varies with examples. Use linking words like 'if' or 'when' to make the condition clear and reduce vague phrasing.

예시: It depends on the occasion: if I'm attending a formal event I spend more time choosing an outfit, but for everyday errands I usually pick clothes quickly.

제안: Be careful with accuracy and avoid contradicting yourself. Use clear topic sentence and contrasting linking words ('on weekdays' / 'on weekends'). Correct collocations ('office style' → 'office-style clothes') and don't repeat the same time period twice.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear office-style clothes like shirts and trousers for work, while on weekends I relax in comfortable loungewear or pajamas.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence and specific reasons without repetition. Use accurate phrases ('suits my skin tone', 'brightens my mood') and correct grammar. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words.

예시: I like wearing yellow because it suits my skin tone and brightens my appearance. Also, yellow lifts my mood—wearing it makes me feel cheerful and optimistic.

× I like to use night outfits or pajamas because it's very comfortable.

✓ I like to wear night outfits or pajamas because they are very comfortable.

The verb 'use' is not natural with clothing; 'wear' is correct collocation. Also 'pajamas' is plural so the pronoun and verb must be plural ('they are'). Change 'it's' to 'they are' for agreement and natural phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'wear' for clothes and ensure subject-pronoun agreement (singular/plural).

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because you can easily move because the texture of the clothes is very smooth and nice.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because I can move easily and the fabric is very smooth and nice.

The sentence shifts from 'I' to 'you'; keep the same subject 'I' to refer to the speaker. 'Easily move' is more natural as 'move easily'. 'Texture of the clothes' is awkward; 'fabric' or 'materials' is better. Remove the repeated 'because' and combine reasons for clearer structure. Suggestion: Maintain the same subject, use natural adverb placement (verb + adverb), and replace awkward nouns with collocations like 'fabric' or 'material'.

× Yes, especially when I want to walk in a park or just chilling in malls.

✓ Yes, especially when I want to walk in a park or just chill in malls.

After 'want to' use the base verb 'chill', not the gerund 'chilling'. Both activities should use parallel verb forms: 'want to walk' and 'chill'. Suggestion: Maintain parallel verb forms after 'want to' and use base verb form after 'want to'.

× Well, it depends on the events or where I should go in that specific day.

✓ Well, it depends on the event or where I should go on that specific day.

Use 'on that specific day' for time expressions. 'Events' should be singular 'event' when paired with 'that specific day' or rephrase to 'which event'. Also 'depends on the events or where I should go' is clearer as 'depends on the event or where I should go'. Suggestion: Use 'on' for day/time prepositions and ensure noun number matches the context.

× Yes I do. On weekends I prefer to wear a office style setup and on weekends, just like I said earlier, I love to use pajamas or night clothes.

✓ Yes I do. On weekdays I prefer to wear an office-style outfit and on weekends, as I said earlier, I love to wear pajamas or night clothes.

The speaker likely meant a contrast between weekdays and weekends; original said 'On weekends' twice, so change first to 'On weekdays'. Use 'an' before a vowel sound 'office'. 'Office-style outfit' is more natural than 'office style setup'. Use 'wear' instead of 'use' for clothing. Remove redundancy and make the contrast clear. Suggestion: Check context for intended meaning (weekdays vs weekends), use correct articles ('an'), natural collocations ('office-style outfit'), and avoid repeating the same time phrase.

× I love to wear yellow color clothes because it gives a light to my skin tone and yellow.

✓ I love to wear yellow clothes because it brightens my skin tone.

Say 'yellow clothes' rather than 'yellow color clothes'. 'It gives a light to my skin tone' is awkward; 'it brightens my skin tone' is natural. Remove the redundant 'and yellow'. Use singular pronoun 'it' referring to the color, but rephrase to avoid ambiguity. Suggestion: Use concise collocations like 'yellow clothes' and verbs like 'brighten' for skin-tone effects.

× For me it's it's like a sunny.

✓ For me, it's like sunshine.

Double 'it's it's' is a repetition error. 'Like a sunny' is ungrammatical; use 'like sunshine' or 'like a sunny day'. Include a comma after 'For me' for clarity (optional in speech). Suggestion: Avoid repetition and choose correct noun forms ('sunshine' or 'a sunny day').

× It gives you positive attitude and positive day.

✓ It gives me a positive attitude and makes my day better.

The speaker should keep first-person perspective ('me' not 'you'). 'Positive attitude' needs an article: 'a positive attitude'. 'Positive day' is awkward; 'makes my day better' is natural. Maintain consistent subject and pronoun perspective. Suggestion: Keep consistent first-person perspective and use natural collocations like 'make my day better'.

× It's feels like I'm positive.

✓ It feels like I'm positive.

Use 'it feels', not 'it's feels' (incorrect contraction + verb). Remove the extra 's'. The sentence then reads correctly as 'It feels like I'm positive.' Suggestion: Avoid combining contracted 'it is' with a verb ending; use either 'it's' + adjective ('it's good') or 'it feels' without 'it's'.