Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using correct words (e.g., cotton, comfortable, easy to move). Avoid repetition and filler. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer wearing T-shirts. I like cotton T-shirts because they are comfortable and let me move easily when I exercise or hang out with friends.

제안: Give a direct answer first and then one clear reason. Remove repetitions and fillers. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect the reason. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. For example, I can meet friends or have breakfast without worrying about my outfit.

제안: Answer directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a brief specific example of when you wear T-shirts. Clean up grammar (e.g., 'T-shirts are my top choice' and 'because they are made of cotton').

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. They are my top choice for casual outings like coffee with friends because cotton T-shirts are comfortable and breathable.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific detail (e.g., wardrobe is mainly black and white). Use correct nouns (wardrobe) and avoid repetition. Keep answer compact (2 sentences).

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because my wardrobe mostly contains black and white T-shirts. That makes it quick and easy to pick something for jogging or meeting friends.

제안: Answer directly and give a contrast using linking words (e.g., 'However' or 'but'). Be specific about what you wear on each occasion and avoid vague phrases. Use correct tense and grammar.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear casual clothes like a black T-shirt and jeans for classes. However, on weekends I prefer smarter, more fashionable clothes for social events.

제안: State your preference clearly and give two precise reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'so'). Replace vague words like 'humble' with more natural descriptors (e.g., 'more professional' or 'subtle'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer darker colours such as black, dark blue or purple because they look more subtle and are easy to match with other clothes. For example, a dark shirt goes well with most trousers and jackets.

× T-shirt absolutely you know, most of the T-shirt is made made of the cordon.

✓ T-shirts, absolutely. You know, most T-shirts are made of cotton.

Plural nouns and passive construction with present participle: 'T-shirt' should be plural when speaking generally ('T-shirts'). The passive 'are made of' requires plural verb 'are' to agree with 'T-shirts'. 'Cordon' is incorrect word choice; intended word is 'cotton'. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts are made of cotton.'

× So the cotton always bring me brings me a sense of comfort and convenient.

✓ So cotton always brings me a sense of comfort and convenience.

Third person singular subject 'cotton' requires verb 'brings' (adds -s). 'Convenient' is an adjective; the noun 'convenience' is needed after 'sense of'. Suggestion: use 'brings' and 'convenience.'

× It helps me like can move move my body effectively and like MO mobility.

✓ It helps me move my body effectively and increases my mobility.

Unnecessary filler words ('like', repeated 'move', 'MO') confuse the sentence. Use infinitive 'help + base verb' ('helps me move') rather than 'helps me can move'. 'Increases my mobility' is clearer. Suggestion: remove fillers and use correct verb patterns.

× So my like T-shirt is a white makeup of tea.

✓ So my favorite T-shirt is a plain white one.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect idiom 'makeup of tea' likely intended 'my cup of tea' meaning 'my favorite'. 'White makeup' is wrong collocation. Suggestion: use 'my favorite T-shirt is a plain white one.'

× Well, the casual one is, is my cup of tea.

✓ Well, casual clothes are my cup of tea.

Pronoun/reference: 'the casual one' is unclear; general preference should use plural 'casual clothes' or 'the casual style'. 'Is my cup of tea' is fine idiomatically. Suggestion: say 'casual clothes are my cup of tea.'

× You know, whenever I'm out, I am in time home.

✓ You know, whenever I'm out, I feel at home.

Phrase 'I am in time home' is ungrammatical. 'Feel at home' expresses comfort. Suggestion: use 'feel at home.'

× The casual is always, I always offer, offer a casual one because, umm, it brings me a sense of comfort and convenience and I can like go out, go go out, hang out with my friend or have a breakfast easily and feel, yeah, feel free.

✓ I always choose casual clothes because they bring me comfort and convenience, and I can easily go out, hang out with my friends, or have breakfast and feel relaxed.

Pronoun and number agreement: 'casual' needs a noun (clothes) and should be plural 'they'. Repetition and filler words removed. Use 'friends' plural and 'feel relaxed' instead of 'feel free'. Suggestion: simplify and ensure pronoun-number agreement.

× Absolutely, yes, You know, T-shirt is my cup of tea.

✓ Absolutely, yes. T-shirts are my cup of tea.

General statements about a clothing type should use plural 'T-shirts' with plural verb 'are'. Capitalization fixed. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts are my cup of tea.'

× I took T-shirt is always off the top of my choice.

✓ T-shirts are always at the top of my list of choices.

Incorrect tense and idiom: 'I took' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Off the top of my choice' is wrong collocation; correct phrase is 'at the top of my list of choices.' Suggestion: remove 'I took' and use standard idiom.

× So whenever I'm go out with my friend, hang out, have breakfast or have a coffee, I always go for T-shirt because T-shirt bring like it's K is it made of cotton, Cotton.

✓ So whenever I go out with my friends to hang out, have breakfast, or have coffee, I always go for a T-shirt because T-shirts are made of cotton.

Verb form: 'I'm go out' should be 'I go out'. Pronoun/plural: 'friend' should be 'friends' for general statements. Use article 'a T-shirt' or plural 'T-shirts'. Verb agreement: 'T-shirts are made' not 'bring... is made'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: correct subject-verb forms and use plural consistently.

× So I feel very comfortable whenever I'm in T-shirt.

✓ I feel very comfortable whenever I'm wearing a T-shirt.

Use progressive 'wearing' to describe state when dressed; include article 'a T-shirt'. 'In T-shirt' is non-native. Suggestion: say 'when I'm wearing a T-shirt.'

× Well, not much because all all the cars or or the color of the T-shirt in my in my trower is just black and white.

✓ Not much, because all the colors of the T-shirts in my drawer are just black and white.

Incorrect words: 'cars' should be 'colors', 'trower' should be 'drawer'. Subject-verb agreement: 'colors... are'. Remove repeated words. Suggestion: proofread for word choice and agreement.

× So it's a it's a bit easy for me to go for the the random whites or a black T-shirt in order to go out, hang out with friend or just go jogging around in the park.

✓ So it's a bit easy for me to choose a random white or black T-shirt to go out, hang out with friends, or go jogging in the park.

Article and plural issues: 'the random whites' should be 'a random white or black T-shirt'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. Remove duplicate words. Suggestion: use singular 'a' for a single T-shirt choice and plural 'friends'.

× Well, it's a big yes from me.

✓ Well, it's a big yes from me.

This sentence is acceptable colloquially; no grammatical correction needed. Keep as is. (No change required.)

× When in my weekday, like on Monday to Friday, I always choose for something that casual, something that look normal like a black, a really black T-shirt with a with my shirt in order to go to school or go to the extra class.

✓ On weekdays, from Monday to Friday, I always choose something casual, something that looks normal, like a plain black T-shirt with a shirt, to go to school or attend extra classes.

Preposition and tense: 'When in my weekday' should be 'On weekdays'. 'Choose for' is not needed; use 'choose'. Subject-verb agreement: 'something that look' should be 'looks'. 'Extra class' pluralized to 'extra classes' for general statement. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and agreement.

× But when it come to weekends, I often go for something like look more smart and fashionable.

✓ But when it comes to the weekend, I often choose something that looks smarter and more fashionable.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it come' should be 'it comes'. Use 'the weekend' or 'weekends' consistently. Comparative: 'look more smart' should be 'looks smarter'. Suggestion: correct verb form and comparative adjective.

× Well, I would go for some color that a bit dark, like black or purple or dark blue, because you know, those kind, those kind of color give me like it's, it's make me look, make my appearance look, MMM, more humble.

✓ Well, I would go for darker colors, like black, purple, or dark blue, because those kinds of colors make me look more modest.

Use plural 'colors' and 'kinds of colors'. 'Give me like it's, it's make me look' is ungrammatical; use 'make me look'. 'More humble' is better expressed as 'more modest'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and correct verb 'make'.

× Yeah, more humble in the public.

✓ Yes, more modest in public.

Article and preposition: 'in the public' is incorrect; say 'in public'. 'Humble' better replaced with 'modest' for appearance. Suggestion: use 'in public.'

× And yes, is is is also easy to fit with any other kinds of clothes too.

✓ And yes, they are also easy to match with other kinds of clothes.

Pronoun reference: 'is is is' incorrect; subject should be 'they' referring to colors or T-shirts. 'Fit with' can be 'match with'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'they are'. Suggestion: use clear subject and correct verb form.