Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời cần trực tiếp hơn và dùng từ chính xác. Tránh lặp từ như “practical and conscious” (từ “conscious” dùng không chính xác ở đây). Thêm một câu ngắn giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do và một ví dụ cụ thể. Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu. Ví dụ: Topic sentence + 1–2 supporting details với từ nối như “because” hoặc “so”.

예시: I usually wear practical clothes, mainly T-shirts and jeans, because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, when I go out with friends I choose a plain T-shirt and slim jeans so I can feel relaxed and confident.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh trả lời chung chung và lỗi từ vựng (“casserole”, “dishes” là sai từ). Trả lời trực tiếp “comfortable and casual” hoặc “smart”, rồi giải thích rõ ràng. Dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” và đưa ví dụ cụ thể. Nói 2–3 câu, dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., casual, smart, professional, comfortable).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me express my personality and feel relaxed. For instance, I often pair a casual shirt with jeans rather than wearing a suit for daily activities.

제안: Cải thiện: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc, tránh cụm từ vô nghĩa như “because teachers” hoặc “it's easy to watch”. Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể (comfort, versatility, easy to wash). Dùng liên từ như “because” và cung cấp một ví dụ ngắn.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I can wear a T-shirt to study at the library or to meet friends, and it is easy to wash and match with different bottoms.

제안: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng cần rút gọn và tránh lặp từ “however”. Sử dụng nối hợp lý (e.g., “but”, “when”) và cho ví dụ cụ thể về một dịp bạn lựa chọn kỹ. Giữ 3 câu tối đa.

예시: Yes, I do, but it depends on the occasion. For formal events like interviews, I carefully choose a smart outfit, while on normal days I simply wear comfortable clothes like jeans and a T-shirt.

제안: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng có lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (“make me make me”). Nên nêu rõ ví dụ cho cả hai trường hợp và dùng từ nối như “while” hoặc “whereas”. Giữ 3 câu, sửa ngữ pháp.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear more formal clothes, such as a shirt and trousers for classes, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like T-shirts, jeans or shorts for comfort.

제안: Cải thiện: Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cụm từ sai (“keen up”, “Rob”). Câu trả lời nên bắt đầu trực tiếp với màu yêu thích, nêu lý do ngắn gọn và một ví dụ. Dùng cấu trúc đơn giản và đúng ngữ pháp.

예시: My favorite colour is yellow. I like it because it makes me feel cheerful and lucky, so many of my clothes are yellow — for example, I'm wearing a yellow top today.

× I prefer to wear practical and conscious clothes because they are so comfortable and make me feel more confident.

✓ I prefer to wear practical and conscious clothes because they are very comfortable and make me feel more confident.

The adverb 'so' is informal and can be vague; 'very' is more appropriate here to modify the adjective 'comfortable' in neutral speech. Use 'very' for emphasis in formal or neutral registers.

× I usually go out with my friends wearing T-shirts and jeans.

✓ I usually go out with my friends wearing T-shirts and jeans.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no preposition correction needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× Yes I do. I prefer to wear casserole and practical clothes because they make me feel more confident.

✓ Yes, I do. I prefer to wear casual and practical clothes because they make me feel more confident.

The word 'casserole' is incorrect in this context; the intended adjective is 'casual'. Correcting to 'casual' fixes the adjective choice error.

× I mean I can express myself, my personality, like dishes with jeans.

✓ I mean I can express my personality, for example by wearing different designs with jeans.

The original sentence uses incorrect nouns ('dishes') and awkward commas. Replacing with 'for example' and 'wearing different designs' clarifies meaning and improves conjunction/connector usage.

× Definitely, I always wear T-shirts when hanging out with friends or studying because teachers, it's easy to go well with others, that's why.

✓ Definitely. I always wear T-shirts when hanging out with friends or studying because they are easy to match with other clothes.

The clause 'because teachers, it's easy to go well with others' is incorrect. Replace with 'because they are easy to match with other clothes' to use appropriate adjectives and clear causal structure.

× Moreover, it's easy to watch. It's a big.

✓ Moreover, they are easy to care for and comfortable to wear.

Original fragments are unclear and ungrammatical ('easy to watch', 'It's a big'). Rewriting to 'easy to care for' and 'comfortable to wear' restores coherent meaning and grammatical sentence structure.

× Yes I do, however it depends on the situation.

✓ Yes, I do; however, it depends on the situation.

Add punctuation to separate clauses; 'depends' is correct present tense. This fixes run-on sentence issue and improves clarity.

× Sometimes when I need to participate in special or formal events, I always spend more time choosing which one is the best.

✓ Sometimes, when I need to attend special or formal events, I spend more time choosing which outfit is best.

Use 'attend' instead of 'participate in' for events and remove redundant 'always'. 'Which outfit is best' is clearer than 'which one is the best.'

× However, in normal days so it's easy for me to wear anything that make me feel comfortable.

✓ However, on normal days it's easy for me to wear anything that makes me feel comfortable.

Use 'on normal days' (correct preposition) and correct verb agreement 'makes' to match singular subject 'anything'. Remove extraneous 'so'.

× On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I need to meet my friends or classmates or teachers in class.

✓ On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes because I meet friends, classmates, or teachers in class.

Present simple 'meet' fits habitual action; removing 'need to' makes it sound like routine. Commas improve list clarity.

× However, in weekends I just wear something make me make me feel comfortable, like T-shirts and jeans or shorts.

✓ However, on weekends I just wear something that makes me feel comfortable, like T-shirts and jeans or shorts.

Use preposition 'on weekends'. Add relative pronoun 'that' and correct verb form 'makes' for subject-verb agreement; remove duplicate phrase 'make me'.

× I am keen up yellow, that's why many clothes, my clothes are yellow and you can see right now I'm also wear yellow Rob.

✓ I am keen on yellow; that's why many of my clothes are yellow, and right now I'm also wearing a yellow robe.

Use correct preposition 'keen on'. 'Many of my clothes' clarifies possession. Use 'wearing' (present participle) and correct noun 'robe'. Punctuation improves readability.

× This is my favorite color just because I think it's also my lucky color as well.

✓ This is my favorite color because I think it's also my lucky color.

Remove redundancy: 'just' and 'as well' both add the same meaning. Use single conjunction 'because' to give reason.