Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a complete topic sentence, singular/plural agreement, and one brief supporting reason. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: I usually wear T-shirts and trousers for everyday wear because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one short reason using linking words (because, so).

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me relax and move freely, especially during long days.

제안: Ensure grammatical correctness and coherence. Use a topic sentence and a linking word to add one specific supporting detail. Keep to two sentences max.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They’re ideal for both indoor and outdoor activities because they are breathable and easy to wash.

제안: Clarify your meaning and fix sentence structure. Answer directly then explain briefly why, using specific detail (e.g., deciding what fits or suits the occasion).

예시: Not really — I don’t usually spend much time choosing clothes unless I feel something is uncomfortable or unsuitable for the occasion.

제안: Be direct and concise. State whether you change styles between weekdays and weekends, then give one clear example and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear smart or casual office clothes, but on weekends I choose more relaxed outfits like jeans and T-shirts for meeting friends.

제안: Improve tense and phrasing, and be more specific about why you prefer those colours. Use one linking phrase to connect reason to preference.

예시: I usually wear black and white because they match easily and look appropriate for many occasions, whether casual or slightly formal.

× I like to wear T-shirt and trouser for daily wear.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts and trousers for daily wear.

Countable clothing items need plural forms when referring generally (T-shirt -> T-shirts, trouser -> trousers). Use plural to indicate types worn habitually. Grammar problem type ID:1

× As I said in the first sentence that I wear T-shirt and shorts because they are comfortable and easy to wear for a comfort.

✓ As I said earlier, I wear T-shirts and shorts because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

Use plural T-shirts for general habit. 'for a comfort' is unidiomatic; say 'comfortable' or 'easy to wear'. Also remove redundant 'that' after 'sentence'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Yeah, I wear T-shirt because it is useful for indoor activity and outdoor you are comfortable when you wear T-shirt.

✓ Yeah, I wear T-shirts because they are useful for indoor activities, and you are comfortable outdoors when you wear a T-shirt.

Subject-pronoun agreement: use plural 'T-shirts' or singular with article. Match pronouns consistently: 'they' for plural, 'a T-shirt' for singular. Use plural 'activities' and correct adverb 'outdoors'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× A lot of time to make loads because I usually spend whatever it is feeling uncomfortable. I only take more time than I need to dress for.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I get uncomfortable otherwise. I only take more time than necessary to dress.

Original sentences are ungrammatical and wordy. Reorder to subject-verb-object ('I spend a lot of time choosing clothes'). Replace vague phrases ('whatever it is feeling uncomfortable') with clear reason. Use 'necessary' instead of 'for'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I go for interview or party or having fun with my friend, then I wear different style of clothes. Yeah, so I wear on weekday and weekends.

✓ When I go to an interview, a party, or hang out with my friends, I wear different styles of clothes. I dress differently on weekdays and at weekends.

Use infinitive 'go to an interview' and parallel verbs ('go to..., or hang out...'). 'Having fun with my friend' should be 'hang out with my friends'. Use plural 'styles' and correct prepositions 'on weekdays' and 'at weekends'. Grammar problem type ID:10},{