Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify vocabulary and sentence structure. Use correct clothing words (e.g., ‘casual clothes’, ‘jeans’, ‘pants’) and form one clear topic sentence, then add a short reason or example. Avoid repetition and unnecessary fillers.

예시: I prefer casual clothes like jeans and comfortable pants because they are easy to move in. For example, I usually wear them when I run errands or travel around town.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, especially nouns and pronouns. Give a direct answer first, then one concise reason linked with a connector (because/so). Avoid contradictory fragments and fix subject-verb agreement.

예시: I definitely prefer casual clothes because smart clothes make me feel stressed and uncomfortable, so I choose casual outfits for everyday activities.

제안: Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Start with a clear yes/no and one reason using a linking word. Use precise phrasing for climate and effect.

예시: Yes, I do. Since summers in Japan are very hot, I prefer T-shirts because they keep me cool and let me move comfortably.

제안: Good structure and relevant detail. Improve grammar (plural/singular, articles) and use linking words for clarity. Keep sentences within the five-sentence limit and refine word forms.

예시: Sometimes I spend quite a while deciding what to wear because it depends on the occasion. For example, I choose outfits carefully for parties or important meetings, but for university I usually pick something casual.

제안: Be consistent and precise. If you mean you do change style, answer directly. Avoid contradictory sentences. Fix phrasing (e.g., ‘weekends and weekdays’, ‘on my feet’), and remove irrelevant fragments like ‘My daily routine.’

예시: Yes, I do change my style between weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable casual clothes because they make it easier to move around while at university, and on weekends I dress more casually or for social activities.

제안: Correct vocabulary and content: avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (‘Hawaii’, ‘cows’). Give a clear topic sentence naming the colour, then two concise reasons with proper grammar and agreement.

예시: I often wear white because it pairs well with many other colours and gives a fresh, calming look. Wearing white makes me feel more relaxed and confident.

× I prefer casual growth such as jeans or head pants because they are comfortable and make it easy to move because and I usually wear them when I'm running errands.

✓ I prefer casual clothing such as jeans or sweatpants because they are comfortable and make it easy to move, and I usually wear them when I'm running errands.

The student used incorrect nouns ('growth', 'head pants') and awkward connectors. Replace with correct noun 'clothing' and 'sweatpants'. Remove the extra 'because' and join clauses with 'and'. Also adjust word order for natural English. ID:13

× I prefer casual clothes absolutely because smart girls is makes me stressful and uncomfortable.

✓ I absolutely prefer casual clothes because smart clothes make me feel stressed and uncomfortable.

There is subject-verb agreement and word choice issues. 'Smart girls' is incorrect; should be 'smart clothes'. 'Is makes' is ungrammatical; choose 'make' to agree with plural subject 'clothes'. Use 'feel stressed' instead of 'stressful' to describe the speaker's feeling. ID:27

× However the casual clothes it's comfortable to move.

✓ However, casual clothes are comfortable for moving.

'The casual clothes it's' mixes a determiner and a pronoun incorrectly. Use plural verb 'are' to agree with 'clothes' and rephrase 'comfortable for moving' or 'comfortable to move in'. ID:12

× Yeah, absolutely, because these days Japan's summer is too hot to move, so I prefer to wear T-shirts so it makes me feel comfortable and easy to move.

✓ Yes, absolutely. These days Japan's summers are too hot, so I prefer to wear T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable and make it easy to move.

Use plural 'summers' or rephrase; original had run-on and awkward 'to move'. Replace second 'so' with 'because' and ensure pronoun 'they' refers to T-shirts. Maintain parallel verbs 'make me feel' and 'make it easy'. ID:11

× Sometimes I spend quite a while deciding what to wear because it depends on the occasion.

✓ Sometimes I spend quite a while deciding what to wear because it depends on the occasion.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present tense is used appropriately. No change needed. (No applicable error from the provided list.) ID:6

× For example, I choose outfit carefully for parties or important meeting, but when I go to university I usually pick something casual.

✓ For example, I choose outfits carefully for parties or important meetings, but when I go to university I usually pick something casual.

Pluralize 'outfit' and 'meeting' to match general reference, and add plural agreement with 'choose'. Use 'choose outfits' and 'important meetings' for natural English. ID:22

× No I don't, I usually change my style between weekends and week.

✓ No, I don't. I usually change my style between weekends and weekdays.

Use 'weekdays' rather than 'week' to indicate the working days. Add punctuation and correct 'between weekends and weekdays' or 'between weekends and the week' for clarity. ID:12

× Weekdays I mostly wear comfortable casual clothes because they make it easier to move around on their feet. My daily routine.

✓ On weekdays I mostly wear comfortable, casual clothes because they make it easier to move around on my feet as part of my daily routine.

The original has misplaced phrase 'on their feet' which should be 'on my feet' to refer to the speaker, and 'My daily routine' is a sentence fragment; combine into one sentence for clarity. ID:26

× I often wear white clothes because Hawaii is very, umm, cool and goes well with other cows.

✓ I often wear white clothes because white is very cool and goes well with other colors.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Hawaii' and 'cows' likely due to mispronunciation. Replace with 'white' and 'colors'. Clarify meaning: wearing white goes well with other colors. ID:13

× It also feel calming and makes me feel more relaxed and confident.

✓ It also feels calming and makes me feel more relaxed and confident.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' requires 'feels' (third-person singular). Keep 'makes me feel' unchanged. ID:27