Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and clear: start with a topic sentence stating your preference, avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “be your fashionable clothes”), and give one or two concise reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words like “because” to connect ideas and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer fashionable clothes. I feel comfortable and confident wearing them to parties and social events because they suit my style. For everyday wear I also choose practical items that are easy to move in.

제안: Answer directly: say which you prefer in general and mention exceptions. Fix grammar (use singular/plural correctly) and use linking words such as “but” or “however” to contrast. Provide one specific example (e.g. gym) to support your answer.

예시: I usually prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are practical for daily activities. However, for special occasions or formal events I choose smart, fashionable outfits to look more polished. For example, I wear sportswear at the gym and a blazer for parties.

제안: Keep the answer short and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I do) and add a brief reason and one example. Correct subject-verb agreement and phrasing (e.g. “they make me feel comfortable”).

예시: Yes, I do. I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to pair with jeans. For instance, I often wear a T-shirt when I go out with friends or run errands.

제안: Be natural and avoid negative words like “waste” when possible; say “I often spend a long time.” Provide a reason why and give a short example. Use correct prepositions (e.g. “at the shopping mall”) and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes at the shopping mall because I like to find items that suit my style. For example, I usually try on several tops before buying one.

제안: Answer clearly: state the difference between weekday and weekend styles, use present simple for habits, and give specific examples (e.g. workwear vs casual wear). Avoid vague reasons like “we have to change our clothes.”

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear smart, professional clothes for work, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes like jeans and hoodies for relaxing and meeting friends.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence naming the colour, then add a specific reason and one brief example. Avoid repetition (“I like black colour very much”). Use natural phrasing: “I prefer black” or “I like wearing black clothes.”

예시: I prefer wearing black because it looks sleek and is easy to match with other items. For example, I often wear a black jacket and jeans because they suit most occasions.

× I love to be your fashionable clothes because I feel comfortable when I go an occasional parties, I prefer fashionable clothes to wear.

✓ I love fashionable clothes because I feel comfortable when I go to occasional parties; I prefer wearing fashionable clothes.

The sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'your' and awkward structure 'be your fashionable clothes'. Replace with correct noun phrase 'fashionable clothes'. 'an occasional parties' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'occasional parties' and include the preposition 'to' after 'go'. Use 'prefer wearing' instead of 'prefer ... to wear' for smoother English. (grammar_problem_type_id:12)

× When particular occasions I prefer to be a fashionable clothes and whenever I go for a gym or for ground to practice I we are comfortable because it makes me very comfortable to perform.

✓ On particular occasions I prefer fashionable clothes, and when I go to the gym or to the field to practice I wear comfortable clothes because they make it easier for me to perform.

Missing preposition 'On' before 'particular occasions'. 'to be a fashionable clothes' is incorrect; use 'prefer fashionable clothes'. 'go for a gym' should be 'go to the gym'; 'for ground' should be 'to the field' or 'ground' with 'to'. 'I we are comfortable' is ungrammatical—use 'I wear comfortable clothes'. 'it makes me very comfortable to perform' is awkward; better 'they make it easier for me to perform'. (grammar_problem_type_id:3)

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because it feel me comfortable whenever I go anywhere.

✓ Yes, I love to wear T-shirts because they make me feel comfortable whenever I go anywhere.

Pronoun 'it' does not agree with plural 'T-shirts'; use 'they'. 'feel me comfortable' has incorrect verb order; use 'make me feel comfortable'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they make'. (grammar_problem_type_id:2)

× Yes, I waste a lot of time whenever I go to shopping mall on choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I waste a lot of time choosing clothes whenever I go to the shopping mall.

Use the gerund 'choosing' as the object of 'waste time'. Preposition sequence 'go to shopping mall on choosing' is incorrect; correct order is 'go to the shopping mall' and then 'choosing clothes'. Also include the definite article 'the shopping mall'. (grammar_problem_type_id:8)

× Yes, I'll be a different type of clothes on weekdays and weekends because on every day we have to change our clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different types of clothes on weekdays and weekends because we change our clothes every day.

'I'll be a different type of clothes' is incorrect: 'will' plus 'be' isn't needed here. Use simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions. 'a different type of clothes' mixes singular and plural; use 'different types of clothes'. Place 'every day' correctly and use 'we change our clothes every day' for clarity. (grammar_problem_type_id:7)

× I like to wear black colour clothes because I like black colour very much, so I prefer it.

✓ I like to wear black clothes because I like the color black very much, so I prefer it.

Use 'black clothes' rather than 'black colour clothes'. 'black colour' is unnatural in English; use 'the color black'. 'prefer it' refers to 'the color' so it's acceptable, but clearer to say 'I prefer black.' Also use American spelling 'color' or British 'colour' consistently. (grammar_problem_type_id:13}]}