Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep your answer concise and reduce fillers (uh). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief specific reasons with linking words. Mention one short example to make it more vivid.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes, such as polos and cargo shorts, because they are lightweight and ideal for Hanoi's hot weather. Also, they are easy to find and affordable, so I often buy them when shopping on the weekend.

제안: Start with a direct statement of preference and avoid vague phrasing. Use one or two clear, specific reasons and a linking word (for example, because or because of this). Avoid uncertain expressions like "you can try to ask more."

예시: I prefer casual clothes to smart clothes because they are more versatile. For example, a neat polo can be acceptable in informal meetings and also looks natural when I meet friends.

제안: Give a concise opinion and support it with one or two clear reasons without repeating ideas. Replace fillers and vague comparisons with specific descriptions (e.g., looks more mature, better fit).

예시: I prefer polos to T-shirts because polos look more mature and usually have a better fit. A polo can be worn to casual events without appearing too informal.

제안: Be grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (No, I don't). Then give a brief reason and one specific example of your shopping habit. Avoid contractions like "gonna" in formal speaking and fix grammar (I have a busy schedule).

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I have a busy schedule. For instance, when I shop I quickly pick items that look comfortable and buy them without comparing many options.

제안: Answer directly and organize reasons clearly. Mention the uniform first, then explain weekend habits with a linking word (so or therefore). Keep it to two or three sentences and give one brief example.

예시: I generally wear the same casual style on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I have to wear my school uniform, and on weekends I usually stay home or go out casually, so I choose comfortable clothes.

제안: Good specific colours and personal reason. Improve by removing repetition and adding a brief example of an outfit. Use one linking word to connect reason and example.

예시: I usually choose bright colours such as yellow, red or pink because they reflect my extroverted personality. For example, I often pair a bright polo with white sneakers to create a lively, coordinated look.

× I myself has a really busy schedule for times like shopping.

✓ I myself have a really busy schedule and don't have time for shopping.

Subject 'I' requires the verb form 'have' (not 'has') in the present simple. Also the original phrase 'for times like shopping' is awkward; corrected to 'don't have time for shopping' to match intended meaning and improve clarity.

× So usually I just look at some clothes and if they are they look comfortable enough I'm just gonna purchase them anyways.

✓ So usually I just look at some clothes, and if they look comfortable enough, I'm just going to purchase them anyway.

There is a redundant 'they are' and informal 'gonna' and 'anyways'. Remove redundancy, use 'look' to agree with plural 'clothes', and replace 'gonna' with 'going to' (or keep casual register) and 'anyway' is the standard adverb form. Also add commas for clarity.

× My mother always said you need to look more into clothing, but I don't take.

✓ My mother always said I need to pay more attention to my clothing, but I don't.

The original 'you need' shifts person unexpectedly; maintain first person 'I need'. 'Look more into clothing' is unnatural; use 'pay more attention to my clothing'. 'I don't take' is incomplete; use 'I don't' or 'I don't pay attention'.

× ...they are suitable for hot environment like in Hanoi and you can get them everywhere.

✓ ...they are suitable for hot environments like Hanoi, and you can get them everywhere.

Use plural 'environments' or 'the hot environment of Hanoi'. 'Like in Hanoi' is redundant; 'like Hanoi' is more natural. Added a comma before the conjunction.

× It's really cheap as well.

✓ They're really cheap as well.

Refers to 'polo and some cargo shorts' (plural), so adjective 'cheap' should be predicated with 'they're' rather than 'it's'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and plurality.

× I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because casual clothes can fit any situation.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes rather than smart clothes because casual clothes can fit any situation.

No correction to sentence content needed; however, if interpreting 'fit any situation' one could prefer 'be suitable for any situation'. This item flagged if pronoun misuse existed; original is acceptable so left unchanged.

× Whether you're in a meeting you can try to ask more with casual clothes or if you just hang out with your friends, it doesn't look weird as like when you wear smart clothes with them.

✓ Whether you're in a meeting, you can try to ask more questions while wearing casual clothes, and if you just hang out with your friends, it doesn't look as strange as when you wear smart clothes with them.

Sentence is run-on and unclear. Added punctuation and rephrased 'try to ask more' to 'try to ask more questions' and 'as like' to 'as strange as' to fix comparative structure and improve clarity.

× I prefer wearing polo rather than T-shirts.

✓ I prefer wearing polos rather than T-shirts.

When speaking generally about the item, use plural 'polos' to match 'T-shirts' (plural) or use the uncountable form 'a polo shirt'. This ensures parallel structure.

× I find T-shirts quite childish.

✓ I find T-shirts rather childish.

'Quite' is acceptable but 'rather' may sound more natural in this context; this is a stylistic suggestion rather than strict grammar. Kept meaning intact.

× I mean, most people, uh, most children wear T-shirts and wearing polo feels mature and it's, it's not too, uh, it's not too luxurious or too old like wearing suits.

✓ I mean, most children wear T-shirts, and wearing a polo feels more mature; it's not too luxurious or as old-fashioned as wearing a suit.

Removed filler words and improved comparisons: 'most people, uh, most children' was redundant. Use 'a polo' for singular generalization; 'suits' changed to 'a suit' to match comparison. 'Too old like wearing suits' is ungrammatical; rephrased to 'as old-fashioned as wearing a suit'.

× I usually like to wear the same style of clothing for weekdays and weekends because on the weekdays I need to wear my school uniform which is required by the school.

✓ I usually like to wear the same style of clothing on weekdays and weekends because on weekdays I need to wear my school uniform, which is required by the school.

Preposition: use 'on weekdays' not 'for weekdays'. Also added comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which is required by the school'. Adjusted article use for natural phrasing.

× So even at home I just wear something comfortable and in the weekends I usually don't go out that much so I just wear what I want.

✓ So even at home I just wear something comfortable, and on weekends I usually don't go out that much, so I just wear what I want.

Use 'on weekends' instead of 'in the weekends'. Added commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× When I wear clothes, I usually pick the brightest color like yellow or red and even pink.

✓ When I choose clothes, I usually pick bright colors like yellow, red, or even pink.

Use plural 'colors' when listing examples. 'Brightest' suggests superlative which may be unintended; 'bright' is more natural. Also 'when I wear clothes' changed to 'when I choose clothes' to reflect decision rather than action.

× I feel like it can convey my extrovertness the most and it absolutely absolutely looks stunning when paired with other clothing like sneakers.

✓ I feel like they convey my extroversion best, and they absolutely look stunning when paired with other items like sneakers.

'Extrovertness' is nonstandard; use 'extroversion'. Match plural 'colors' or 'clothes' with 'they'. Remove duplicate 'absolutely'. Use 'best' instead of 'the most' for smoother adverbial usage and change 'clothing like sneakers' to 'items like sneakers' for clarity.