Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh) and subjective remarks like "I look stunning" which sound unconvincing. Add one specific reason or brief detail about when or why you choose each style using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "however"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I usually wear Western clothes for daily activities because they are practical and easy to move in. However, when I visit the gurdwara I prefer a traditional salwar kameez because it is respectful and comfortable.

제안: Provide a complete, focused answer with a clear contrast and a specific example. Remove repetition and unfinished phrases. Use a linking word like "but" or "however" and finish the sentence about special occasions by naming the type of smart clothes you wear.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for everyday life because they allow me to move freely and work without restriction. However, for special occasions like dinners or interviews I wear smart outfits such as a dress or a blazer to look more formal.

제안: Avoid hesitation sounds and correct unclear words. Give one or two specific reasons and an example of when you wear T-shirts. Keep to 2–3 sentences and link ideas with "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they are practical and comfortable for everyday activities. For example, I wear graphic T-shirts when I go out with friends and plain ones when I work from home.

제안: Make your answer coherent and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example (weddings). Remove repetition and fix unclear phrases like "sit back sit" and "see my husband". Use linking words like "however" and "often."

예시: I usually choose clothes quickly for everyday wear because I keep a simple wardrobe. However, I spend more time picking outfits for weddings or special events because I want to look appropriate and often feel I lack enough options.

제안: Give a direct, grammatically correct response. Remove filler words and clarify the contrast between weekdays and weekends. If styles do vary, name specific items and reasons. Use a linking word such as "sometimes" or "usually."

예시: Not really; my style doesn't change strictly by weekday or weekend. Sometimes I wear casual Western clothes like jeans and T-shirts, and at other times I choose traditional outfits like a salwar kameez for family events.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. State your preference clearly, give a reason, and add a brief specific example of how you combine these colours. Use linking words like "because" and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer black and white because they match most accessories and are easy to mix and match. For example, I often pair a white blouse with black trousers and different colored shoes or bags.

× Nowadays, I like to wear Western clothes. Uh, but sometimes, especially when I visit gurdwara, I would like to wear the Indian traditional attire that's called salwar kameez, and I look stunning in that.

✓ Nowadays I like to wear Western clothes, but sometimes, especially when I visit the gurdwara, I like to wear the Indian traditional attire called salwar kameez because I look stunning in it.

The original uses 'would like to wear' inconsistently with present habitual context; change to 'like to wear' for present preference (present simple). Also 'that's called' is wordy; use 'called'. Replace 'I look stunning in that' with 'I look stunning in it' for correct pronoun reference. Remove filler 'Uh' and adjust punctuation for fluency.

× During my daily schedule I like to wear the clothes in which I feel very comfortable and free because I don't want to burden myself. But when I go for a special occasion, specially to to some new place, I like to wear.

✓ During my daily routine I like to wear clothes in which I feel comfortable and free because I don't want to burden myself. However, when I go to a special occasion or to a new place, I dress more formally.

Problems: 'daily schedule' is awkward; use 'daily routine'. 'the clothes in which I feel very comfortable and free' is wordy; simplify. 'specially to to some new place' contains duplication and wrong word; use 'to a new place'. The sentence ends incomplete 'I like to wear.' Complete thought with 'dress more formally' to match question context.

× Yes, I love to wear T-shirts, whether they are simple, colorful, vibrant or uh, there are the sketch on it or written something on it. So I like teas a lot because they are very practical and comfortable too. Mostly I prefer them to wear a term.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts, whether they are simple, colorful, vibrant, have a sketch on them, or have something written on them. I like T-shirts a lot because they are practical and comfortable. Mostly I prefer to wear them all the time.

Errors: 'there are the sketch on it' is incorrect subject and singular/plural agreement; use 'have a sketch on them'. 'teas' is a typo for 'T-shirts'. 'prefer them to wear a term' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'prefer to wear them all the time' to express frequency. Also use 'wearing T-shirts' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, sometimes a lot, but most of the time in my daily routine, I can easily pick a cloth and wear it. But uh, when I have to go to attend a wedding or a special occasion, I have to sit back sit and I sometimes see my husband that I don't have enough clothes to choose from.

✓ Yes, sometimes I spend a lot of time, but most of the time in my daily routine I can easily pick clothes and wear them. However, when I have to attend a wedding or a special occasion, I sit down and sometimes tell my husband that I don't have enough clothes to choose from.

Problems: 'pick a cloth' should be 'pick clothes' (count and natural usage) and 'wear it' -> 'wear them'. 'go to attend' is redundant; use 'attend'. 'sit back sit' is erroneous; replace with 'sit down'. 'I sometimes see my husband that...' is incorrect reporting; use 'tell my husband'. Remove filler 'uh' and clarify meaning.

× No, I don't, uh, do like that. Just, uh, matter of a day or a time when I sometimes wears, uh, traditional clothes or, uh, casual clothes, but other days I like to wear the Western fashionable clothes like gowns or.

✓ No, I don't do that. It is just a matter of the day or the time when I sometimes wear traditional clothes or casual clothes, but on other days I like to wear Western fashionable clothes like gowns.

Errors: 'I don't, uh, do like that' is incorrect phrasing; 'do that' is correct. 'I sometimes wears' has wrong verb form for first person; use 'wear'. Remove filler 'uh' and complete sentence by removing trailing 'or'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing.

× Nowadays I like white and black a lot because it can go with any of the color or any of the accessories like shoes, bag. It can fit into any any combination. So I prefer black and white.

✓ Nowadays I like white and black a lot because they can go with any color or any accessories like shoes or a bag. They can fit into any combination, so I prefer black and white.

Errors: 'it can go with any of the color' uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural colors; use 'they' for colors. 'any of the color' -> 'any color'. 'any of the accessories like shoes, bag' -> 'any accessories like shoes or a bag' and add articles. Remove duplicate 'any any'. Adjust prepositions for natural collocation ('go with', 'fit into').