Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid filler words. Use correct grammar (e.g., "comfortable clothes" not "a comfortable clothes") and add one specific reason or brief example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and remove unnecessary pauses.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they help me relax and move easily. For example, I often choose soft cotton trousers and loose shirts when I’m studying at home.

제안: Give a direct answer first, correct vocabulary ("casual clothes" not "classes clothes"), and provide one short reason with a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so"). Avoid repetition and fillers.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and free to move. For example, I usually wear jeans and a T‑shirt when I meet friends or go to university.

제안: This is a good concise answer. To improve, add one supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "for example") to make it more informative and natural.

예시: Yes, I do, especially when I go to university because they are comfortable and easy to wash.

제안: Fix grammar ("I spend a lot of time choosing clothes"), avoid repetition, and give a specific reason or brief detail. Use a linking phrase to connect statements (e.g., "because").

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes. Every morning I take about 15 minutes because I want to pick something comfortable and appropriate for the day.

제안: Answer clearly with a topic sentence, correct grammar ("smart clothes"), and one brief reason for each choice. Use linking words like "however" or "but" to contrast weekday and weekend styles.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear smarter clothes because I attend classes and meetings, but on weekends I wear comfortable clothes since I stay at home and relax.

제안: Be specific about what you mean by "normal color" (for example, neutral colors). Correct grammar ("these colors" not "this colors") and avoid broad claims like "everyone likes this color." Give a reason or a brief example with a linking word.

예시: I like black and other neutral colors, such as gray and navy, because they are easy on the eyes and match many outfits. For example, I often choose a black jacket because it goes with everything.

× I like a comfortable clothes, uh, because, uh, I can relaxing and uh, feel comfortable.

✓ I like comfortable clothes because I can relax and feel comfortable.

The use of the article 'a' before the plural noun 'clothes' is incorrect (Article errors, ID 22). Also 'relaxing' is the present participle and does not fit after 'can' which requires the base verb form 'relax'. Remove filler words and redundant phrase 'and feel comfortable'. Suggestion: omit 'a' before plural nouns and use the base form after modal 'can'.

× I prefer comfortable and classes and, uh, classes clothes because, uh, I I because they help me feel relaxed and free to move. So.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed and free to move.

The student incorrectly used 'classes' and repeated words; likely intended 'casual' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). Also redundant 'I I because' is unnecessary. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective 'casual' and avoid repetition; use concise clause structure.

× Yes, I I spend a lot of time to choosing a clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

The phrase 'spend a lot of time to choosing' is ungrammatical; after 'spend time' use the gerund form without 'to' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Also 'a clothes' incorrectly uses article with plural (Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: say 'spend time choosing clothes' and remove the article before plural noun.

× Every morning I take 15 minutes to choose the clothes because I want to feel comfortable and comfortable and.

✓ Every morning I take 15 minutes to choose clothes because I want to feel comfortable.

Redundant phrase 'comfortable and comfortable and' is repetitive and unnecessary (Present tense issue, ID 6). 'To choose the clothes' can be simplified to 'choose clothes'. Suggestion: remove repetition and unnecessary articles for general statements.

× Yes on weekend. On weekdays I I choose a a smart clothes but in weekends I choose a comfortable because I sit on home so I prefer that.

✓ Yes, on weekends. On weekdays I choose smart clothes, but on weekends I choose comfortable clothes because I stay at home, so I prefer that.

Multiple errors: 'on weekend' should be 'on weekends' (Article/number, ID 22 and Singular/plural ID 1); 'a a smart clothes' uses article with plural (Article errors, ID 22); 'in weekends' incorrect preposition and plural (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11); 'sit on home' wrong verb and preposition—use 'stay at home' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestion: use plural 'weekends', no article before plural 'clothes', use 'stay at home' and correct prepositions.

× I like black and normal color because when we see this colors it's comfortable for eyes and uh.

✓ I like black and neutral colors because when we see these colors they are comfortable for the eyes.

Problems: 'normal color' is awkward; 'neutral colors' more natural (Incorrect use of adjectives, ID 13). 'this colors' should be 'these colors' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'it's comfortable for eyes' should be plural agreement and article: 'they are comfortable for the eyes' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27 and Article errors, ID 22). Suggestion: use 'these' with plural nouns, match verb number, and include 'the' with 'eyes'.

× Everyone liked this color.

✓ Everyone likes this color.

The sentence uses past tense 'liked' but context refers to a general truth; use present simple 'likes' with third person singular subject 'everyone' (Third person singular issue, ID 2). Suggestion: use present tense 'likes' for habitual/general statements.

× Most people like it.

✓ Most people like it.

This sentence is correct; 'most people' is plural and 'like' agrees. No change needed (Singular and plural issue, ID 1).