Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the clothes you prefer, avoid filler words (umm), correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and give one or two specific supporting details (why you like them, where you get them). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear simple T-shirts, often band T-shirts I find at thrift shops. I like them because they are comfortable and have unique designs that show my personal style.

제안: Answer directly, using correct pronouns and simpler phrasing. Give clear reasons and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, so) and limit to 2–4 sentences. Correct phrases like “I prefer wearing” and “appearance matters to me.”

예시: I prefer wearing smart clothes because appearance matters to me and I like to look tidy. For example, when I go to college I choose a blazer or a neat shirt because it makes a good impression.

제안: Keep the answer natural and avoid vague or exaggerated phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Remove unnecessary sentences like “that’s all.”

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially at home, because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For instance, I wear a soft cotton T-shirt when I study or relax.

제안: Be concise and structured. State directly that you spend time choosing clothes, explain specifically what you do (mixing colours, matching items) and give a brief example. Reduce hesitations and repeated phrases.

예시: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I enjoy mixing and matching colors. For example, I often try different tops and skirts to find a color combination that looks balanced.

제안: Answer clearly and correct grammar (a formal clothes → formal clothes or formal outfits; because I went to my college → because I go to college). Use linking words (whereas, while) and give specific examples of weekday and weekend outfits.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. While I wear formal outfits like a blouse and trousers for college on weekdays, I usually wear casual T-shirts and jeans at home on weekends.

제안: Be concise and accurate with grammar (my friends always say; I look good). Provide a short reason and, if possible, an example of an outfit in one or two sentences. Use precise vocabulary and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer deep colors like emerald green, navy blue and maroon because they suit my skin tone. For example, an emerald green dress often gets compliments from my friends and makes me feel confident.

× Actually I do have a lot of fashion sense, but I think my main umm clothes that I like is just a simple T-shirt or any band T-shirt that sometimes about it from thrift.

✓ Actually I do have a lot of fashion sense, but I think my main clothes that I like are just simple T-shirts or any band T-shirts that I sometimes buy from thrift stores.

Subject 'my main clothes' is plural so verb should be 'are'; 'T-shirt' should be plural to match 'clothes'; phrase 'sometimes about it from thrift' is incorrect and should be 'sometimes buy from thrift stores'. Use correct adjective/adverb placement and plural forms. Suggestions: Make subject and verb agree, pluralize nouns consistently, and use clear verb phrases like 'buy from thrift stores'.

× For me, I prefer someone to wear smart clothes instead of comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ For me, I prefer to wear smart clothes instead of comfortable, casual clothes.

The original uses 'someone to wear' which is unnecessary and causes disagreement with the subject 'I'. Use infinitive 'to wear' after 'prefer'. Also add a comma between 'comfortable' and 'casual' for parallel adjectives. Suggestions: Use 'I prefer to + verb' for personal preferences and keep adjective lists parallel.

× The reason is some people say that I'm a perfectionist person which I like to see.

✓ The reason is some people say that I'm a perfectionist, which I like to see.

'Perfectionist person' is redundant; use 'perfectionist'. Relative clause 'which I like to see' should refer to the whole idea and is acceptable after a comma. Remove unnecessary words. Suggestions: Avoid redundancy and place relative clauses after the noun or idea they modify.

× Everything in my eyes was perfect, just perfect.

✓ Everything in my eyes is perfect, just perfect.

Context is general/ongoing preference, so present tense 'is' is appropriate rather than past 'was'. Suggestions: Use present tense for current general statements or preferences.

× On the other hand, some people including me say clothes is first in.

✓ On the other hand, some people, including me, say that clothes come first.

Original lacks proper structure: missing 'that', and 'clothes is first in' is ungrammatical. Use 'clothes come first' with plural verb and commas around the parenthetical phrase. Suggestions: Add 'that' for reported speech and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, especially when I'm at home.

✓ Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts, especially when I'm at home.

This sentence is acceptable; 'wearing' correctly follows 'like'. Suggestions: No change needed.

× The reason is, I think T-shirts is one of the most comfortable clothes in this world.

✓ The reason is, I think T-shirts are one of the most comfortable types of clothing in the world.

'T-shirts' is plural and requires 'are'; 'one of the most comfortable clothes' is awkward—use 'one of the most comfortable types of clothing' or 'one of the most comfortable garments'. Also change 'this world' to 'the world'. Suggestions: Match plural subject with plural verb and use natural collocations like 'types of clothing'.

× On the other hand, T-shirts, that's all.

✓ On the other hand, T-shirts—that's all.

This is informal and fragmented. Use a dash or rephrase to connect the idea: 'T-shirts, that's all' is acceptable in speech but for clarity use punctuation; meaning is fine. Suggestions: In formal speech, say 'I just wear T-shirts, that's all.'

× Yes, I do spend a lot of my time choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Original uses present tense 'do spend' which is fine; remove unnecessary 'my' before 'time' for natural phrasing. No past tense change required. Suggestions: Use 'a lot of time' rather than 'a lot of my time' for general statements.

× The reason is I really love, I really love to mix and match my clothes with any other colours because I really like colours.

✓ The reason is I really love to mix and match my clothes with other colours because I really like colours.

Sentence is repetitive and fragmented. Remove repeated clause 'I really love' and 'any' is unnecessary before 'other colours'. Suggestions: Streamline sentences to avoid repetition: 'I love to mix and match my clothes with other colours.'

× On the other hand, sometimes I'm, I don't know, to wear pants or just skirts.

✓ On the other hand, sometimes I don't know whether to wear pants or skirts.

Original is fragmented and uses incorrect infinitive structure 'to wear pants or just skirts' after 'I don't know'. Use 'whether to' to introduce alternatives. Suggestions: Use 'I don't know whether to + verb' when presenting a choice.

× Yes, I do wear different style of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

'Style' should be plural 'styles' to agree with 'clothes' and the idea of multiple occasions. Suggestions: Ensure noun forms reflect plurality when referring to varieties.

× On weekdays, I usually wear a formal clothes because I went to my college.

✓ On weekdays, I usually wear formal clothes because I go to my college.

Mixed tenses: 'usually wear' is present habit, so reason should be present 'I go' rather than past 'I went'. Also 'a formal clothes' is incorrect; use 'formal clothes' or 'a formal outfit'. Suggestions: Keep tense consistent for habits and correct article+noun combinations.

× On the other hand, on weekends I will just umm, wear any T-shirts because I don't spend a lot of time outside.

✓ On the other hand, on weekends I just wear T-shirts because I don't spend a lot of time outside.

'Will' is unnecessary for habitual weekend action; use present simple 'wear'. Also 'any T-shirts' is better as 'T-shirts' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: Use present simple for habitual actions and avoid filler words.

× I do have a lot of colour clothes that I really like.

✓ I do have a lot of colourful clothes that I really like.

'Colour clothes' is incorrect adjective use in English. Use 'colourful clothes' or 'clothes of many colours'. Suggestions: Use 'colourful' as adjective to describe clothes that have strong colours.

× For example I like emerald green, Navy blue and also maroon.

✓ For example, I like emerald green, navy blue, and maroon.

Capitalization: 'Navy' should be lowercase 'navy' as a color; commas added for list. No verb issue but punctuation/capitalization corrected. Suggestions: Use consistent capitalization for color words and commas in lists.

× The reason is my friends always says that I look different and good look good when I wear that colours.

✓ The reason is my friends always say that I look different and look good when I wear those colours.

'Friends' is plural so verb must be 'say' not 'says'. 'Good look good' is duplicated; should be 'look good'. 'That colours' is incorrect demonstrative and plural agreement; use 'those colours'. Suggestions: Ensure subject-verb agreement, avoid duplication, and match demonstratives with plural nouns.