Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar; state a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish sentences. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and word choice (e.g., 'they are simple' not 'there are simple').

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they are easy to move in. For example, I wear them to university and when I meet friends, and I often choose sneakers so I can walk comfortably.

제안: Give a clear preference first, then briefly explain both situations with linking words. Avoid disfluent repetitions and incorrect phrases ('the cage will close' makes no sense). Use concise contrasting phrases like 'however' or 'but'.

예시: I generally prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and are easy to move in. However, for work I wear smart clothes such as shirts and trousers because I need to look professional.

제안: Keep the answer short and grammatical: start with a direct response, then give one specific reason with a clear linking word. Avoid filler phrases and repeated words. Use correct comparatives (e.g., 'more comfortable than other clothes').

예시: Yes, I do. I prefer T-shirts when I go out with friends or family because they are more comfortable and allow me to move easily compared with other types of clothes.

제안: Be specific about how much time and why. Use clearer structure: a topic sentence stating frequency, then reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary ('my work is related to fashion') and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I work in the fashion industry and I need to look stylish. For example, each morning I try on several outfits to find one that suits my schedule and looks professional.

제안: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. Use correct plural/singular forms and give clear contrasting structure with linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends'. Provide one concrete example for each.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekdays I wear smart-casual or office clothes, such as a shirt and dark trousers, because I need to look professional. On weekends I prefer jeans and a T-shirt so I can relax and go for walks.

제안: Be clearer about your preference and resolve the contradiction in the answer. Start with a direct statement about preferred colours, then explain reasons and give a specific example. Use correct word forms (e.g., 'jeans', 'navy') and avoid repeating 'like'.

예시: I usually prefer dark colours such as black, navy and dark blue because they are practical and easy to match. For example, I often wear jeans with a black jacket to work because it looks neat and professional.

× Well, I usually like wearing comfortable casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because there are some there are simple and easy to move in.

✓ Well, I usually like wearing comfortable, casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because they are simple and easy to move in.

The pronoun 'they' should refer to 'clothes' (plural) instead of 'there are', which is incorrect here. The error also includes redundant words 'there are some there are'. Use 'they are' to describe the clothes. Also add a comma between 'comfortable' and 'casual' for clarity.

× For example, I wear them every day when I go to university and meet friends and often choose sneakers so I can walk around. Walk around comfortable but sometimes.

✓ For example, I wear them every day when I go to university and meet friends, and I often choose sneakers so I can walk around comfortably, although sometimes I wear other shoes.

The original contains sentence fragments and awkward word order. 'Walk around' needs an adverb ('comfortably') and 'but sometimes' creates a fragment. Combine clauses and use appropriate adverbial form and a clear contrast to fix structure.

× Well I prefer I well I prefer comfortable and the cage will close because they're easy to move in and I feel relaxed.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable clothes because they're easy to move in and make me feel relaxed.

The original repeats phrases, contains nonsense phrase 'the cage will close', and has awkward structure. Remove repetition and irrelevant words, and use a clear clause describing reasons. Use 'make me feel' to express feeling caused by clothes.

× For example, I usually wear jeans and T-shirt when I go out with my with my friend.

✓ For example, I usually wear jeans and a T-shirt when I go out with my friend.

Remove the repeated phrase 'my with my' and use the article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. Ensure singular/plural agreement between 'friend' and 'my friend'.

× But during the day I wear smart clothes for my job because it's very convenient and comfortable clothes for.

✓ But during the day I wear smart clothes for my job because they are convenient and comfortable.

The phrase ends with an extra 'for' and repeats 'clothes'. Replace with 'they are' to refer to 'clothes' and remove redundancy.

× Yes, of course, especially when I go out with my friend or family members, I prefer to wear a T-shirt because it's very convenient and comfortable clothes than other dress no than other tea like than other dresses because I easy to move in and this kind of.

✓ Yes, of course. Especially when I go out with my friends or family, I prefer to wear a T-shirt because it's more convenient and comfortable than other dresses, and it's easy to move in.

Multiple pronoun and agreement errors: use 'friends' or 'family' (plural), remove repeated and misspelled words ('tea'), and compare correctly using 'more... than'. Add 'it's' before 'easy' and simplify the ending.

× Yes, of course I spend most of time to wear a wear a dress.

✓ Yes, of course. I spend most of my time choosing what to wear.

Incorrect verb and phrase 'to wear a wear a dress' is redundant and ungrammatical. Use 'spend time' with a gerund 'choosing' and 'what to wear' to express selecting clothes.

× I am very fashionable girl.

✓ I am a very fashionable girl.

Missing article 'a' before 'very fashionable girl' is required for a singular count noun.

× So my work is relating. My work is relating it so that during the day it's very difficult for me one dress to choose it.

✓ My work is related to fashion, so during the day it's very difficult for me to choose one outfit.

'Relating' is incorrect; use 'related to' to describe connection. Also fix word order: 'difficult for me to choose one outfit' is natural. Replace 'dress' with 'outfit' if broader meaning is intended.

× I try to find some dresses for me.

✓ I try to find some dresses for myself.

Use the reflexive pronoun 'myself' when the subject and object are the same person. 'For me' is not wrong but 'for myself' is more natural here.

× Ah yes I will. Uh, I usually wear different style on weekends and weekend weekends.

✓ Ah yes. I usually wear different styles on weekdays and weekends.

Repeating 'weekend' is redundant and 'different style' needs plural 'styles' to match context. Clarify both weekdays and weekends.

× On weekdays I I wear smart casual or office clothes because I need to look professional at work, for example AT shirt or dark trouser.

✓ On weekdays I wear smart-casual or office clothes because I need to look professional at work, for example a white shirt or dark trousers.

Fix double 'I', add article 'a' before 'white shirt', correct 'trouser' to plural 'trousers', and 'smart-casual' usually hyphenated. Ensure noun plurality matches context.

× On weekend I prefer comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirt because I want to relax and sometimes go for a walk.

✓ On weekends I prefer comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts because I want to relax and sometimes go for a walk.

Use plural 'weekends' to match habitual action and plural 'T-shirts' to match 'jeans'. Maintain parallel forms.

× I usually wear like dark colors like a Jean, a black and Navy, but I prefer to wear bright colors.

✓ I usually wear dark colors like jeans, black and navy, but I also like wearing bright colors.

Remove extra 'like' and fix capitalization ('navy' lowercase). 'Jean' should be 'jeans'. Rephrase for clarity and parallelism.

× But I find some practical and they go with almost everything so it is easy to get dressed in the morning for example.

✓ But I find darker colors practical because they go with almost everything, so it's easy to get dressed in the morning.

Sentence lacked a clear subject for 'practical' and had awkward order. Combine clauses and add 'because' to show reason.

× By afternoon wear a black jacket to work because it looks neat and professional for me.

✓ In the afternoon I wear a black jacket to work because it looks neat and professional for me.

Missing subject 'I' and incorrect phrase 'By afternoon wear'. Use 'In the afternoon I wear' for correct time expression and subject-verb structure.