Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and add a specific example to make the answer more vivid. Also avoid repeating the same idea (comfortable/lightweight) and keep within 2–3 sentences. Use a linking phrase to show reason.

예시: I prefer comfortable, lightweight clothes because they allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear breathable cotton shirts and slim joggers when I go for a walk or run errands.

제안: Clarify and correct contradictions (e.g., 'shorts and formal pants' is confusing). Keep sentences short and logical, use linking words like 'however' and give a clear rule for choices. Avoid repetition.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes; however, I dress smartly for professional events. For instance, for work meetings I wear tailored trousers and a shirt, but on weekends I choose jeans and a T‑shirt.

제안: Good simple answer. Improve by adding a brief example of when you wear T‑shirts and by linking reasons more naturally. Keep it to two sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, I wear T‑shirts often because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I usually pair a plain T‑shirt with chinos for casual dinners or with jeans when I hang out with friends.

제안: Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "I like to present myself as neat and tidy"). Be specific about your routine and keep it fluent. Use a linking phrase for the example.

예시: Yes, I do take time choosing clothes because I like to look neat and tidy. For example, before a party last week I spent about ten minutes deciding which shoes matched my outfit.

제안: Fix factual/style errors (don’t say 'shorts' for professional attire). Make the contrast clearer with a linking word (e.g., 'whereas' or 'but') and give one specific weekday and one weekend example.

예시: Yes, my style changes: on weekdays I wear smart clothes such as dress shirts and formal trousers for work, whereas at the weekend I wear casual items like jeans and a hoodie.

제안: Clear answer with a good example. Improve by varying vocabulary (use 'black clothing' not repetitive 'black colored') and by briefly explaining why black suits you (e.g., slimming, versatile). Keep it to two sentences if possible.

예시: I prefer black clothing because it looks simple, elegant and versatile. For instance, I wore an all‑black outfit to a recent party and received several compliments because it looked neat and flattering.

× If the event is a is of professional setting then I wear shorts and formal pants which is a professional attire and if the event is not very formal type then I wear casual comfortable clothes.

✓ If the event is of a professional setting, then I wear formal pants; if the event is not very formal, then I wear casual, comfortable clothes.

Errors: extra word 'is', incorrect plural/choice 'shorts and formal pants' conflicts with 'professional attire', and sentence flow. This is primarily a subject-verb agreement/structure and sentence structure issue. Suggestion: Remove the duplicate 'is', choose consistent clothing for professional settings (e.g., 'formal pants' rather than 'shorts and formal pants'), use commas to separate clauses and adjectives, and split or punctuate to improve clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts as they are really comfortable to wear and easy to move in.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are really comfortable and easy to move in.

The phrase 'comfortable to wear' is redundant; use 'comfortable' alone. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal connection. Keep 'easy to move in' as a complement. Suggestion: prefer concise adjective usage and clearer conjunctions.

× Also, I believe that T-shirts pair up with any kind of pants or clothing very well.

✓ Also, I believe that T-shirts pair well with any kind of pants or other clothing.

'Pair up with' is less natural than 'pair with' and word order 'very well' is better after verb phrase; use 'other clothing' for clarity. Suggestion: use the common collocation 'pair with' and place adverbs naturally.

× I'm a kind of person who likes to present, uh, myself as a very neat and tidy and will rest.

✓ I'm the kind of person who likes to present myself as very neat and tidy and who needs some rest.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear ('will rest' incorrect). Fix by using 'the kind of person' and a parallel relative clause 'who needs some rest' or omit rest if irrelevant. Suggestion: keep parallel structure in relative clauses and avoid filler words.

× For instance, I recently, uh, took nearly 10 minutes choosing what kind of shoes should I wear to a party.

✓ For instance, I recently took nearly 10 minutes choosing which shoes I should wear to a party.

In embedded questions, use statement word order ('which shoes I should wear'), not question word order ('should I wear'). Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: when embedding questions, keep subject before auxiliary.

× Weekdays usually requires professional attire, so I do so by wearing shorts and formal pants.

✓ Weekdays usually require professional attire, so I do so by wearing formal pants.

Subject 'Weekdays' is plural so verb should be 'require' not 'requires'. Also wearing 'shorts' contradicts 'professional attire'; remove 'shorts' for consistency. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and keep clothing choices consistent with described formality.

× But on weekends there is no such need, so I wear casual comfortable clothes which I feel are lightweight.

✓ But on weekends there is no such need, so I wear casual, comfortable clothes that I find lightweight.

Use 'that I find' or 'which I find' for clarity; comma between adjectives 'casual, comfortable'. 'Feel' is acceptable but 'find' is more natural for opinion about weight. Suggestion: punctuate adjective list and use clearer relative clause.

× I like wearing black colored clothes and they look neat, tidy, simple yet elegant.

✓ I like wearing black clothes because they look neat, tidy, simple yet elegant.

'Black colored clothes' is wordy; 'black clothes' is correct. Add 'because' to connect reason. Suggestion: prefer concise adjective + noun and use conjunctions to show cause.

× Also, I believe that black colored T-shirts or any clothing suits me very well.

✓ Also, I believe that black T-shirts or any black clothing suit me very well.

Remove 'colored' and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirts or any black clothing' is a plural compound subject, so use 'suit' not 'suits'. Suggestion: simplify adjective phrases and match verb to compound subjects.

× Recently I went to a party wearing all black clothes and I got compliments.

✓ Recently, I went to a party wearing all-black clothes and I received compliments.

'All black' as an adjective should be hyphenated 'all-black'. 'Got compliments' is informal; 'received compliments' is more appropriate in this register. Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns and choose more formal past-tense verbs when appropriate.