Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clear and use correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid invented words and keep sentences simple and grammatical. Mention fabrics and styles correctly (e.g., 'plain', 'simple', 'comfortable', 'cotton').

예시: I prefer to wear simple, plain clothes because they are comfortable and look neat. For example, I usually choose cotton shirts and loose trousers since I have sensitive skin and natural fabrics don't irritate me.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence and support it with one clear reason and an example. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'go to work', 'wear cotton shirts'). Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' once.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I go to work every day and need to move freely. For example, I usually wear cotton shirts and chinos so I stay comfortable throughout the day.

제안: Answer directly and use correct words. If you dislike T-shirts, say why with a clear reason and example. Avoid unintelligible words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they often feel too tight. Instead, I prefer loose polo shirts or lightweight shirts because they are more comfortable and breathable.

제안: Provide one clear reason and a brief example. Correct phrases (e.g., 'choosing clothes') and explain why you spend time choosing them. Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to avoid allergic reactions and I like to match colors. For instance, I often check fabric labels and try on outfits before buying.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and one or two specific contrasts between weekday and weekend styles, using linking words like 'while' or 'whereas'. Be specific about items you wear on each occasion.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress casually and comfortably for work, whereas on weekends I choose smarter or trendier outfits like jeans with a nice shirt when I go out.

제안: State your favourite colours clearly and give brief reasons why, using correct color names and grammar. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'for example' properly and avoid repetition.

예시: I like bright colours, especially red and pink, because they make me feel energetic and stand out. I also wear white and black as neutral options that match many outfits.

× I like to wear simple clothes like painting sod because it's comfortable and classy.

✓ I like to wear simple clothes like plain shirts because they are comfortable and classy.

The original uses incorrect nouns 'painting sod'. Likely intended 'plain shirts'. Also 'clothes' is plural so the pronoun should be 'they' not 'it'. Suggestion: replace wrong words with correct vocabulary and ensure pronoun agrees with plural noun. (Grammar problem mapped to ID 26: Sentence structure errors.)

× I don't want to wear too much clothes.

✓ I don't want to wear too many clothes.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'many' is used with plural countable nouns like 'clothes'. Also 'too many' fits the meaning. (Map to ID 22: Article errors and ID 26.)

× I have the skin problem so I just want to wear cotton clothes.

✓ I have a skin problem, so I prefer to wear cotton clothes.

Use 'a skin problem' (article required) and 'prefer to' is more natural than 'just want to'. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction. (ID 12.)

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I work, I go to I go on work every day, so I have to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes because I go to work every day, so I have to wear comfortable clothes.

Remove redundant phrases ('I work, I go to I go on work') and use correct collocation 'go to work'. Add comma between adjectives. (ID 26.)

× For example, ideally where cotton sort and paint.

✓ For example, ideally I wear cotton shirts and pants.

Original contains wrong words 'where', 'sort', 'paint'. Correct collocations are 'wear cotton shirts and pants'. (ID 13.)

× No, I don't like wearing desserts because I like wearing sores.

✓ No, I don't like wearing dresses because I prefer skirts.

'Desserts' (food) and 'sores' (wounds) are wrong words; likely intended 'dresses' and 'skirts'. Use 'prefer' for preference. (ID 26.)

× I feel sores is more comfortable than T-shirts.

✓ I find skirts more comfortable than T-shirts.

Use 'find' to express opinion and correct noun 'skirts'. Also compare two items directly. (ID 26.)

× If we were short, for example. If we were wear short, our hair will not.

✓ For example, if we wear shorts, our legs are free and our hair does not get in the way.

Original mixes conditional forms and wrong nouns. Use present simple in real conditional ('if we wear') and correct noun 'shorts'. Provide clear result clause with proper verb forms. (ID 26.)

× Yes, I spend a lot of time on choosing code because I am little too easy person.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am a rather easygoing person.

Use 'spend time doing' (no 'on'), 'clothes' not 'code', and include article 'a' with 'rather easygoing person'. (ID 11.)

× I don't like clothes.

✓ I don't care much about fashion.

'I don't like clothes' contradicts earlier statements; likely intended 'I don't care much about clothes' or 'fashion'. Use clearer expression. (ID 12.)

× Yes, I often use different style of clothes because I feel bored wearing same clothes everyday.

✓ Yes, I often wear different styles of clothes because I get bored wearing the same clothes every day.

Use 'wear' rather than 'use', plural 'styles', article 'the' before 'same clothes', and 'every day' as two words. (ID 26.)

× I like to be smart and cool by wearing new clothes every day.

✓ I like to look smart and cool by wearing new clothes every now and then.

'Look smart' is more natural than 'be smart' for appearance; wearing new clothes 'every day' is unlikely so 'every now and then' or 'often' is more natural. (ID 26.)

× I like wearing gum clothes because for example bright red, they are so much strong, strong color.

✓ I like wearing warm colors, for example bright red, because they are very strong colors.

'Gum clothes' is incorrect; likely 'warm colors'. Use plural 'colors' and 'very' instead of 'so much'. (ID 26.)

× I like wearing pink, white back color.

✓ I like wearing pink, white, and black.

Correct color words and list them with commas. 'Back' should be 'black'. (ID 26.)