Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), reduce repetition, and add a specific example or reason. Use linking words (for example, because) to make it coherent.

예시: I prefer wearing sportswear because it is comfortable and versatile. For example, when I meet friends for coffee or go for a walk, trainers and a hoodie let me move freely and feel relaxed.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, remove fillers and unclear phrasing ("easy to everyone"), and support with a specific reason or short example using linking words like because or so.

예시: I usually prefer casual clothes because they reflect my relaxed personality. For instance, wearing jeans and a neat sweater helps me feel approachable when I meet colleagues or friends.

제안: Keep the answer natural and give one specific detail rather than a number that sounds vague. Remove fillers and link your reason clearly using because or so.

예시: Yes, I love T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to style. For example, I usually wear a plain T-shirt with jeans when I hang out with friends because it looks relaxed but presentable.

제안: Make the answer complete and grammatically correct, avoid trailing off. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like because or so and avoid hesitations.

예시: Yes, I usually spend some time choosing clothes because first impressions matter. For example, when I meet a new client I pick neat, professional outfits so I appear competent and confident.

제안: Good clear contrast. Improve grammar and fluency: remove small errors, avoid repetition, and use linking words (however, whereas). Add a brief specific example of weekday vs weekend outfits.

예시: Yes. During weekdays I dress professionally because I work as a chemist and need to look serious—for example, I wear a shirt and smart trousers. On weekends I switch to casual clothes like jeans and a sweatshirt to relax.

제안: State your preference directly, avoid fillers and small grammar mistakes (prefer vs prefers). Give a specific reason why you like those colours and one short example using linking words (because, for instance).

예시: I usually prefer black or white because monochrome outfits look neat and fashionable. For example, a white T-shirt with black jeans feels simple but stylish and easy to match.

× I love to wear T-shirts and in fact there are at least 5 T-shirts in my wardrobe.

✓ I love to wear T-shirts and in fact there are at least five T-shirts in my wardrobe.

Use of numerals vs words is stylistic, not a grammar error; however the sentence is fine for 'there be' construction. No change necessary except spelling out numbers in formal speech. Suggest writing 'five' instead of '5' for formality and consistency.

× I like to wear sports clothes because it's very comfortable and in a lot of, uh, occasions, I find it's very appropriate to wear sports clothes to, uh, the occasions.

✓ I like to wear sports clothes because they are very comfortable, and on many occasions I find they are very appropriate.

The subject 'sports clothes' is plural so use plural pronouns and verbs ('they are' not 'it is'). Also 'in a lot of occasions' is incorrect preposition and quantifier use; use 'on many occasions'. Removed redundant 'to the occasions'.

× I would generally prefer to wear casual clothes because in general I think clothes captures the mood of, uh, someone.

✓ I would generally prefer to wear casual clothes because in general I think clothes capture someone's mood.

The noun 'clothes' is plural so the verb should be plural: 'capture' not 'captures'. Also use the possessive 'someone's' to show whose mood is meant.

× And I like to wear casual clothes because I tend to be very easy to everyone around me and and to be kind.

✓ And I like to wear casual clothes because I tend to be very easygoing with everyone around me and to be kind.

'Easy to everyone' is incorrect collocation; use 'easygoing with' or 'easy on'. Removed duplicated 'and'. 'Easygoing' is an adjective describing attitude toward others.

× So uh, if I'm meeting with my friends or with my loved ones, I always wear T-shirts to umm, keep it casual and to be comfortable with what I wear.

✓ So, if I'm meeting my friends or my loved ones, I always wear T-shirts to keep things casual and to be comfortable with what I wear.

Original is mostly correct but 'to keep it casual' is fine; changed to 'keep things casual' for naturalness. 'Meeting with' is acceptable but 'meeting' is more idiomatic here.

× I do spend a lot of time to choose my clothes because I believe clothing is one of the things that could make an impact on my first impression if I'm meeting with someone new and if I don't make a smart decisions on choosing clothes, I will have a.

✓ I do spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I believe clothing is one of the things that can affect my first impression when I meet someone new, and if I don't make smart decisions about clothing, I will have a bad impression.

Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. 'Make an impact on my first impression' is awkward; use 'affect my first impression'. 'Meeting with someone' -> 'meet someone'. 'A smart decisions' has article/number mismatch; use 'smart decisions'. Added missing end 'bad impression' to complete sentence.

× Yes, definitely. When I am at weekday I have to work as a chemist so I have to wear clothes to look professional.

✓ Yes, definitely. On weekdays I have to work as a chemist, so I have to wear clothes that look professional.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'at weekday'. Added 'that' for clarity and changed 'to look professional' to 'that look professional' for correct clause modifying 'clothes'.

× However, in weekend I will tend to you wear casual clothes because it's more comfortable for me.

✓ However, on weekends I tend to wear casual clothes because they're more comfortable for me.

Use 'on weekends' not 'in weekend'. Remove stray 'you'. Use simple present 'tend to wear' rather than future 'will tend to' for habitual actions. Match plural 'clothes' with plural pronoun 'they're'.

× I generally, uh, prefers to wear black or white T-shirts or trousers.

✓ I generally prefer to wear black or white T-shirts or trousers.

Subject 'I' requires base form 'prefer' not 'prefers' (third person singular error). Removed filler comma.

× I believe it is a trendy and stylish to wear, uh, mono color, uh, clothings and uh, I enjoy wearing T-shirts with those colors.

✓ I believe it is trendy and stylish to wear monochromatic clothing, and I enjoy wearing T-shirts in those colors.

'A trendy and stylish' incorrect article with adjectives; remove 'a'. 'Mono color' -> 'monochromatic'. 'Clothings' is uncountable 'clothing' not plural. 'In those colors' is more natural than 'with those colors'.