Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and direct, but you can improve by adding one specific reason and a linking phrase to make it more natural and informative. Avoid saying the same idea twice (comfortable and convenient are similar); instead give a short example or context.

예시: I love wearing T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I usually wear them when I go shopping or meet friends at a café because they suit informal activities.

제안: This answer is unclear and contains hesitations and errors. Give a direct topic sentence, then a clear reason with a relevant example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid filler phrases and incorrect metaphors (e.g., 'move in the clouds').

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. For example, when I have a busy day of walking and meetings, I choose sneakers and jeans so I can stay comfortable all day.

제안: The response is confusing with word choice errors ('dishes', 'teachers') and hesitations. State a clear opinion and correct vocabulary. Use one or two specific contexts and a linking word to explain frequency or suitability.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. I usually wear them to school and work because they are suitable for most seasons and easy to layer with a jacket when it gets colder.

제안: Your idea is good, but the sentence is incomplete and a bit repetitive. Provide a full reason and finish the thought. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'because', and give a specific example of what you consider when choosing clothes.

예시: I do spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions, especially for weddings or presentations, because I want to look professional and make a good impression. For example, I might choose a tailored shirt and dark trousers for a presentation.

제안: Good structure and contrast, but reduce hesitations and be more specific about the weekend activities. Use linking phrases like 'On weekdays' and 'On weekends' and give a short example of each style.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear formal clothes such as white shirts and dress trousers for work. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like T-shirts and jeans for activities such as meeting friends or running errands.

제안: Your answer gives relevant information but has vague vocabulary ('almost colors', 'dry color') and hesitations. Be specific about preferred colors and link them to occasions. Use words like 'depending on' and give clear examples.

예시: I like a range of colors depending on the occasion. For weddings I usually choose elegant shades like navy or deep green, while for school I often wear white shirts because they look neat and professional.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it is.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are comfortable.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'clothes' (plural); use 'they' and match verb form 'are'. Also 'comfortable' should be explicit rather than leaving sentence incomplete.

× I don't know how to explain but I mean we can easy easily move in the clouds and can be.

✓ I don't know how to explain, but I mean we can move easily and be comfortable.

Word order and word choice are incorrect. 'Easy' should be the adverb 'easily' and it should follow the verb 'move'. The phrase 'in the clouds and can be' is ungrammatical and should be rephrased to 'and be comfortable' to convey the intended meaning.

× I love wearing this.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and not a correct substitute; specify the clothing item. The sentence itself is fine structurally but needs the correct object.

× Uh, I usually wear dishes to uh, go to school or to work and teachers can be worn all year round.

✓ I usually wear shirts to go to school or to work; T-shirts can be worn all year round.

'Dishes' is the wrong word; 'shirts' or 'T-shirts' is correct. The original also mixes subjects: 'teachers can be worn' is incorrect; change to 'T-shirts can be worn'. Split into two clauses for clarity.

× I spend much of time to choose clothes, especially in the special occasions for a simple wedding or the day that I have a presentation, uh, because I would like to be very.

✓ I spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially on special occasions like a wedding or the day I have a presentation, because I want to look my best.

Use 'a lot of time' (not 'much of time') and use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. Preposition 'on' is used with 'occasions'. 'Simple wedding' is awkward; 'a wedding' or 'a small wedding' works. The final fragment 'because I would like to be very' is incomplete; complete idea with 'want to look my best'.

× Yes, definitely. Uh, on weekdays when I go to work I wear white formal clothes and on weekends I wear comfortable and casual clothes for the weekends activities like uh, this.

✓ Yes, definitely. On weekdays when I go to work I wear white formal clothes, and on weekends I wear comfortable, casual clothes for weekend activities like going out or relaxing.

'Weekends activities' should be 'weekend activities' (adjective form). 'Comfortable and casual clothes' is redundant; 'comfortable, casual clothes' is clearer. End phrase 'like uh, this' is vague; give examples such as 'going out or relaxing'.

× Uh, I like almost colors.

✓ I like almost all colors.

Missing 'all' after 'almost' when referring to 'colors'. The correct phrase is 'almost all colors'.

× It depends on the occasions that I wear.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

'Occasions' is unnecessary plural and the clause 'that I wear' is ungrammatical; say 'It depends on the occasion' or 'It depends on the occasion I'm dressing for'.

× For example, when I go to the wedding, I will choose the elegant and dry color.

✓ For example, when I go to a wedding, I will choose an elegant, muted color.

Use article 'a wedding' not 'the wedding' unless specific. 'The elegant and dry color' is awkward: 'dry' is wrong descriptor for color; use 'muted' or 'subtle'. Also use 'an elegant, muted color'.

× When I go to school, I will, uh, wear the white.

✓ When I go to school, I usually wear white.

'The white' is incorrect; use 'white' as an uncountable color adjective or say 'a white shirt'. 'Will' is unnecessary for habitual action; use 'usually wear'.