Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more coherent and complete your sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (e.g., plural/singular, articles).

예시: I prefer wearing western clothes, such as shorts and T-shirts, because they are lightweight and practical. For example, when I do housework or go for a walk, these clothes keep me cool and allow free movement.

제안: Make a single clear statement then support it with a specific reason and example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and complete your clauses. Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they are lighter and allow me to move freely. For example, when I need to run errands or work at home, I usually wear a T-shirt and shorts so I can be more productive.

제안: Give a concise direct answer followed by a specific reason and an example. Correct small grammatical errors and avoid fragments. Use one linking word to connect idea and reason.

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are lightweight and comfortable. For instance, I often wear a T-shirt when I go jogging since it doesn't restrict my movements.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve by adding a brief linking phrase and one specific example of how you choose items to show detail. Watch small grammar (sometimes) and plural forms.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I'm not very picky. Usually I pick two or three colors I like—most often black, white, or sometimes maroon—so I quickly choose similar items when shopping.

제안: Keep the answer concise and add a linking word to explain why. Fix awkward phrasing and avoid vague words like "those stylish." Provide one concrete contrast or example.

예시: No, I usually wear the same simple style on weekdays and weekends because comfort matters more to me. For example, I often wear T-shirts and shorts both at work-from-home days and on weekends because they are breathable and easy to wear.

제안: Begin with a direct statement of your preference, then give specific examples and a reason. Avoid repetition and improve sentence cohesion with linking words. Correct articles and plurals (a shorts → shorts).

예시: I like a variety of colours, but my favourite is black, so I usually buy black clothes. For example, I might choose different colours for a suit and for casual shorts and T-shirts, but black is my go-to choice for everyday wear.

× They are light and you can work in wearing this.

✓ They are light and you can work while wearing them.

The original uses incorrect structure 'work in wearing this.' Use 'while wearing them' to indicate doing something at the same time as wearing clothes and match plural 'them' for 'shorts and T-shirts.' Use 'while' + verb-ing for simultaneous actions.

× I feel comfortable wearing shorts and T-shirt because.

✓ I feel comfortable wearing shorts and T-shirts.

The original ends with an incomplete clause 'because.' Remove the dangling conjunction and make the sentence complete. Also make 'T-shirt' plural to match 'shorts.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes 'cause they are lighter in weight and I feel comfortable in shorts and T-shirt.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are lighter in weight and I feel comfortable in shorts and T-shirts.

Replace informal ''cause' with 'because' for standard grammar and clarity. Make 'T-shirt' plural to match 'shorts.'

× Because you can do any of your work you don't feel like your clothes are.

✓ Because you can do your work without feeling restricted by your clothes.

Original sentence is fragmented and ends abruptly 'your clothes are.' Recast to complete the idea: you can do work without feeling restricted by your clothes. Use clear subject and predicate.

× Yes, I absolutely like to wear T-shirts because they are lighter in weight and I do not.

✓ Yes, I absolutely like to wear T-shirts because they are lighter in weight and I do not feel restricted by them.

Original ends abruptly 'and I do not.' Complete the comparison by adding 'feel restricted by them.' This clarifies what the speaker does not do.

× I don't feel like I am restricted so I enjoy wearing T-shirts.

✓ I don't feel restricted, so I enjoy wearing T-shirts.

Phrase 'feel like I am restricted' is wordy. Use 'feel restricted' for natural phrasing; add comma before 'so' to join clauses correctly.

× I am not that picky.

✓ I am not that picky.

No change needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Included here to show no correction required.

× I just go and choose two or three colors.

✓ I just go and choose two or three colors.

Sentence is acceptable. No change needed.

× I know that my favorite color is black and white, sometime maroon, so I buy the same.

✓ I know that my favorite colors are black and white, sometimes maroon, so I buy those colors.

Use plural 'colors' to match multiple items and 'sometimes' adverb. Replace vague 'the same' with 'those colors' for clarity.

× No, I don't wear a different style of clothes on weekends or weekdays.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekends or weekdays.

Use plural 'styles' to match general meaning and 'on weekends or weekdays' is fine; plural better fits.

× I like to style simple.

✓ I like to dress simply.

'Style simple' is incorrect collocation. Use 'dress simply' (verb 'dress' + adverb 'simply') to express preference for simple clothing style.

× I use comfortable clothes mostly, which are T-shirts and shorts.

✓ I mostly wear comfortable clothes, which are T-shirts and shorts.

Use 'wear' rather than 'use' for clothes. Move adverb 'mostly' before verb for natural word order.

× I feel breathable in them and I'm more comfortable in those, so I'm not those stylish.

✓ I feel comfortable and cool in them, and I'm not very stylish.

'Feel breathable' is incorrect; use 'feel comfortable and cool.' 'I'm not those stylish' is ungrammatical — use 'I'm not very stylish'.

× Well I like different colors like every dress needs to be in a different color.

✓ Well, I like different colors; I think every outfit should be a different color.

Run-on and awkward phrasing. Add punctuation and rephrase 'dress needs to be in a different color' to 'every outfit should be a different color' for clarity.

× If I'm buying a suit I'll go for a different color or if I'm buying a shorts and T-shirts I'll go for a different color.

✓ If I'm buying a suit I'll choose a different color, or if I'm buying shorts and T-shirts I'll choose different colors.

Remove article 'a' before 'shorts' (plural). Use parallel verbs 'choose' and match singular/plural: 'a suit' -> 'a different color'; 'shorts and T-shirts' -> 'different colors.'

× But black is my favorite color. Usually I buy black clothes.

✓ But black is my favorite color. Usually I buy black clothes.

Sentence is correct; 'clothes' plural is appropriate. Included to confirm no change needed.