Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons or examples using linking words (because, so, for example). Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms (e.g. "comfortable clothes", "feel comfortable").

예시: I usually prefer comfortable clothes, such as T-shirts and trousers, rather than formal outfits. For example, when I wear a T-shirt I can concentrate better because I don't feel restricted by tight clothing.

제안: Give a short direct answer then support with one clear reason. Correct grammar ("comfortable clothes", "if you are comfortable, you perform better"). Use a linking word like "because" to connect reason.

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes. Because I feel more relaxed in casual clothes, I can focus better on my studies and work.

제안: Answer directly and give specific details without filler words. Fix grammar and vocabulary ("I like T-shirts because they are lightweight and keep me cool"). Use one linking phrase like "especially in".

예시: Yes, I do. I like T-shirts because they are lightweight and keep me cool, especially in summer when I wear them most often.

제안: Be concise and avoid awkward phrasing. Give one reason and a short example. Use correct structures: "I don't spend much time choosing clothes because..."

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer to use my time for work and hobbies. For example, I usually pick an outfit in five minutes before leaving home.

제안: Clarify and correct vocabulary ("weekdays and weekends"). Give one clear contrast with specific examples and avoid numbers or typos like "1000". Use linking words: "whereas", "while", "so".

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I wear smart clothes for school or college, whereas on weekends I usually stay at home and wear jeans and T-shirts.

제안: Give a direct answer and one or two specific reasons or examples. Correct grammar ("My favourite colour is black") and remove unclear phrases ("true to wear"). Use linking words like "because" and a short example of occasions.

예시: My favourite colour is black because it looks smart and goes with everything. For example, I often wear black at parties or important events because it feels elegant.

× Well, most of the time I like to wear a comfortable clothes like that to wear a T-shirt or trousers rather than formal or uncomfortable clothes.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to wear comfortable clothes, for example a T-shirt or trousers, rather than formal or uncomfortable clothes.

The noun 'clothes' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular adjective phrase 'a comfortable'. Remove 'a' and use 'comfortable clothes'. Also rephrase for clarity: 'like that to wear' is awkward, so replace with 'for example'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Of course, I feel if you are feel comfortable so you perform well and you are you are more protective than whenever you wear uncomfortable clothes.

✓ Of course, I feel that if you are comfortable you perform well and feel more confident than when you wear uncomfortable clothes.

Redundant 'feel' and duplicate 'you are' should be removed. Use 'that' to introduce the clause. 'Protective' is incorrect in this context; 'confident' fits. Use 'when' rather than 'whenever' for a single general statement. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes and casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes.

Do not use the article 'a' before the plural noun 'clothes'. Combine adjectives and remove redundancy for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I believe if you are comfortable and comfortable by your outfits so you perform well in your studies and the work rather than wearing a smart clothes.

✓ I believe that if you are comfortable in your outfit, you will perform better in your studies and work than if you wear smart clothes that make you uncomfortable.

Sentence was ungrammatical and repetitive ('comfortable and comfortable by your outfits'). Insert 'that' for the content clause, use 'comfortable in your outfit' and correct comparison structure with 'than if'. Use 'will perform better' for clarity and remove 'a' before 'smart clothes'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes I do. I like the most very T-shirt because the T-shirt are the light fit and it is very uh cold.

✓ Yes, I do. I like T-shirts the most because they are lightweight and keep me cool.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the T-shirt are' is incorrect; use plural 'they are' for T-shirts. 'The most very' is wrong order; 'like X the most' is correct. 'Light fit' and 'very uh cold' are incorrect collocations; use 'lightweight' and 'keep me cool'. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× So whenever I wear a T-shirt so I will feel pleasure and most of the time in the summer season I prefer to wear up T-shirts.

✓ So whenever I wear a T-shirt I feel comfortable, and during the summer I prefer to wear T-shirts.

Remove redundant 'so' after 'whenever'. 'Feel pleasure' is unnatural here; use 'feel comfortable'. 'In the summer season' can be simplified to 'during the summer'. 'Wear up T-shirts' is incorrect; use 'wear T-shirts'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× No, I don't spend a lot of time in the choosing clothes because I believe spending time on choosing clothes it's a waste of time and so I feel to use my time more in my work and my other activities rather than choosing clothes.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I believe it is a waste of time; I prefer to spend my time on work and other activities rather than choosing clothes.

Do not use 'in the choosing clothes'; use the gerund 'choosing clothes' without a preposition. 'Spending time on choosing clothes it's' is ungrammatical; use 'I believe it is a waste of time'. Use 'prefer to spend my time on' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× Yes I wear a different style clothes on weekend and weekends because weekends most of the time I stay the home so I wear 1000 and T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends because most of the time I stay at home, so I wear jeans and T-shirts.

Use plural 'weekends' and 'different styles of clothes'. 'Stay the home' should be 'stay at home'. '1000 and T-shirt' seems to be a typo; likely 'jeans and T-shirts'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× So weekdays I want to to visit my school or the college so by this I need to wear a formal clothes.

✓ On weekdays I go to school or college, so I need to wear formal clothes.

Use 'On weekdays'. Remove duplicate 'to'. 'Visit my school or the college' is unnatural; use 'go to school or college'. 'A formal clothes' is incorrect: no 'a' before plural 'clothes'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I like the most true to wear clothes and black colour, my favorite colour since the childhood and I always prefer to wearing a black cloth whenever I want to attain a big parties or the big occasion of someone.

✓ I like to wear black clothes the most; black has been my favorite color since childhood, and I always prefer to wear black clothes when I attend large parties or important occasions.

'The most true to wear clothes' is incorrect and was rephrased to 'I like to wear black clothes the most'. Use 'black has been my favorite color since childhood' (no 'the'). 'Prefer to wearing' should be 'prefer to wear' or 'prefer wearing'. Use 'attend' rather than 'attain', and pluralize 'parties' and use 'important occasions'. Grammar problem type ID: 11