Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., “worse when my old parts are open”), and give one or two specific details about styles or fabrics. Use linking words if you add a reason.

예시: I like wearing clothes that are both comfortable and attractive. For example, I often choose soft cotton dresses or tailored blouses because they look neat and feel comfortable, and I usually prefer outfits that cover my arms and legs for modesty.

제안: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with a clear example. Reduce hesitations and repetition. Use linking words like “but” or “however” when contrasting preferences.

예시: It depends on the occasion: I usually wear casual clothes day-to-day, but I dress smartly for work or formal events. For instance, I wear a blazer and smart trousers when I go to the office.

제안: Answer directly and provide a concise reason with one example. Avoid fillers and small hesitations. Use a linking word when listing options (e.g., “or” / “and”).

예시: Yes, I do. T-shirts are versatile and easy to style; for example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a casual look or tuck it into a skirt with a blazer for a smarter outfit.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one specific condition when you spend more time choosing clothes. Avoid vague endings like “I wear something.” Use linking words like “unless” or “however.”

예시: Not usually — I tend to wear the first suitable outfit I find. However, if I have an important event, I will spend more time selecting a complete outfit and matching accessories.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason and one specific example of weekend vs weekday outfits. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

예시: Not really, because I’m currently not working so my weekdays and weekends are similar and mostly casual. For example, I usually wear jeans and a sweatshirt both during the week and on weekends.

제안: Good answer — direct and specific. To improve further, add a brief reason why you prefer those colours or give one example of how you use them.

예시: I prefer pastel colours, white and black because they are easy to match and look fresh. I especially love green — for example, I own several green shirts and dresses because the colour suits my complexion.

× I, I like wearing different, uh, clothes.

✓ I like wearing different kinds of clothes.

Use of 'different' needs a noun like 'kinds' after it; 'wearing' is correct. Suggest adding 'kinds of' to make the noun phrase complete and sound natural.

× I like beautiful ones and, uh, comfortable, uh, I don't like worse when my old parts are open like uh, arms, legs, so I like to cover my body.

✓ I like beautiful and comfortable clothes. I don't like it when my private parts, like my arms or legs, are exposed, so I prefer to cover my body.

Multiple issues: adjectives should modify 'clothes' directly; 'worse' is incorrect here—use 'it' + clause 'when...are exposed'. 'Old parts' is wrong noun choice; 'private parts' or simply 'arms and legs' with 'exposed' fits. Rephrase into two sentences for clarity.

× Uh, for me it depends on uh, situation for, for what event I did to wear or for what occasion.

✓ For me, it depends on the situation or the event and what I should wear for the occasion.

Original has awkward word order and incorrect tense 'did to wear'. Use present simple 'depends' and rephrase to 'what I should wear' to match meaning. Remove filler words.

× For example, for yeah, I prefer look smart for work or working or when I go to office and.

✓ For example, I prefer to look smart for work or when I go to the office.

Use infinitive 'to look' after 'prefer'. 'Go to office' needs definite article 'the office'. Remove redundant 'working' and trailing 'and'.

× Yes, uh, of course it's quite popular piece of clothes.

✓ Yes, of course it's quite a popular piece of clothing.

Countable/uncountable and article: 'piece of clothing' is correct singular phrase and needs the indefinite article 'a'. 'Clothes' is plural; use 'clothing' for singular 'piece'.

× I think that you could combine it with everything and it's common for everyone.

✓ I think you can combine it with anything, and it's common for everyone.

'Could' is acceptable but 'can' is more natural here. Use 'anything' instead of 'everything' after 'combine with'. Minor style change.

× You know, you can, uh, wear it's it with uh, smart clothes or with jeans, uh.

✓ You know, you can wear it with smart clothes or with jeans.

'Wear it's it' is incorrect duplication; use 'wear it'. Remove fillers and extra punctuation.

× Not really, I usually wear what I see the 1st and if it's something important of course I will spend more time to choose the exact clothes for the event or occasion, but usually I wear something.

✓ Not really. I usually wear the first thing I see, and if it's something important, of course I will spend more time choosing the exact clothes for the event or occasion.

Run-on sentence and awkward phrasing 'what I see the 1st'. Use 'the first thing I see' and 'spend more time choosing' (no 'to'). Remove redundant ending 'but usually I wear something'.

× Not really. Uh, uh, I'm not working right now. So for me it's, uh, the same days. Uh, I don't need to to choose something specific For weekdays though, yeah, it's mostly casual clothes.

✓ Not really. I'm not working right now, so my days are the same. I don't need to choose anything specific for weekdays; I mostly wear casual clothes.

Fix repetition 'to to', capitalize 'For' incorrectly, and smooth sentence flow. Use 'my days are the same' and 'choose anything specific' for natural English.

× Of course it depends on my mood, but I like wearing pastel colors, white and black as well.

✓ Of course it depends on my mood, but I like wearing pastel colors, as well as white and black.

Add 'as well as' for parallel listing and smoother phrasing when listing colors.

× I really love green colors, all kinds of green, so I have a lot of clothes in this color.

✓ I really love green, all shades of green, so I have a lot of clothes in that color.

'Green colors' is redundant; use 'green' or 'shades of green'. 'In that color' refers back to green more naturally than 'in this color' in context.