Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and correct verb forms. Provide one specific example of comfortable clothing and a brief reason using a linking word.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because my activities involve a lot of movement. For example, I often wear stretchy joggers or breathable sports tops, so I can move freely when I have to walk or carry things.

제안: Good structure and relevance. Improve pronunciation and fluency by removing hesitations and tightening phrasing. Use a linking word to contrast and provide a short specific example for each situation.

예시: It depends on the situation: for school or formal events I prefer smart clothes, such as a blazer and chinos; however, when I hang out with friends I usually choose comfortable items like jeans and a hoodie.

제안: Make the answer more natural and correct grammar (avoid repetition). Use one clear reason and a concise example, and replace vague phrases with precise language.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For instance, a plain T-shirt is easy to pair with jeans, so I don't have to think much when getting dressed.

제안: Be direct and correct word order. Remove filler words and give a specific detail about how you organise or why it takes time. Use a linking word to explain consequence.

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because my wardrobe is crowded; therefore I often have to search through many items to find what I want, which can take ten to fifteen minutes.

제안: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. State the contrast clearly and add a precise example of weekend style. Finish your idea about ‘shows my identity’ with a concrete detail.

예시: Definitely. On weekdays I wear my school uniform, but at the weekend I wear casual clothes that express my personality, such as graphic T-shirts and ripped jeans.

제안: Correct grammar and word choice, and avoid awkward claims. Say why you prefer the colour with a realistic reason and a concise example. Use linking words for clarity.

예시: I usually prefer white because it looks clean and neat; for example, I often choose a white shirt for presentations since it appears tidy and professional.

× I like clothes that makes me comfortable to wear because, uh, I may have a lot of work that allows active movement.

✓ I like clothes that make me comfortable to wear because, uh, I may have a lot of work that allows active movement.

The relative clause 'that make me comfortable' refers to 'clothes' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Ensure the verb agrees with the plural subject: clothes + make. Suggestion: Identify the subject of the clause (clothes) and use the plural verb form.

× So comfortable clothes can allows these kind of high extend movements.

✓ So comfortable clothes can allow this kind of large-range movement.

After a modal-like auxiliary 'can', the base form of the verb should be used: 'allow' not 'allows'. Also 'these kind of' is incorrect with singular/plural and 'high extend movements' is unidiomatic. Suggest using 'this kind of' with a singular noun or 'these kinds of' with plural; use 'large-range movement' or 'wide movements' for clarity.

× I guess it depends on the situation.

✓ I guess it depends on the situation.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context; no change needed. Included for completeness: keep as is.

× When it's at school or in a more in a formal occasion I would prefer smart clothes.

✓ When I'm at school or on a more formal occasion, I would prefer smart clothes.

Incorrect prepositions and redundant words: use 'I'm at school' (not 'it's at school'), and 'on a formal occasion' or 'at a formal occasion' is correct; remove the extra 'in a'. Also add a comma before the main clause for clarity.

× But if it's just daily hang out with friends I usually wear more comfortable clothes.

✓ But if I'm just hanging out with friends, I usually wear more comfortable clothes.

Tense and verb form: use 'I'm hanging out' (present continuous) or 'I just hang out' (habitual). 'Daily hang out' is awkward; 'just hanging out with friends' is natural. Add a comma after the subordinate clause.

× I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts are just comfortable to wear and it's the most basic form so that I don't need to choose or add other set necessaries.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and they are the most basic option, so I don't need to choose or add other necessary items.

Pronoun and repetition: replace redundant 'T-shirts are just comfortable to wear' with 'they are comfortable'. Use 'option' instead of 'form', and 'necessary items' instead of 'set necessaries'. Ensure pronoun agreement (they for T-shirts) and use base nouns correctly.

× Oh I would say definitely because I bought too many clothes in my wardrobe, so it takes time for me to find the clothes that I have already ideally want to wear.

✓ Oh, I would say definitely, because I have bought too many clothes for my wardrobe, so it takes time for me to find the clothes I ideally want to wear.

Tense and word order: use present perfect 'have bought' to link past action with present result. 'In my wardrobe' sounds odd; 'for my wardrobe' or 'in my wardrobe' can work but 'for' is clearer. Remove 'that I have already ideally want to wear' and use 'I ideally want to wear' or 'that I want to wear' for correct word order and verb forms.

× But when on weekends it's my free time and my holiday so I can wear what I want and I usually wear the clothes that shows my identity and it's.

✓ But on weekends it's my free time and my holiday, so I can wear what I want, and I usually wear clothes that show my identity.

Remove extra 'when' and fix subject-verb agreement: 'clothes that show' (clothes plural -> show). Delete the trailing 'and it's' which is incomplete. Add commas to separate clauses.

× I usually like to wear in white because I think that white gives people a sense of cleaning this but tidiness so that white actually shows that I'm smarter.

✓ I usually like to wear white because I think that white gives people a sense of cleanliness and tidiness, so white actually makes me look smarter.

Preposition error: do not use 'wear in white'; use 'wear white'. 'Cleaning this' is incorrect; use 'cleanliness'. Also 'shows that I'm smarter' is awkward—use 'makes me look smarter' for natural expression. Improve word choice and conjunctions for clarity.