Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your reply a clear topic sentence, correct basic grammar (verb forms, countable nouns), and give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it under five sentences. For example, say what types of clothes you prefer, then explain when and why with specific items and reasons.

예시: I usually wear casual clothes like T-shirts and sweaters because they are comfortable. However, when I go out with friends I sometimes choose more fashionable outfits such as a smart jacket or stylish jeans to look nicer. For studying or attending classes I prefer simple, practical clothes so I can focus on my work.

제안: Start with a direct answer (preference) and then use linking words (but, because, when) to explain. Fix verb forms and word choice (clothes not closer). Be specific about situations and give a short reason.

예시: I prefer smart clothes for formal occasions because they make a good impression. But for casual situations, such as hanging out with friends, I choose fashionable casual clothes. When I go to school I usually wear simple, comfortable clothes so I can concentrate on studying.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar (plural/singular, pronouns). Clarify the second idea—avoid confusing statements about dresses. Give one reason with a specific example and link ideas with because or so.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they help me feel relaxed and comfortable during outdoor activities like hiking or picnics. I usually avoid dresses for active outings because they can be restrictive and less practical.

제안: Give a concise answer and explain with specific reasons and a clear sequence. Correct grammar (I spend time choosing clothes; many options). Use linking phrases (for example, when, such as) and avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to pick an appropriate outfit for different activities. For example, I choose more fashionable clothes for going out with friends, comfortable clothes for studying, and something casual for going to the cinema.

제안: Answer directly and organize the reply: state the difference, then give specific examples for weekdays and weekends with reasons. Fix vocabulary (jeans, casual/coastal confusion) and avoid incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes like jeans, T-shirts and a sweater because I need practical outfits for studying and commuting. On weekends I prefer more fashionable outfits, such as a nicer jacket or trendy shoes, for meeting friends.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence about your favourite colours, then give specific reasons and comparisons. Correct word choices (clothes, match, bright instead of heavy). Use linking words (however, also) and one example of how you wear those colours.

예시: I usually prefer black and white because they are easy to match with other clothes and look neat. However, I also like bright, colorful clothes sometimes because they feel energetic; for example, I wear a colorful T-shirt when I want to look lively at a party.

× I prefer wear the closer like AT shirt and a sweater and sometime I choose the fashionable when I when I hang out with friends.

✓ I prefer wearing clothes like T-shirts and a sweater, and sometimes I choose fashionable clothes when I hang out with friends.

The verb 'prefer' is normally followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when describing general preferences. 'Closer' is a misspelling of 'clothes' and 'AT shirt' is unclear; likely 'T-shirt' is intended. Use 'sometimes' instead of 'sometime', and place 'when I hang out with friends' at the end for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'prefer + -ing' (prefer wearing), correct spelling to 'clothes' and 'T-shirt', and keep consistent word order.

× But when I study I choose some simple closer because I think is having comfortable and useful to choose.

✓ But when I study, I choose simple clothes because I think they are comfortable and practical.

The sentence needs correct subject-verb agreement and proper adjective use. 'Closer' should be 'clothes'. 'I think is having comfortable' is ungrammatical — use 'they are comfortable'. 'Useful to choose' is awkward; 'practical' or 'comfortable and practical' fits better. Add commas for clarity.

× In my opinion I choose wear smart closer because I think is a depend the case.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer to wear smart clothes because I think it depends on the case.

Use 'prefer to wear' or 'prefer wearing' rather than 'choose wear'. 'Closer' → 'clothes'. 'Is a depend the case' should be 'it depends on the case' to use correct verb and preposition. Add comma after introductory phrase.

× When I hang out with friends I choose a more fashionable closer and when I study, go to school I will choose simple closer.

✓ When I hang out with friends, I choose more fashionable clothes, and when I study or go to school, I choose simple clothes.

Use 'clothes' not 'closer'. 'A more fashionable closer' is incorrect article and noun form; drop 'a' and pluralize. 'Will choose' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use present simple 'choose'. Add commas to separate clauses.

× I am a big fan of T-shirt because I think it's help me feel relax and comfortable when I have outdoor activity and I think is useful to me.

✓ I am a big fan of T-shirts because I think they help me feel relaxed and comfortable during outdoor activities, and I think they are useful to me.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statement. 'It's help' is wrong; use 'they help'. 'Feel relax' should be 'feel relaxed'. 'Outdoor activity' → 'outdoor activities'. 'I think is useful' requires subject 'they are'.

× I don't like her wear dress because I think it's if you were stressed.

✓ I don't like to wear dresses because I think they are uncomfortable if you are stressed.

Original sentence uses incorrect pronoun 'her' and wrong structure 'her wear dress'. Use 'to wear dresses' or 'wearing dresses'. Clarify meaning: likely dresses feel uncomfortable when stressed. 'It's if you were stressed' is ungrammatical; use 'they are uncomfortable if you are stressed'.

× Absolutely, I spend a lot of time to choose closer because I have many option to choose every day when I hang out with friends or I study or I am watching cinema, go to cinema and Saturday I think which is more option to choose.

✓ Absolutely, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have many options to choose from every day when I hang out with friends, study, or go to the cinema; at the weekend I think there are more options to choose from.

Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time'. 'Closer' → 'clothes'. 'Option' should be plural 'options' and add 'to choose from'. Simplify list and correct 'watching cinema' to 'go to the cinema'. 'Saturday I think which is more option' is unclear; interpret as 'at the weekend there are more options'. Use semicolon or commas for clarity.

× I wear different style of clothes on weekdays and at the weekend.

✓ I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and at the weekend.

Use plural 'styles' when referring to different kinds. 'At the weekend' is acceptable for British English; keep consistent. Also add plural for agreement between 'different' and 'styles'.

× During the week I usually choose comfortable coastal clothes like Jean T-shirt and a sweater because I want to practice, go and relax for the weekend.

✓ During the week I usually choose comfortable casual clothes like jeans, T-shirts, and a sweater because I want to study, go out, and relax for the weekend.

'Coastal' is likely a typo for 'casual' and 'Jean' should be 'jeans'. Use plural nouns for general items: 'jeans, T-shirts'. 'Practice' is unclear; likely 'study' or 'exercise' depending on meaning — choose 'study' here to match earlier context. Use parallel verbs 'study, go out, and relax'.

× I prefer more fashionable outfit for example.

✓ For example, I prefer more fashionable outfits.

Use plural 'outfits' for general preference. Place 'for example' at the beginning for clearer structure. 'Prefer' can be followed by noun directly; no need for infinitive here.

× The color closer, I like it black and white and I think it's easy to match with closer and fight but but I think I like rainbow closer because I think is heavier, more energy.

✓ As for the colors of clothes, I like black and white because they are easy to match, but I also like colorful clothes because they feel brighter and more energetic.

Correct noun 'clothes'. 'I like it black and white' should be 'I like black and white'. 'Match with clothes' is redundant; 'easy to match' suffices. 'Fight' is incorrect word; likely 'bright'. 'Rainbow closer' → 'colorful clothes'. 'Heavier, more energy' is incorrect adjective choice; use 'brighter' and 'more energetic'. Ensure subject-verb agreement 'they are'.