Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce hesitations and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Keep responses concise (max 4–5 sentences) and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'for special occasions' to make the structure clear.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable. For everyday wear I usually choose jeans and T-shirts. For special occasions I prefer simple dresses or smart-casual outfits so I look neat but still feel comfortable.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one supporting detail. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use a linking phrase such as 'because' or 'as' to show cause and add a specific example of when you choose casual or smart clothes.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily routine. For example, I wear jeans and T-shirts at work on busy days, but I choose smarter clothes for meetings or formal events.

제안: Keep the answer natural and include a short reason and one specific example. Remove repeated phrases and finish sentences fully. Use past-tense correctly when giving a past example.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and casual. For instance, yesterday I went out with a friend in a favourite T-shirt and felt relaxed all day.

제안: Be concise and directly answer the question. Clarify whether you spend much time or not, and explain why with one supporting reason and a brief example. Avoid stuttering and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I sometimes spend time choosing clothes because I am picky about comfort and style. For example, before going out I may try a few outfits to pick the one that best reflects my personality and feels comfortable.

제안: Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends with specific details. Start with a direct topic sentence, then use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends' and finish the weekend clause with an example of what you wear.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes such as a shirt and trousers because I work in an office. On weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and a T-shirt so I can relax and meet friends.

제안: Be specific about colours and give reasons for each choice. Avoid vague or incorrect colour names (e.g. 'grape' is unclear); use common colour terms and give one example for work and one for holidays. Keep it concise and coherent using linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

예시: I prefer light colours for work, such as light brown, beige or pale blue, because they look professional. However, on holiday I like bright colours like red or turquoise to reflect a cheerful mood.

× Well, uh, I like to wear, I prefer casual clothes that make me feel comfortable, such as jeans and T-shirt, uh, for everyday wear and for special occasions or events and parties, I would prefer, uh, simple sort, uh, for, uh, or a dress, uh, and they, which helps.

✓ Well, I prefer casual clothes that make me feel comfortable, such as jeans and T-shirts for everyday wear, and for special occasions I prefer a simple dress.

The original sentence is run-on and disfluent with repeated phrases and fillers. This is a sentence structure error (fragmentation and poor coordination). Combine ideas into two coordinated clauses and remove filler words to improve clarity. Use plural 'T-shirts' to match general reference and simplify 'special occasions or events and parties' to 'special occasions'.

× Well, I like to wear compatible and casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because, umm, I think uh, wearing a clothes helps us to reflect our, uh, reflect our ideas and our comfort level.

✓ I like to wear comfortable and casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because I think wearing clothes helps us reflect our ideas and comfort level.

The adjective 'compatible' is incorrect here; 'comfortable' fits the intended meaning. Also 'a clothes' is ungrammatical: 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Remove unnecessary fillers and duplicate words to improve fluency.

× Yes I do. I like wearing T-shirts very much as it helps me to look so comfortable and uh, it helps me to, it helps to reflect my identity and my comfort level. And yesterday I went out with my friend wearing a T-shirt, which, uh, makes me feel.

✓ Yes I do. I like wearing T-shirts very much as they help me look comfortable and reflect my identity and comfort level. Yesterday I went out with my friend wearing a T-shirt, which made me feel comfortable.

Plural noun 'T-shirts' requires plural pronoun 'they' not singular 'it'. Also 'which, uh, makes me feel' is incomplete and inconsistent in tense; change to past tense 'made me feel comfortable' to match 'yesterday'.

× Well, I yes, I do it easily. I'm really picky in choosing clothes. It I, I like to wear the clothes which makes me feel feel very comfortable. So I choose that type of casual wear clothes that looks, that helps me to reflect my personality and my.

✓ Yes, I do. I'm really picky when choosing clothes. I like to wear clothes that make me feel very comfortable, so I choose casual styles that reflect my personality.

Multiple issues: disfluency and fragments create a sentence structure error. 'It I, I' and trailing 'and my.' are fragments. Use 'when choosing' instead of 'in choosing' for natural phrasing. Use 'make' (plural) to agree with 'clothes' and simplify redundant phrases.

× As I do, I prefer, uh, different styles, uh, various styles of clothes, uh, and according to the preference and the, uh, working, uh, schedule. On weekdays I like to wear formal type of dress as while working in office I wear simple type of shirt and pants and on weekends I like to wear.

✓ I prefer various styles of clothes depending on my preferences and work schedule. On weekdays I wear formal clothes for the office, such as a simple shirt and pants, and on weekends I wear casual outfits.

The phrase 'according to the preference and the working schedule' is awkward; use 'depending on my preferences and work schedule'. Also 'while working in office' needs the preposition 'in the office'. Complete the final clause by specifying 'casual outfits'.

× I like to wear uh light coloured clothes uh, as I work in an office I prefer light coloured like grape, light brown type of clothes. Also when I am on holidays I like to wear bright type of clothes to reflect my mood and attire so I choose.

✓ I like to wear light-coloured clothes at work, such as light brown or gray. When I am on holiday I like to wear bright clothes to reflect my mood.

'Grape' is not a usual colour term here; likely 'gray' or 'grey' is intended. 'Light coloured like grape, light brown type of clothes' is awkward—use examples after 'such as'. Use 'on holiday' (or 'on holidays') and simplify 'bright type of clothes' to 'bright clothes'. Remove trailing 'so I choose' to complete the thought.