Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to no more than 4–5 sentences.

예시: I usually prefer simple, comfortable clothes such as T-shirts because they are easy to wear. For example, I often pick a plain T-shirt and jeans for casual outings or when I work from home, as they help me stay relaxed and focused.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant. Improve cohesion by linking reasons and example with a connective and fix small grammar issues (article use, plural forms). Keep sentences succinct and vary vocabulary slightly.

예시: It depends on the occasion. Generally I prefer comfortable clothes such as T-shirts and jeans because they are practical and allow easy movement. However, for ceremonies or family events I wear traditional attire to show respect and match the formality.

제안: Make the answer more natural by using a full topic sentence and adding a brief specific reason or example. Correct singular/plural and avoid repeating the same phrase.

예시: Yes, I do. I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile; for instance, I often wear one with jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Clarify and correct grammar. Give one clear reason and an example of what you consider when choosing clothes. Avoid repetition and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I can be quite picky, so I spend time choosing clothes that fit well and feel comfortable. For example, I always check the fabric and fit before buying to make sure it suits my daily activities.

제안: There is confusion between weekdays and weekends. Correct that and structure answer with a topic sentence and a contrasting sentence using a linking word. Be specific about typical weekday and weekend outfits.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as chinos and a shirt, because I want to look professional. However, on weekends I dress more casually—for instance, I wear relaxed jeans and a comfortable T-shirt when I stay at home or go out with friends.

제안: Fix grammar and word choice, and give clearer examples. Use linking words to explain why you prefer those colours and mention how they suit occasions. Avoid invented or unclear colour names.

예시: I prefer medium shades that are neither too dark nor too light because they look smart but not overly formal. For example, I often choose olive green or soft gray for everyday wear since they match many outfits and hide stains well.

× Well, I usually prefer simple clothes, especially T-shirt, because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

✓ Well, I usually prefer simple clothes, especially T-shirts, because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

Use plural form with countable noun when speaking generally. 'T-shirt' as a type should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'clothes'. Also add plural to be consistent.

× I often choose them for casual outings or when I'm working from home since they keep me relaxed and required little effort to start.

✓ I often choose them for casual outings or when I'm working from home since they keep me relaxed and require little effort to put on.

The verb 'require' must agree with plural subject 'they' and should be in base form after 'since' indicating present general truth: 'require'. 'Required' is past participle and incorrect here. Also 'to start' is unnatural for putting on clothes; use 'to put on'.

× Usually I prefer comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are practical and easy to move in.

✓ Usually I prefer comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are practical and easy to move in.

This sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed. Included for completeness to acknowledge correct subject-verb agreement.

× But for ceremonies or family events, I wear my traditional clothes to show respect and suit the formality.

✓ But for ceremonies or family events, I wear my traditional clothes to show respect and to suit the formality.

Add 'to' before 'suit' to create a parallel infinitive structure ('to show' and 'to suit'). This keeps verb forms consistent and clear.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Also 'T-shirt' without article is unnatural singular.

× Well, I am a choosy person. I spend a lot of time when choosing clothes that according to my comfortable according to my comfort.

✓ Well, I am a choosy person. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes according to my comfort.

Remove unnecessary words and fix word order. 'Spend time when choosing' is awkward; use 'spend time choosing'. Remove repeated phrase 'according to my comfortable/comfort' and use 'according to my comfort'.

× Yes, definitely. On weekends I usually wear relaxed casual clothes at home because I'm not working and want to be comfortable, while at weekends I dress up a bit more.

✓ Yes, definitely. On weekdays I usually wear relaxed casual clothes at home because I'm not working and want to be comfortable, while on weekends I dress up a bit more.

Contrast intended is between weekdays and weekends. Original used 'On weekends' twice, causing contradiction. Change first occurrence to 'On weekdays'. Tenses are present simple and correct otherwise.

× For example, I will choose smarter jeans and a nice T-shirt when I go out with my friends and family.

✓ For example, I choose smarter jeans and a nice T-shirt when I go out with my friends and family.

Use present simple to describe habitual actions ('I choose ... when I go out'). 'I will choose' suggests future and is unnecessary here.

× I am prefer medium shades color that are neither too dark or too light.

✓ I prefer medium-shaded colors that are neither too dark nor too light.

'Am prefer' is wrong; use simple verb 'prefer'. Use compound adjective 'medium-shaded' or 'medium shades' and plural 'colors'. Use 'neither ... nor' for correct correlative conjunction.

× For example, I often choose olive or soft Greek color because they look smart without being too formal.

✓ For example, I often choose olive or soft gray colors because they look smart without being too formal.

'Greek' is likely a mistaken color word; replace with 'gray' or 'grey'. Use plural 'colors' to match 'olive or soft gray colors'. Also 'choose olive or soft gray' refers to colors, so plural improves clarity.