Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và rõ ràng: trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp (ví dụ không dùng “clothes with vegetables” nếu ý là họa tiết). Giữ độ dài 2–4 câu, thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (màu sắc, kiểu họa tiết, lý do) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc.

예시: I prefer clothes with simple patterns, especially black base with bright accents. I like this style because it suits my skin tone and looks more interesting than plain outfits.

제안: Giữ cấu trúc rõ ràng và súc tích: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, dùng liên từ để nối lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể; tránh lặp từ và rút gọn câu dài dư thừa.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I spend most days at home or school. For example, I usually wear jeans and a soft sweater since they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed.

제안: Làm rõ ý và sửa ngữ pháp: nêu câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích cụ thể cách phối đồ và tránh phát ngôn không phù hợp (ví dụ “make my office credible” không rõ nghĩa). Nên đưa ví dụ thực tế về hoàn cảnh mặc T-shirt.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile. I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a casual look or tuck it into a skirt for a neater outfit when I meet friends.

제안: Tránh tổng quát hóa và sửa ngữ pháp: trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích thời gian bạn dành cho việc chọn đồ và nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ muốn tự tin, phù hợp sự kiện). Tránh câu mơ hồ như “everyone have a few hobby”.

예시: Yes, I often spend quite a while choosing clothes because I want to feel confident. For example, I usually try on a few outfits before going out to make sure they match the occasion.

제안: Sắp xếp câu mạch lạc và hoàn chỉnh ý: mở đầu khẳng định, giải thích khác biệt cụ thể giữa ngày trong tuần và cuối tuần, dùng ví dụ và liên từ để rõ ràng. Tránh câu bị ngắt quãng.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear more formal clothes for school, such as blouses and trousers, but at weekends I choose casual outfits like hoodies and jeans for comfort.

제안: Làm rõ và sửa ngữ pháp: bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề, giải thích lý do và nêu tình huống cụ thể; tránh lặp từ (“every every”) và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

예시: I prefer black and white clothes because they look simple and match easily. For instance, I can wear them to school, work, or when I go out for a walk without worrying about clashing colors.

× Clothes with vegetables.

✓ Clothes with vegetable patterns.

The original phrase uses 'vegetables' without specifying that it refers to a pattern; English requires a noun phrase that describes the design. Use 'vegetable patterns' (no article) or 'clothes with vegetable prints' to be natural.

× The best one.

✓ They are my favorite.

The fragment 'The best one.' lacks context and subject. Replace with a full sentence with subject and verb: 'They are my favorite.' to match the meaning.

× I prefer the the clothes with black and bright colour.

✓ I prefer clothes that are black and bright in color.

Double 'the the' is an error and 'clothes' does not need 'the' here. 'Colour' should be 'color' or 'colour' consistently; 'black and bright colour' is ungrammatical — use 'black and bright colors' or 'that are black and bright in color.'

× I think I actually is.

✓ I think I actually am.

Subject 'I' requires verb 'am' not 'is'. Use correct first-person singular form.

× I choose them because I think it's really suitable for me and it's not so simple to wear.

✓ I choose them because I think they are really suitable for me and not too difficult to wear.

Tense and pronoun agreement: 'choose' is present tense habitual (acceptable), but 'it' should be 'they' referring to 'clothes'. 'Not so simple to wear' is awkward; use 'not too difficult to wear.'

× Well, for me, I prefer to wear the comfortable and casual one because in daily life I don't have to go out too much and I don't have to go to luxury places.

✓ Well, for me, I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because in daily life I don't go out much and I don't have to visit fancy places.

Use plural 'clothes' not 'one' and simplify 'don't have to go out too much' to 'don't go out much.' 'Luxury places' is better expressed as 'fancy places' or 'formal venues.'

× And I think this kind of clothes make me feel comfortable and I really love it.

✓ And I think this kind of clothes makes me feel comfortable and I really love them.

Subject 'this kind of clothes' is treated singular/plural awkwardly; better 'these kinds of clothes make' or keep 'this kind of clothing makes' and use matching pronoun 'them' for plural 'clothes.'

× I find wearing T-shirt is really useful because I can wear it with a Jean or a skirt.

✓ I find wearing a T-shirt really useful because I can wear it with jeans or a skirt.

Use article 'a T-shirt'. Use 'jeans' plural lowercase; 'Jean' is a proper noun if capitalized incorrectly. Remove unnecessary 'is' after 'useful.'

× That could make my office become much more credible and wonderful.

✓ That can make my outfit look much more presentable and smart.

'Office' is incorrect context; likely 'outfit'. 'Credible' is not used for clothing; use 'presentable' or 'smart' to describe appearance.

× Oh yes of course, I think every woman and also me spend a lot of time to choose clothes because everyone have a few hobby to wear a cloth that makes me confident.

✓ Oh yes, of course. I think every woman, including me, spends a lot of time choosing clothes because everyone has certain preferences for clothes that make them confident.

Subject-verb agreement: 'every woman ... spends' (singular). 'Spend' should be 'spends'. 'Everyone have' should be 'everyone has'. 'Hobby' misused; use 'preferences' or 'styles'. 'A cloth' should be 'clothes' or 'an outfit'.

× I think maybe yes, because on weekday I have to go to school and I have to. To choose the clothes that are formal, but on the weekend I can wear anything I want and.

✓ I think maybe yes, because on weekdays I have to go to school and choose formal clothes, but on weekends I can wear anything I want.

Use plural 'weekdays/weekends'. Remove sentence fragments 'and I have to.' Combine clauses and use 'choose formal clothes.' Remove trailing 'and.'

× Well, I love on the black and white ones because it is very simple and it's convenient for every every institution.

✓ Well, I love black and white clothes because they are very simple and convenient for every occasion.

Remove incorrect preposition 'on'. Use plural 'clothes' and plural pronoun 'they'. 'Every institution' is odd; likely 'every occasion' or 'every situation.' Also removed duplicate 'every.'

× I can wear it when I go everywhere to school or to work and even go for a walk.

✓ I can wear them when I go to school, to work, or even for a walk.

Use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'clothes'. Reorder phrase to 'go to school' and use parallel structure. Remove 'go everywhere' which is redundant.