Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitations and fragmented phrases; use linking words if adding details.

예시: I prefer casual, street-style clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I usually wear jeans and a hoodie when I go out, since they suit the unpredictable weather and I can move around easily.

제안: State your preference clearly (comfortable or smart) and explain why with specific reasons. Keep sentences coherent and limit to 2–3 sentences, using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move freely and feel relaxed all day. Also, I find some casual items can still look fashionable, so I often choose stylish sneakers or a neat jacket to balance comfort and appearance.

제안: Give a concise reason why you like T-shirts and avoid unclear or irrelevant comments. Use clear vocabulary (e.g. breathable, cotton) and one example of when you wear them.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because cotton is breathable and comfortable in warm weather. For instance, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go for a walk or relax at home.

제안: Answer with a straightforward topic sentence about how much time you spend, then give one or two specific examples of occasions and how your choice differs. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'when'.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to match the occasion. For example, I pick smart, modest outfits for church but choose something more relaxed and stylish for a date.

제안: Clearly state the difference between weekday and weekend styles in one sentence, then add a specific example using a linking word like 'while' or 'whereas'. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I dress more formally for work, whereas on weekends I prefer simple, comfortable clothes like sweatpants and a T-shirt for relaxing at home.

제안: Give a clear reason why you prefer a colour and add one specific example of when you choose it. Use concise, natural phrasing and avoid awkward constructions.

예시: I prefer black because it looks elegant and understated, and it doesn't draw too much attention. For example, I often wear a black coat to social events because it is versatile and discreet.

× I mean, I like. Special attire or. Street. Street Weather.

✓ I mean, I like special attire and streetwear.

The original has fragmented phrases and incorrect word 'Street Weather'. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Combine fragments into one clear sentence and use the correct noun 'streetwear'. Use conjunction 'and' to link similar items.

× Yes I do. I like to wear those clothes and I think it's very high fashion and it is lovely to a side of eye and very comfortable.

✓ Yes I do. I like to wear those clothes because I think they are very fashionable, eye-catching, and very comfortable.

The original uses awkward adjective forms ('high fashion') and incorrect phrase 'lovely to a side of eye'. This is an adjective/adverb issue (ID 13). Use adjective 'fashionable' to describe clothes, 'eye-catching' for 'attractive to the eye', and ensure pronoun agreement ('they are').

× Yes I do because it is compatible and air can pass through to the fabric, especially in cotton and it is very likely umm. Coffee when you're about to sleep in very fashion.

✓ Yes I do because it is comfortable and allows air to pass through the fabric, especially cotton; it is also suitable to wear when you want to sleep comfortably.

The sentence misuses verbs and nouns and has unclear phrasing. This is mainly a present tense and word choice issue (ID 6). Use present simple verbs 'is' and 'allows', correct noun 'comfortable', and rephrase 'very likely coffee' which is unclear to 'suitable to wear when you want to sleep'.

× Yes I do. I'm too very picky in what I'm about to wear, especially in in any. Category like going into a date casual or going to church. I will choose whether the team is according according.

✓ Yes I do. I'm very picky about what I'm going to wear, especially in different categories such as casual dates or church. I will choose according to the occasion.

Multiple preposition errors (ID 11) and repetition. Use 'picky about' not 'picky in', 'going on a date' not 'going into a date', and 'according to the occasion' for correct prepositional phrase. Remove redundant words.

× Yes I do in weekdays. I like atoll. I'm very home person. I like to. Where is simple, but in weekdays I like to wear elegant and casual in any different category.

✓ Yes I do. On weekdays I am more of a home person and like to wear simple clothes, but on weekends I prefer elegant or casual outfits depending on the occasion.

There are pronoun and word choice errors (ID 12) and sentence structure problems. Use 'On weekdays' for time preposition, 'I am more of a home person' for correct expression, and clarify contrast with 'on weekends'. Replace fragmented clauses with a coherent sentence.

× I prefer black because it is my favorite color and it is elegant and the eyes it is not too uh. Center of the instruction because I'm a person that don't like attention in a crowded area.

✓ I prefer black because it is my favorite color; it looks elegant and does not draw too much attention, because I am someone who does not like attention in crowded areas.

This sentence contains adjective/adverb issues and subject-verb agreement. Use 'looks elegant' and 'does not draw too much attention' for clarity. Also correct pronoun/verb agreement 'I am someone who does not like' rather than 'that don't like'. This addresses issues ID 13 and ID 12.