Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more grammatical. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer comfortable, casual clothes”), then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Use linking words (because, so, for example) and keep to 2–4 sentences. Correct tense and pronouns and avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes, such as jeans, T-shirts and hoodies. I like them because they are practical for commuting and studying, and they keep me warm when it’s chilly. For example, I often wear a hoodie and jeans on campus because they are both comfy and easy to move in.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a specific reason and a short example. Reduce filler words like “umm” and avoid repeating the same adjective. Use linking words (because, so) to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel confident and relaxed. If I wear tight or formal clothes I tend to feel self-conscious, so I choose casual outfits when I need to meet friends or study.

제안: Answer directly then give brief reasons with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid repeating phrases and be specific about what you dislike. Use linking words (because, so) and keep it concise.

예시: Not really — I avoid wearing T-shirts because they make me self-conscious. For example, I feel they highlight my arms and stomach, so I usually choose shirts with looser cuts or long sleeves.

제안: Provide a clear estimate and one reason. Use numbers correctly and correct grammar (e.g., “about 15–20 minutes”). Use linking words (because, so) and avoid unclear phrases like “19-6 minute.”

예시: Yes, I usually spend about 15–20 minutes choosing an outfit when I go out with friends because I want to feel comfortable and confident. I pick clothes that look casual but tidy so I can relax during the outing.

제안: Answer directly and give clear contrasting details for weekdays vs weekends. Use correct vocabulary (school uniform, pajamas, casual clothes) and one connective (while, but) to link ideas. Avoid vague or awkward phrases.

예시: Yes. During the week I wear a school uniform for classes, while on weekends I usually wear casual clothes or pajamas if I stay at home. If I go out on a weekend, I wear simple fashionable outfits like jeans and a nice top.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence naming preferred colours, then give a brief reason or example. Use correct adjective forms (dark blue, warm colors) and avoid repetition. Use linking words (because, for example).

예시: I like dark blue, black and white. I often wear black and dark blue because they’re easy to match and look neat; I also sometimes choose light blue for a more relaxed, beachy vibe.

× According to a comfortable casual like wearing a Jean T-shirt, hoodie, comfortable for commuting and studying.

✓ I prefer comfortable, casual clothes like jeans, T-shirts, and hoodies because they are good for commuting and studying.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verbs, causing a sentence structure error (type 26). Reorder elements into a clear subject + verb + object structure, use plurals for clothing items (jeans, T-shirts), and add a reason clause with 'because' to explain purpose.

× Like if I'm feel too cool or like it's make me cold, I wear.

✓ If I feel too cold, I wear them.

The original uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms (type 12). 'I'm feel' is wrong; use 'I feel'. 'It's make me cold' is incorrect; use 'they make me cold' or refer to the clothes with 'them'. Keep pronoun agreement: 'them' refers to clothes.

× I prefer the and when I feel hard I deserve T-shirt with.

✓ I prefer that, and when I feel cold I wear a T-shirt.

This sentence is ungrammatical (type 26) with missing words and confused meaning. Clarify intended meaning: likely 'I prefer that' or 'I prefer those', and replace 'feel hard' (incorrect) with 'feel cold' or appropriate feeling; 'deserve' is wrong verb here, use 'wear'.

× Umm, I do prefer a comfortable because umm, comfortable make me feel confident all the time.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes because they make me feel confident all the time.

Using 'a comfortable' is incorrect (type 14); 'comfortable' needs a noun (clothes). Also subject-verb agreement: 'comfortable make' should be 'they make'. Use plural noun and matching pronoun.

× If I wear something that like make me feel uncomfortable, I feel so nervous to face with each other in front of me.

✓ If I wear something that makes me feel uncomfortable, I feel very nervous facing other people.

Errors include missing third-person singular '-s' on 'make' (type 2) and incorrect phrasing 'to face with each other in front of me' (type 26). Use 'makes' and the correct verb pattern 'feel nervous facing other people' for clarity.

× I don't like to wear T-shirt because I have a big arm, so I don't I don't really like to wear T-shirt.

✓ I don't like to wear T-shirts because my arms are big, so I really avoid wearing them.

Problems: plural and article errors for 'T-shirt' (should be plural or 'a T-shirt') and awkward phrasing (type 11). Also pronoun and repetition issues. Use 'my arms are big' and plural 'T-shirts' to sound natural.

× If I wear T-shirt, it's make me feel like I have a big arms, Yes.

✓ If I wear a T-shirt, it makes me feel like I have big arms.

Errors: article and singular/plural ('a T-shirt', 'arms') and verb agreement 'it's make' should be 'it makes' (types 22, 1, 2). Remove unnecessary 'Yes'.

× And like they show about my belly, yes.

✓ They also show my belly.

'Show about my belly' is incorrect preposition/phrase and pronoun usage (type 12). Use 'show my belly' for direct object and omit filler words.

× I spend around 19-6 minute yes to dress up because I think that wearing something that make you feel comfortable, it's give you more confident in your life.

✓ I spend around 15–20 minutes to dress up because I think that wearing something that makes you feel comfortable gives you more confidence.

Multiple tense and number errors (type 6): use a realistic minute range '15–20 minutes', verb agreement 'make' -> 'makes' (third-person singular for 'something that'), and 'gives you more confidence' instead of 'it's give you more confident'. Also 'confidence' is the correct noun form.

× Yes I do wear different style like from Monday to Saturday I wear a school uniforms and on the weekend I wear pajamas.

✓ Yes, I do wear different styles: from Monday to Friday I wear a school uniform, and on the weekend I wear pajamas.

Errors: plural/singular mismatch ('style' vs 'styles') and article usage with 'uniforms' (type 14 and 22). Also weekday range usually Monday–Friday for school. Use 'a school uniform' or 'school uniforms' consistently.

× If I stay at home but I wanna hang out I used to wear something that causes like fashions.

✓ If I stay at home but want to go out, I usually wear something fashionable.

Problems: informal 'wanna', wrong tense 'used to' (type 5), and awkward phrase 'causes like fashions' (type 8/26). Replace with present habitual 'usually wear' and adjective 'fashionable'.

× A The colour of the clothes that I like is the dark Blues and black and white.

✓ The colours I like are dark blue, black, and white.

Article and capitalization errors (type 17 and 22): remove extraneous 'A', use plural 'colours' to match list, use singular adjective form 'dark blue' and lowercase color names. Make list parallel.

× But usually I prefer to wear black and dark blue and warm more colored are usually wear as light blue because I really like the color of the beach.

✓ But usually I prefer to wear black and dark blue. For warmer colors I usually wear light blue because I really like the color of the beach.

The original has confused word order and unclear meaning (type 18). Split into two sentences for clarity: state usual preference, then explain preference for lighter colors when choosing warm tones. Use 'warmer colors' and proper verb forms 'I usually wear'.