Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid fillers and unclear words, and provide one or two brief supporting details. Use correct word forms (e.g. "I like wearing dresses and sandals" or "I usually wear T-shirts and jeans") and remove hesitation words like "uh".

예시: I like wearing comfortable casual clothes. For example, I often wear T-shirts and jeans or a simple dress with sandals because they are easy to move in and suitable for my daily activities.

제안: Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give a concise reason and a brief example. Use correct pronouns and grammar ("I prefer" not "we wearing"), and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes. Comfortable clothes let me focus on my work and relax; for instance, I usually choose soft cotton T-shirts and loose trousers when I have a long day.

제안: Answer directly and explain why with clear grammar. Avoid incorrect word choices ("worried" is wrong here) and reduce hesitations. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting reason or example.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts and I wear them almost every day because they are comfortable and easy to wash, especially when I go out for a walk.

제안: Give a direct answer, explain when you spend more time and why, and correct grammar ("I don't have many clothes"). Avoid repeating the same words and keep it concise.

예시: Yes, I spend more time choosing clothes when I go to a party because I want to look nice. At other times I choose clothes quickly because I don't own many outfits.

제안: Be consistent and clear: state whether you do or don't, then qualify with a reason. Fix word order ("I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends") and avoid filler words.

예시: Sometimes I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. For example, I dress more formally for work on weekdays, but on weekends I prefer casual clothes because I'm relaxed and sometimes too lazy to choose.

제안: Answer directly with clear sentence structure, give a reason and a brief example. Remove fillers and use correct grammar ("they are good colors" and "I wear them often").

예시: I like white and pink clothes because they look fresh and cheerful. For instance, I often wear a white shirt or a pink dress when I want to feel bright and confident.

× I like. Wearing a dress in the sandals. Uh. I wear a teacher gender T-sirtomer.

✓ I like wearing dresses and sandals. I also wear a T-shirt that looks like a teacher's uniform.

The original has fragmented sentences, incorrect word forms and unclear phrases ('teacher gender T-sirtomer'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Combine fragments into complete sentences, use plural 'dresses' to match general preference, 'sandals' as plural, and rephrase 'T-shirt' and 'teacher's uniform' for clarity. Use consistent verb form 'like wearing'.

× In my opinion, we wear comfortable clothes because it is important to forebody.

✓ In my opinion, we should wear comfortable clothes because they are important for our bodies.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and a wrong noun ('forebody'). This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12). Replace 'it' with plural 'they' to agree with 'clothes', and correct 'forebody' to 'our bodies'. Add 'should' to express recommendation.

× If you don't wear comfortable clothes, you won't feel good.

✓ If you don't wear comfortable clothes, you won't feel good.

This sentence is grammatically correct; subject-verb agreement is correct (ID 27). No change needed. Provided here to indicate correctness and reinforce that conditional form with 'don't' and 'won't' is appropriate.

× So we were comfortable clothes.

✓ So we should wear comfortable clothes.

The original 'we were comfortable clothes' is ungrammatical; it uses past tense 'were' incorrectly and lacks a verb for 'wear'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Use modal 'should' and verb 'wear' to express recommendation and correct tense.

× Yes I do, I wear it every day and when I walk outside I worried because it is comfortable and good clothes.

✓ Yes, I do. I wear them every day, and when I go outside I feel comfortable because they are good clothes.

Original mixes singular and plural pronouns and wrong tense 'worried' where present 'feel' is needed. This combines incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12) and incorrect verb tense (ID 6). Use 'them' for plural 'T-shirts', 'go outside' for habitual action, and 'feel' to describe current sensation; 'they are good clothes' agrees in number.

× Yes. When I go to party, I spend more time choosing clothes because I like choosing clothes.

✓ Yes. When I go to a party, I spend more time choosing clothes because I enjoy picking outfits.

Missing article 'a' before 'party' and repetitive phrasing; this is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Add 'a' and vary vocabulary for naturalness ('enjoy picking outfits').

× But I have no many clothes.

✓ But I don't have many clothes.

'No many' is an incorrect quantifier construction. This matches incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14). Use 'don't have many' to express limited quantity.

× I want to buy a lot of clothes. Clothes.

✓ I want to buy a lot of clothes.

Redundant fragment 'Clothes.' creates poor sentence structure (ID 26). Remove repetition to form a single clear sentence.

× Uh, no. Uh, I wear different styles of weekdays but sometimes, uh, I'm lazy so I don't want to choose clothes.

✓ No. I wear different styles on weekdays, but sometimes I'm lazy so I don't want to choose clothes.

Original misuses 'of weekdays' and has filler words and punctuation issues. This is sentence structure error (ID 26). Use 'on weekdays' and remove filler 'uh' for clarity. Keep conjunction 'but' to contrast.

× I like uh, white and pink, umm, clothes because they good color.

✓ I like white and pink clothes because they are good colors.

Missing verb 'are' and 'color' should be plural 'colors' when referring to more than one color. This is incorrect use of prepositions/related small words (ID 11) and also missing verb—mainly fix by adding 'are' and pluralizing 'colors'.

× Umm uh, I wear uh, pink and white clothes a lot of time. I like it.

✓ I wear pink and white clothes a lot. I like them.

'A lot of time' is incorrect for frequency; use 'a lot' or 'often'. Also 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'clothes'. This combines present tense usage (ID 6) and pronoun agreement (ID 12). Use simple present 'wear' for habitual action and plural pronoun 'them'.