Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly contrast the two situations using linking words (e.g. “but” / “however”). Correct phrasing: “on normal days,” “comfortable for me,” and “I wear a suit or a skirt for work.”

예시: I usually wear casual clothes, such as jeans and sneakers, because they are comfortable. However, when I go to work I wear professional outfits, like a suit or a skirt, to look more formal.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve grammar and word order. Give a short reason with a linking word (because / so). Use specific phrasing: “easy to move in” → “easy to move around in” or “allow freedom of movement.”

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are practical and allow me to move around easily, especially when I have a busy or active day.

제안: Good direct answer and example. Improve grammar (plural/singular) and add a linking word to make it smoother. Make the example more specific (when/where).

예시: Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and help me feel relaxed. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt when I spend the weekend at home or meet friends for a casual coffee.

제안: This answer has several grammar and word-choice errors and unclear details. Use correct verbs (“choose,” “try on”) and phrasing (“to make sure they suit me and fit well”). Explain briefly where/why you try them on with a logical place (e.g. dressing room).

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to make sure they suit me and fit well. I usually try them on in the dressing room before I buy them.

제안: Answer directly and combine sentences to avoid repetition. Correct grammar (it depends; weekdays/weekends plural) and use a linking word to contrast (but / whereas).

예시: Yes, I wear different styles. On weekends I usually wear comfortable clothes like jeans and a T-shirt, whereas on weekdays I wear professional clothes for work.

제안: Keep it concise and complete the thought. Avoid repeating “blue” and correct capitalization and word order. Give a reason why you like the color and give a complete example.

예시: My favorite colour is blue because I find it calming and easy to match. For example, I have blue jeans and a navy-blue skirt that I wear often.

× I usually wear casual clothes on normal day like jeans and sneakers because they are comfortable for me.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes on a normal day, like jeans and sneakers, because they are comfortable for me.

The phrase 'normal day' needs the indefinite article 'a' to be grammatically correct when referring to a single typical day. Also adding commas improves clarity. Suggestion: use 'a normal day' or 'normal days' depending on meaning.

× However, I have to wear professional clothes like suit and skirt to work.

✓ However, I have to wear professional clothes like a suit and a skirt to work.

Countable nouns 'suit' and 'skirt' require articles ('a') when singular. Using 'a suit and a skirt' makes the nouns grammatically correct. If plural intended, use 'suits and skirts.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes or casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical for me and easy to move in activity.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable or casual clothes because they are comfortable, practical for me, and easy to move in during activities.

The phrase 'easy to move in activity' is incorrect. Use the preposition 'in' for 'easy to move in' and 'during' to link to 'activities.' Also combine redundant phrases 'comfortable clothes or casual clothes' to 'comfortable or casual clothes.'

× Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and help me relax. For example, I wear T-shirts for weekends or when I'm meeting my friend.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts every day because they are comfortable and help me relax. For example, I wear T-shirts on weekends or when I'm meeting my friends.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'weekends.' 'My friend' is singular but context implies general occasions; use plural 'friends' or 'a friend' depending on meaning. Also 'for weekends' should be 'on weekends.'

× Yes, I spend a lot of time to shoes my clothes because I make sure them suitable for me and fit well.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I make sure they are suitable for me and fit well.

Use the gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time.' 'Shoes' is incorrect here. Replace 'make sure them suitable' with 'make sure they are suitable' to correct pronoun and verb form.

× I usually try on in reading room.

✓ I usually try them on in the reading room.

'Try on' is a phrasal verb and needs an object ('them') and the preposition 'in' requires an article 'the' for 'reading room.' Place 'on' with the object: 'try them on.'

× Yes I wear different style of clothes. It depend on the day.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes. It depends on the day.

Use plural 'styles' to match 'different.' Also subject-verb agreement: 'It depends' requires 'depends' for third person singular.

× I usually wear comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirt on weekends but on weekday I usually wear professional clothes to work.

✓ I usually wear comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts on weekends, but on weekdays I usually wear professional clothes to work.

Consistency in number: use plural 'T-shirts' and 'weekdays.' Also add comma before 'but.' 'On weekday' is incorrect; use 'on weekdays.'

× My favorite color for clothes is blue. I really like blue color. I have many clothes like blue jeans, Navy blue skirt because.

✓ My favorite color for clothes is blue. I really like the color blue. I have many clothes, such as blue jeans and a navy-blue skirt.

Avoid repetition by saying 'the color blue.' 'Navy blue skirt' needs an article 'a' and hyphenation 'navy-blue' as a compound adjective. Remove trailing 'because' and use 'such as' to introduce examples.