Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choice, and avoid repetition. Use one or two specific supporting details and linking words. Watch grammar (articles, singular/plural) and collocations (e.g. "well-fitting", "bodycon").

예시: I prefer stylish, well-fitting clothes that are comfortable. For example, when I go out with friends I usually wear a bodycon T-shirt and fitted jeans because they look neat and let me move easily.

제안: Answer directly and organise into two clear parts using linking words (e.g. "at home" vs "for work"). Correct vocabulary errors ("casual clothes", "makes me feel confident"). Keep sentences concise.

예시: It depends. At home I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable. However, for meetings or work I wear smart clothes because they make me feel confident and professional.

제안: This answer is unclear and contains wrong words. Start with a direct statement and give a short reason and example. Use correct verbs and adjectives ("easy to wear", "comfortable").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are easy to wear and very comfortable. For example, I often wear a cotton T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary ("choosing clothes"). Give a reason and a brief detail about what you consider (style, fit, colour). Use one linking word if adding detail.

예시: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I want to look stylish. I usually consider the fit and colour to make sure an outfit suits the occasion.

제안: Organise answer into contrast between weekdays and weekends. Avoid repeating and correct phrases ("on weekdays", "on weekends", "comfortable clothes", "stylish"). Provide one or two specific examples for each period and use linking words like "whereas" or "but".

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart, practical clothes like a blouse and trousers for work. On weekends I prefer comfortable but stylish outfits, for example fitted jeans and a T-shirt or a casual dress.

제안: Good content but improve fluency by using natural phrases and a clearer structure. Use singular/plural consistently ("red and white" or "the colours red and white"). Add a short reason for each colour with linking word "because".

예시: I like the colours red and white. I like red because it feels lively and romantic, and I choose white because it looks simple and gives me a relaxed, comfortable vibe.

× I prefer wedding sort and stylish clothes that fit my body and make me feel comfortable.

✓ I prefer smart and stylish clothes that fit my body and make me feel comfortable.

The phrase 'wedding sort' is incorrect; likely intended 'smart' or 'well-dressed'. Replace with 'smart' to correctly modify 'clothes'. Use adjective order 'smart and stylish'. Ensure word choice matches meaning.

× For example I love to wear body cone fitted T-shirt and jeans when I go out with my friends that make me feel comfortable.

✓ For example, I love to wear a body-con fitted T-shirt and jeans when I go out with my friends because they make me feel comfortable.

'Body cone' should be 'body-con' (hyphenated adjective), and a singular countable noun 'T-shirt' requires an article 'a'. The relative clause 'that make me feel comfortable' refers to clothes (plural), so use 'they' or rephrase with 'because they make me feel comfortable' for clarity.

× It depends on messages on when I am at home I prefer wearing casual quotes.

✓ It depends on the occasion; when I am at home I prefer wearing casual clothes.

'Messages on' and 'quotes' are incorrect word choices. Use 'occasion' and 'clothes'. Also separate ideas with punctuation and keep pronouns consistent.

× It make me comfortable.

✓ It makes me comfortable.

Subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb requires the third person singular form 'makes'.

× Then when I go out for a meeting or office then I love to wear formal clothes that make me feel confidence.

✓ When I go out for a meeting or to the office, I like to wear formal clothes that make me feel confident.

'Then' is redundant; add preposition 'to' before 'the office'. 'Make me feel confidence' is incorrect — use the adjective 'confident' after 'feel'.

× Yes, I love reading dessert, however it easy to wear and make me comfortable.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts; they are easy to wear and make me comfortable.

The student used unrelated words 'reading dessert'. Replace with 'wearing T-shirts' to answer the question. 'It easy to wear' needs verb 'are' for plural 'T-shirts' and 'make me comfortable' matches plural subject 'they'.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing loans because I want to look stylish.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look stylish.

'Loans' is a wrong word; should be 'clothes'. Ensure vocabulary fits context.

× Yes, I love the styling clothes.

✓ Yes, I like stylish clothes.

'Love the styling clothes' is ungrammatical. Use 'like' or 'love' plus adjective+noun: 'stylish clothes'.

× When I am on my weekends I usually wear a simple and comfortable quotes.

✓ On weekends I usually wear simple and comfortable clothes.

Phrases 'on my weekends' and 'quotes' are incorrect. Use 'on weekends' and 'clothes'. Remove unnecessary article 'a' because 'clothes' is plural.

× But when I am on my weekend I love the stylist so I wear fitted jeans, T-shirt, bodyguard, mini dresses.

✓ But on weekends I prefer stylish outfits, so I wear fitted jeans, T-shirts, bodycon dresses, or mini dresses.

Correct 'on my weekend' to 'on weekends'. 'Love the stylist' is incorrect — use 'prefer stylish outfits'. 'Bodyguard' is wrong; likely 'bodycon' (body-con) to describe fitted dresses. Make items plural and parallel.

× I love wearing red and white color, however, red is symbol of love and the white color clothes give me simple and comfortable vibes.

✓ I love wearing red and white; red is a symbol of love, and white clothes give me a simple, comfortable vibe.

Remove redundant 'color' after colors; use article 'a' with 'symbol'. Use plural 'white clothes' and 'vibe' singular or 'vibes'. Add commas for adjective order 'simple, comfortable'.