Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence saying you prefer simple, casual clothes, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid fillers and repetition, and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer simple, casual clothes. For example, I usually wear plain T-shirts and jeans, and sometimes a smart casual blazer for work. I like this style because it is comfortable and easy to maintain.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference, then give a specific reason. Use linking words (for example, so, because) and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I’m not very interested in fashion. Because my clothes are simple and tidy, I can focus my energy on work and study instead of worrying about my appearance.

제안: Be confident and avoid hesitations. Give a short topic sentence, a specific detail (number, style or brand), and a reason. Do not ask questions in your answer. Keep it within 3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts and they are my favourite. I have around 10–20 plain and branded T-shirts in my wardrobe, including a popular Japanese brand I like. They are comfortable and easy to pair with jeans.

제안: Give a clear short answer and one specific supporting detail about how you save time (e.g., choosing one brand, a capsule wardrobe). Use linking words like because or so and avoid unclear phrases like 'a large.'

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. For example, I usually stick to one or two reliable brands so I can buy quickly and save time for studying and hobbies.

제안: Clarify your routine with a clear topic sentence about whether you change styles. Use linking words to contrast weekdays and weekends, and avoid confusing phrases like 'waste my allergy.' Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Generally I wear similar clothes most days because I prefer simplicity. However, on weekends I choose more relaxed casual outfits, while at work I sometimes wear slightly smarter clothes.

제안: Start with a direct statement of your preferred colours, then give a specific reason. Use linking words like because or so, and avoid vague or fragmented phrases.

예시: I prefer neutral colours like black and grey. I choose these tones because they look simple and low-key, and I don’t want to stand out in public.

× MMM, I would like to wear simple clothes like a biscuit, steel T-shirts, the jeans and some suits.

✓ MMM, I would like to wear simple clothes like basic T-shirts, jeans, and some suits.

The sentence uses incorrect and awkward adjectives/nouns: 'a biscuit' and 'steel T-shirts' are wrong collocations and 'the jeans' uses an unnecessary definite article. Replace with 'basic T-shirts' for simple/plain shirts, remove 'a biscuit', and use 'jeans' without 'the' to be natural. Suggestion: Use accurate adjective-noun collocations and omit unnecessary articles.

× I mean, some business suits, but closer.

✓ I mean, some business suits, but more casual ones.

The phrase 'but closer' is incomplete and unclear. 'More casual ones' clarifies the contrast. Ensure comparative adjectives are followed by the thing compared. Suggestion: Use complete comparative structures like 'more casual' + noun.

× So yeah. And because I'm I'm, I'm not.

✓ So yeah. And because I'm not, I prefer simple styles.

The original repeats fragments and lacks a complete clause. Provide a full clause explaining the reason. Avoid repetition and complete the thought. Suggestion: Combine fragments into a coherent sentence that completes the idea.

× I'm finding too comfortable and simple clothes because I don't think I'm I'm a stylish person.

✓ I prefer comfortable and simple clothes because I don't think I'm a stylish person.

'I'm finding' is unnatural here; use 'I prefer' to express habitual preference (present simple). Also remove repeated 'I'm'. Suggestion: Use present simple for general preferences.

× I like to make everything clean and simple, which means I can put all my mind and energy into some important things like work or study.

✓ I like to keep everything clean and simple, which means I can put my mind and energy into important things like work or study.

'Make everything clean' is acceptable but 'keep everything clean' is more natural. 'Put all my mind and energy' is awkward—use 'put my mind and energy'. Also 'some important things' can be 'important things'. Suggestion: Use natural verb collocations and avoid unnecessary quantifiers.

× Definitely T-shirt is on my top list when I want to buy some new clothes.

✓ A T-shirt is definitely at the top of my list when I want to buy new clothes.

Use singular with article 'A T-shirt' and natural preposition 'at the top of my list'. 'Definitely' placement adjusted for natural flow. Suggestion: Use articles with singular countable nouns and common idiomatic phrases.

× For example, I have about at least 10 to 20 T-shirts in my wardrobe.

✓ For example, I have at least 10 to 20 T-shirts in my wardrobe.

'About at least' is redundant. Use either 'about' or 'at least'; here 'at least' fits the intended meaning of a minimum. Suggestion: Avoid combining redundant quantifiers.

× Which brands is Utico? Which is famous? Famous Japanese brand yet I really like it.

✓ One brand is Utico, which is a famous Japanese brand, and I really like it.

The original consists of fragmented questions and awkward phrasing. Combine into a complete sentence: identify the brand and state it's famous and liked. Suggestion: Use complete sentences and proper relative clauses ('which is a famous...').

× No, definitely a large.

✓ No, definitely not; I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

'A large' is incorrect as a response; the speaker likely meant 'not a lot' or 'definitely not.' Provide a full negative response matching the question. Suggestion: Use appropriate quantifiers like 'a lot' and negative constructions.

× I don't like to spend a lot of time on choosing this kind of things, especially in my daily activities.

✓ I don't like to spend a lot of time choosing these kinds of things, especially in my daily life.

Use gerund without 'on' after 'spend time' ('spend time choosing'), plural 'these kinds of things', and 'daily life' is the natural phrase. Suggestion: Learn verb patterns ('spend time' + -ing) and plural forms.

× I like to focus on my studying and playing and other important things.

✓ I like to focus on studying, leisure activities, and other important things.

'My studying and playing' is awkward; use 'studying' and 'leisure activities' or 'hobbies' for clarity. Avoid possessive when not needed. Suggestion: Use clear noun forms and parallel structure in lists.

× I just choose to focus on one brand like the Yuriku to make sure I save my energy and my time not wasting on this kind of things.

✓ I just choose to stick to one brand, like Yuriku, to make sure I save my energy and time and don't waste it on these kinds of things.

Use 'stick to' for loyalty to a brand, remove 'the' before brand name, fix word order 'save my energy and time', and convert 'not wasting on' to 'don't waste it on'. Also use 'these kinds of things'. Suggestion: Use correct verb patterns and pronoun references for clarity.

× No, I usually wear the same clothes as I don't want to waste my allergy to choose to change my clothes.

✓ No, I usually wear the same style because I don't want the hassle of choosing different clothes.

'Waste my allergy' is nonsensical. Likely meant 'waste time' or 'avoid the hassle'. Replace with 'hassle' or 'time' and clarify reason 'of choosing different clothes'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions like 'the hassle of' or 'waste time'.

× But but of course I would rather to wear vary some casual clothes rather than formal clothes when I am working in my workplace.

✓ But of course I would rather wear more casual clothes than formal ones when I'm at work.

'Would rather' is followed by base verb without 'to'. 'Vary some' is incorrect; use 'more casual' and 'formal ones' is concise. 'When I am working in my workplace' is wordy—use 'when I'm at work'. Suggestion: Use correct 'would rather' structure and comparative adjectives.

× Yes, in the weekend I choose casual clothes.

✓ Yes, on the weekend I choose casual clothes.

Use preposition 'on' with 'the weekend' or better 'at the weekend' (British) or 'on weekends' (general). Also 'choose' is acceptable for habitual action but 'I wear casual clothes on the weekend' is more natural. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for time expressions and consider 'wear' for clothes.

× And next some place with the colours like vibes, black or grey.

✓ I prefer colors with a calm vibe, like black or grey.

Original is fragmented and uses odd nouns ('vibes') in wrong position. Rephrase to express preference: 'colors with a calm vibe' or 'muted colors like black or grey'. Suggestion: Use adjective+noun order properly and choose appropriate descriptors.

× I think it's shoes for me.

✓ I think those suit me.

'It's shoes for me' is unclear. Likely meaning 'those colors suit me' or 'that style suits me'. Use 'suit me' to express suitability. Suggestion: Use correct verbs to express fit or suitability ('suit me').

× I don't want to be outstanding in the crowds, I just want to keep low key in, especially in the public place.

✓ I don't want to stand out in crowds; I just want to keep a low profile, especially in public places.

Use 'stand out' instead of 'be outstanding', 'in crowds' without 'the', 'keep a low profile' is idiomatic, and 'public places' plural. Remove extra 'in'. Suggestion: Use standard idioms and correct prepositions for location.

× So I want to choose some simple colours.

✓ So I choose simple colors.

Simplify phrasing: 'choose' present tense for preference and American spelling 'colors' or British 'colours' consistently. Original is acceptable but slightly wordy. Suggestion: Use concise present simple to state preferences.