Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating what you like, avoid contradictory phrases ("colorful... like black"), and give one brief specific example or reason. Use correct article/noun agreement and limit to 2–3 short sentences.

예시: I like wearing simple, casual clothes. For example, I often wear a black T-shirt or blue jeans because they are easy to match and comfortable.

제안: Use present-tense phrasing and a clear reason. Begin with a direct statement (I prefer...), then add one linked reason using a linking word like "because". Keep it concise and correct verb forms and pronouns.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily and feel like myself. For instance, I often choose loose T-shirts and sneakers when I go out.

제안: Answer directly and correct subject-verb agreement. Give one specific reason and a brief example. Replace vague phrase "move faster" with "move more easily" if you mean ease of movement.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and allow me to move easily. For example, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt when I travel or exercise.

제안: Use clearer vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct answer (Yes/No), then explain concisely using correct articles and verbs. Replace filler phrases like "you know" and use a linking word such as "because".

예시: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I find it hard to match outfits. I usually try different combinations to make sure everything looks good.

제안: Organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid hesitations and unclear references ("our body"). Use linking words like "sometimes" and "other times" and give concrete examples of weekday vs weekend clothing.

예시: Yes. Sometimes I wear baggy, casual clothes like hoodies and jeans on weekdays for comfort, and other times I choose more fitted shirts or dresses at the weekend for going out with friends.

제안: Be concise and consistent. Start with a clear preference, then briefly explain the difference between what you like and what you usually wear. Use singular/plural correctly and avoid redundancy.

예시: I like white, but I usually wear black shirts or crop tops because they are easy to match. I also like brighter colors such as pink and purple for special occasions.

× I like to wear a colorful clothes like black.

✓ I like to wear colorful clothes, like black ones.

The noun 'clothes' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular adjective phrase 'a colorful'. Replace 'a colorful clothes' with 'colorful clothes' and add 'ones' after 'black' to refer back to 'clothes'. Also add a comma for clarity.

× I prepared to wear comfortable clothes because it's make me the real me and comfortable to move.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they make me feel like myself and comfortable to move.

'Prepared to wear' is incorrect for stating a preference; use 'prefer'. 'It's make' is wrong: subject-verb agreement and contraction misuse. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes' and present tense verb 'make'. Also 'make me the real me' is awkward; use 'make me feel like myself.'

× Yes, I prefer wearing T-shirt all the time because it make me comfortable and make me move faster.

✓ Yes, I prefer wearing T-shirts all the time because they make me comfortable and help me move faster.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'all the time' general statement (Singular/plural choice). More importantly 'it make' is a third person singular agreement error: 'it makes'. Since 'T-shirts' is plural, use 'they make'. Also add 'help' to clarify 'make me move faster.'

× Yeah, I prepare lot of time because it's really hard to match a outfit and, you know, to make look good.

✓ Yeah, I spend a lot of time because it's really hard to match an outfit and, you know, make it look good.

'Prepare lot of time' is incorrect; use 'spend a lot of time'. 'a outfit' should be 'an outfit' (article usage). 'to make look good' needs an object: 'make it look good.' This fixes quantifier and article errors and clarifies the clause.

× Yeah, sometimes our, uh, body, you know, the baggy clothes and sometimes over the fitted like fitted shirt and you know, like a dress.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I prefer baggy clothes on my body, and sometimes I wear more fitted clothes like a fitted shirt or a dress.

The original mixes pronouns and fragments: 'our, uh, body' is incorrect for a personal preference—use 'I' and 'my body'. Clarify sentence structure by stating 'I prefer' and use parallel structure 'baggy clothes' / 'more fitted clothes'. Replace 'over the fitted' with 'more fitted' and add conjunctions to form complete sentences.

× I like white but probably you will see me always wearing a black shirt or a black crop top something. But I actually like other color like pink and purple.

✓ I like white, but you'll probably always see me wearing a black shirt or a black crop top. I also like other colors like pink and purple.

Use 'you'll probably always see me' for natural word order. 'a black shirt or a black crop top something' is ungrammatical; remove 'something' and make the clause concise. 'other color' should be plural 'other colors' when giving examples. This fixes singular/plural and word order issues.