Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g. "I wear sports clothes, like track pants and T‑shirts"), avoid fillers, and add one brief specific reason with a linking word. Watch noun/verb agreement and word choice ("lower" → "trousers/track pants").

예시: I usually wear sports clothes, such as track pants and T‑shirts, because they are comfortable and help me relax when I’m at home or exercising.

제안: Answer directly with a clear preference and one supporting reason. Use correct grammar ("I prefer casual clothes"), avoid repetition, and use linking words (e.g. "because", "so"). Give a specific situation or result to make it concrete.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and still make me look neat; for example, I often choose a polo shirt and chinos for meetings and social events.

제안: Respond with a clear yes/no and give a concise reason plus a specific example. Correct vocabulary ("when I go jogging or exercise I wear T‑shirts and track pants"). Remove redundant phrases and fillers.

예시: Yes, I do. When I go jogging or to the gym I wear T‑shirts and track pants because they’re light and comfortable.

제안: Give a direct answer and add a clear reason with a linking phrase. Use correct sentence structure ("I don’t waste time choosing clothes because I work long hours"), and provide a brief example of your routine if relevant.

예시: No, I don’t. Because I work long hours I choose clothes quickly—usually planning outfits the night before so I save time in the morning.

제안: Answer directly and clearly contrast weekdays vs weekends using linking words ("On weekdays... whereas on weekends..."). Use correct vocabulary ("formal", "casual", "go out"), and give one specific example for each.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes like shirts and dress trousers for work, whereas at weekends I prefer casual outfits such as jeans and a T‑shirt when I go out with friends.

제안: State your preference clearly (e.g. "I like neutral colours and some bright colours") and give a specific reason and example. Avoid vague phrases and complete your sentences. Use linking words ("for example", "because").

예시: I like a mix of neutral colours like navy and grey for everyday wear, but I also enjoy wearing brighter colours such as red or green for special occasions because they make my outfits more lively.

× I use the sports clothes like uh lower and T-shirt because it is a comfortable and it gives me a relaxed.

✓ I wear sports clothes like shorts and a T-shirt because they are comfortable and make me feel relaxed.

Pronoun and noun choice: 'use' is incorrect for wearing clothing; 'wear' is the correct verb. 'sports clothes' is plural and should match plural verbs/pronouns: use 'they' not 'it'. 'lower' is incorrect word for trousers/shorts; choose 'shorts' or 'pants'. Add article 'a' before 'T-shirt'. 'gives me a relaxed' is ungrammatical; use 'make me feel relaxed'. Improve by using correct verb for clothing (wear), matching pronouns, and correct noun choices. Suggestion: practice collocations with clothing (wear, put on) and subject-pronoun agreement for plural nouns.

× Sometime you I use a casual clothes because it helps to improve my. Dressing sense and I look as smart so I use I prefer every time I casual clothes.

✓ Sometimes I wear casual clothes because they help improve my dressing sense and make me look smart, so I prefer casual clothes most of the time.

Quantifier and pronoun errors: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. Remove stray 'you'. 'a casual clothes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'clothes'—use no article and plural verb 'wear'. 'it helps' should be 'they help' to agree with plural 'clothes'. Sentence fragments: 'improve my.' incomplete; combine clauses. 'I look as smart' is incorrect—use 'make me look smart'. 'I prefer every time I casual clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'I prefer casual clothes most of the time'. Suggestion: pay attention to singular/plural forms and reorder clauses into a single clear sentence.

× Yes, this time I go for a booking and go for make exercise. This time I use I wear T-shirts and lower. It is comfortable for me.

✓ Yes, when I go jogging or to exercise I wear T-shirts and shorts. They are comfortable for me.

Tense and verb choice: 'this time I go for a booking and go for make exercise' is unclear and uses wrong verbs. Use 'when I go jogging or to exercise' for habitual context. 'use I wear' is redundant—choose 'I wear'. 'lower' is wrong word; use 'shorts' or 'pants'. Match plural 'T-shirts and shorts' with plural pronoun/verb 'they are'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and common collocations: 'go jogging', 'exercise', 'wear T-shirts'.

× No, I have not a waste of my time because I am a working person so I have not enough time to choosing my clothes.

✓ No, I do not waste my time choosing clothes because I work and do not have enough time to choose them.

Verb and quantifier errors: 'I have not a waste of my time' is ungrammatical—use 'I do not waste my time'. 'I am a working person' is acceptable but 'I work' is more natural. 'I have not enough time to choosing my clothes' mixes negative with wrong verb form; use 'do not have enough time to choose my clothes' or 'to choose them'. Use base verb after 'to'. Suggestion: practice negation with do/does (I do not ...), and infinitive form after 'to'.

× Yes, I use different styles of clothes like beacon and weekdays uh I want to go for party I use the casual casual clothes and sometime I go to the work I use the formal clothes.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. If I go to a party I wear casual clothes, and when I go to work I wear formal clothes.

Pronoun and word choice issues: 'use' is wrong for clothes—use 'wear'. 'beacon' is unclear—likely 'weekends'. Add preposition 'on weekdays and weekends'. Sentence run-ons need splitting into clear conditional clauses. 'sometime I go to the work' should be 'sometimes when I go to work'. Remove duplicate 'casual casual'. Suggestion: break long sentences into shorter ones, use correct prepositions for time expressions ('on weekdays/weekends'), and use 'wear' for clothing.

× I use different colors clothes like because it helps to improve my. Improve my clothing sense.

✓ I wear different colored clothes because they help improve my clothing sense.

Pronoun and adjective errors: 'use' should be 'wear'. 'different colors clothes' needs reordering and adjectival form: 'different colored clothes' or 'clothes of different colors'. 'because it helps' should be 'because they help' to agree with plural 'clothes'. Remove sentence fragment 'Improve my clothing sense' by combining clauses. Suggestion: learn adjective forms for color (colored) and ensure subject-verb agreement with plural nouns.