Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and grammatically correct: use singular/plural correctly, avoid repetition, and add one specific detail about preference. Keep to 1–2 sentences. For example, say you prefer certain fabric and why.

예시: I usually wear cotton shirts because they’re breathable and comfortable in warm weather. If I can’t find a cotton shirt I’ll just choose whatever is clean and convenient.

제안: Clarify contrast between casual and smart clothes, avoid wrong words (cashew → casual) and unnecessary phrases. Give a reason using linking words (because/so). Keep to 1–2 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because I feel more relaxed and I don’t need formal features like smart fabrics or special fastenings.

제안: Remove fillers (uh, um) and repetition. State your opinion clearly and add one specific reason or example using a linking word. Limit to 1–2 sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash, so I often wear them for running errands or casual meet-ups.

제안: Avoid hesitation and unclear phrases (self-image). Answer directly with a topic sentence and one clear reason using a linking word. Be concise and correct grammar.

예시: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I prioritize comfort, so I usually pick items that fit well and are clean.

제안: Focus on answering simply and clearly. Correct vocabulary (confusing words like 'cell phone') and structure: state whether you change styles, give one example and use linking words. Remove irrelevant details about washing unless concise and relevant.

예시: Usually I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear my school uniform or smart clothes, while on weekends I prefer casual outfits like jeans and T-shirts. I only repeat items if they are clean.

제안: Give a clear direct answer and a specific preference or reason. Avoid confusing words (cars) and filler. Use one sentence with a linking word to add brief detail.

예시: I don’t have a single favorite color for clothes, but I often choose neutral tones like navy or gray because they’re easy to match and look neat.

× I usually wear a cotton shirts but if there's none, there's no none in my wardrobe.

✓ I usually wear a cotton shirt, but if there isn't one, there's none in my wardrobe.

The noun 'shirts' conflicts with the singular modifier 'a cotton'; use 'a cotton shirt' (singular). Also 'there's none' is fine but 'there's no none' is ungrammatical; replace with 'there isn't one' or 'there's none'. Suggestion: match singular articles with singular nouns and avoid double negatives.

× I prefer comfortable and cashew coats since I don't need the technology in the in the smart clothes.

✓ I prefer comfortable and casual coats since I don't need the technology in smart clothes.

The word 'cashew' is a wrong word choice; the correct adjective is 'casual'. Also remove the duplicated 'the' before 'smart clothes' and omit 'the' before 'smart clothes' when speaking generally. Suggestion: choose the correct adjective and avoid unnecessary definite articles when speaking about clothing in general.

× Yes, since it's, uh, very comfortable and very common in my wardrobe and also, uh, it's, it's very useful for our everyday needs.

✓ Yes, since it's very comfortable and very common in my wardrobe and also very useful for everyday needs.

Multiple small redundancies and filler words interrupt the sentence. Grammatically 'it's' (it is) is correct for third person singular. Improve fluency by removing repeated 'uh' and duplicate 'it's' and drop the unnecessary 'our' when speaking generally. Suggestion: produce a concise sentence: 'it's very comfortable and common in my wardrobe and very useful for everyday needs.'

× Uh, no, uh, I don't need to, uh, have a self-image to uh, you know, choose, uh, the fit clothes. So therefore, uh, I just choose clothes which, where, which are comfortable and, and at, at, at the top.

✓ No, I don't need a particular self-image to choose the right clothes. Therefore, I just choose clothes that are comfortable and suit me best.

Original contains many fillers and poor structure: 'have a self-image to choose the fit clothes' is unclear. 'Which, where, which' is redundant and ungrammatical. Rephrase to clear meaning: 'a particular self-image' and 'choose the right clothes' or 'clothes that are comfortable'. Suggestion: remove fillers, use clear relative clause 'that are comfortable' and a concise concluding phrase.

× Uh, I don't have any cell phone wherever the clothes, which is for weekdays. This is for weekends except for uniforms because it's a, it's a must. Umm, but if the clothes aren't washed till let's say 2 weeks, 2 days, uh, I won't wear them.

✓ I don't have any specific set of clothes for weekdays; these are for weekends, except for uniforms because they are a must. But if clothes aren't washed for, say, two days, I won't wear them.

Original misuses 'cell phone' instead of 'set' or 'specific' and mixes pronouns and clauses incorrectly. 'This is for weekends' should be plural 'these are' to refer to clothes. 'It's a must' is better as 'they are a must' referring to uniforms. Time expression 'till let's say 2 weeks, 2 days' is confusing; choose 'for two days'. Suggestion: use correct referent pronouns (these/they) and clear time expressions.

× MMM I don't have any favorite on what cars do for my clothes because it just colors that's all.

✓ I don't have any favorite color for my clothes because I just like different colors, that's all.

The sentence uses 'what cars do' instead of 'what colors' and 'favorite on' is incorrect preposition choice. 'Favorite color for my clothes' is the correct phrase. Also 'it just colors' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I just like different colors.' Suggestion: use correct nouns ('color') and prepositions ('favorite color for').