Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and coherence: start with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and article use, and add a brief reason with linking words. Avoid unnecessary adjectives and repeat ideas.

예시: I like wearing fashionable clothes, such as crop tops and ripped jeans with decorative details. Because they fit well and reflect my personal style, I feel comfortable and more confident when I wear them.

제안: Be concise and correct collocations: use a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Fix awkward phrase like "work situation" and avoid repeating the same point.

예시: I prefer smart clothes, especially for work, because they help me appear professional in front of clients and boost my confidence. In addition, well-tailored outfits make me feel more energetic during the day.

제안: Combine repetitive sentences and use linking words to make your answer fluent. Vary vocabulary slightly and avoid repeating "usually" twice.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are relaxed and comfortable. I often wear them for casual activities, such as meeting friends or running errands, and I usually pair them with jeans for an easy, comfortable outfit.

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural: use a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason with linking words. Avoid overlong compound sentences.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I plan my outfits in advance. For example, I separate workwear and casual clothes in my closet, which makes selecting an outfit quick and easy.

제안: Tighten structure and correct tense/collocations: use a topic sentence then one specific contrast with linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "look more energetic" without context.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I usually wear smart, professional clothes to meet clients, while on weekends I prefer casual outfits for relaxation and errands.

제안: Improve clarity and grammar: state your preferences clearly, give specific reasons, avoid fillers like "uh", and correct article and plural errors. Don't claim trends without examples.

예시: I prefer black, white and dark green clothes because they look stylish and versatile. For instance, black and white outfits appear more elegant, while green adds a fresh, modern touch.

× I like wearing fashionable clothes like a short top and a ripped pants with decorative dots.

✓ I like wearing fashionable clothes like a short top and ripped pants with decorative dots.

The phrase 'a ripped pants' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'pants'. Remove the article and keep 'ripped' as an adjective before plural 'pants'. This fixes number agreement and corrects usage of the adjective + -ing gerund is acceptable here.

× I feel when wearing it will make me comfortable and confident.

✓ I feel that wearing them will make me comfortable and confident.

The original omits the conjunction 'that' needed to introduce the content clause and uses 'it' which mismatches plural 'clothes'. Use 'that' and 'them' or restructure the sentence. Also 'wearing' here correctly introduces the gerund clause acting as subject of 'will make'.

× I prefer wearing smart clothes because it makes me feel confident in front of my clients at work situation and smart clothes will make me more lively.

✓ I prefer wearing smart clothes because they make me feel confident in front of my clients at work, and smart clothes make me feel more lively.

'Clothes' is plural so use 'they make' not 'it makes'. Also keep parallel verb forms and remove redundant 'will' since this is a general preference; use present simple. Add a comma and 'feel' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, I do like wearing T-shirts. Wearing T-shirts will make me relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Wearing T-shirts makes me relaxed and comfortable.

Use simple present 'I like' instead of emphatic 'do' unless emphasizing. In the second sentence, use present simple 'makes' for general truth rather than 'will make'.

× I usually wear them in casual situations like going out with my friends or running errands.

✓ I usually wear them in casual situations, like going out with my friends or running errands.

Insert a comma before the example phrase for clarity. The tense is correct (present habitual), no change needed otherwise.

× I usually wear T-shirts with jeans and it's quite comfortable.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts with jeans, and that's quite comfortable.

Use 'that's' to refer back to the combination; add a comma and conjunction for correct sentence connection. Tense remains present habitual.

× I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I always know what I should wear at work or on weekends in casual situations, and my clothes are properly divided into different compartments in my closet, so it will be easy for me to choose.

✓ I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I always know what I should wear at work or on weekends, and my clothes are neatly divided into different compartments in my closet, so it's easy for me to choose.

Change 'properly' to 'neatly' for natural collocation. Replace 'will be' with 'it's' because this is a present habitual situation. Shorten repetition and add comma for clarity.

× Yes, I do wear different styles of clothes on weekends and work days.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and workdays.

Remove unnecessary emphatic 'do' for normal statement. 'Workdays' is commonly one word; keep present simple to describe routine.

× For work days I often wear smart clothes as I will look more energetic and professional in front of the clients, while weekends are for casual.

✓ On workdays I often wear smart clothes because I look more energetic and professional in front of clients, while weekends are for casual clothes.

Use 'because' for causal connection and present simple 'look' for habitual truth, not 'will look'. Remove 'the' before 'clients' unless referring to a specific group. Clarify 'casual clothes' to complete the idea.

× I like black and white or green clothes because they are trendy nowadays and uh, which will present a very high end image in front of other people.

✓ I like black, white, or green clothes because they are trendy nowadays and present a high-end image to other people.

Remove filler 'uh' and the relative pronoun 'which' that creates an incorrect clause. Use 'present' directly and 'to other people' or 'to others'. Hyphenate 'high-end'.

× And uh, a black and white clothes are cool.

✓ And black-and-white clothes are cool.

Remove filler 'uh' and the article 'a' which incorrectly uses singular article with plural 'clothes'. Hyphenate 'black-and-white' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.