Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and reduce hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. "loose clothes" repeated) and correct small grammar issues ("I find myself" → "I find").

예시: I usually prefer loose, light-colored clothes because I find them more comfortable and flattering for my slim build. For example, I often choose oversized T-shirts that allow me to move freely and keep cool in warm weather.

제안: Give a direct answer, then briefly explain why with a clear linking word. Reduce fillers and unclear phrases ("ignore the event"). Use correct phrasing ("comfort comes first").

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because comfort comes first for me. For instance, even at semi-formal events I will choose a neat but comfortable outfit so I can relax and focus on the occasion.

제안: Keep the answer natural but more structured: give the main statement, then one clear reason and one specific example. Remove hesitations and duplicate phrases.

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable. For example, at home I often wear my mum's oversized T-shirts because they fit loosely and help me stay cool while studying.

제안: Answer directly, then contrast past and present with clear linking words (e.g. "but now"). Remove fillers and correct small grammar ("as I grew up" or "as I got older"). Provide a specific example of how you choose now.

예시: I used to take a long time choosing clothes when I was a child, but now I decide quickly. For example, I usually pick the colour I like and the right size and buy it without asking my parents.

제안: Be more precise: say what you usually wear on weekdays vs weekends and use linking words ("if..., then..."). Avoid vague phrases like "much better clothes" — describe them specifically (smart, trendy).

예시: It depends. If I go out at the weekend I usually wear smarter or trendier clothes like slim jeans and a fitted shirt, but on weekdays when I'm at home or studying I prefer baggier, loose clothes such as oversized T-shirts.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then provide two concise reasons with linking words (e.g. "because" and "also"). Fix small grammar issues ("dark colours" and "match other clothes"). Avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer light-coloured clothes because they absorb less heat, so I stay cooler in warm weather. Also, light colours are easy to match with other items, which makes choosing outfits simpler.

× Mostly I like to wear loose clothes uh because I am find myself more comfortable in them and since I am a little skinny umm uh, loose clothes look much better on me rather than tied clothes and loose clothes.

✓ Mostly I like to wear loose clothes because I find myself more comfortable in them and since I am a little skinny, loose clothes look much better on me than tight clothes.

Used incorrect pronoun/verb combination 'I am find' instead of 'I find'. Also 'tied clothes' is incorrect; intended word is 'tight'. 'Rather than' followed by repeated 'clothes and loose clothes' is redundant. Suggest using 'than' for comparison and remove repetition.

× Mostly uh they, I, oh I like to wear light colored clothes also.

✓ I also like to wear light-colored clothes.

Sentence is disfluent and uses unnecessary filler words. 'They, I, oh I' should be removed. Place 'also' appropriately and hyphenate 'light-colored' as a compound adjective.

× I prefer to wear more comfortable and casual clothes. Uh, I ignore the event, I choose my comfort nest 1st and uh, I do not think uh twice uh, before wearing clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear more comfortable and casual clothes. I ignore the event and choose my comfort first, and I do not think twice before choosing what to wear.

'Ignore the event' is awkward; better 'ignore the event and choose my comfort first'. 'Comfort nest 1st' is incorrect phrase; use 'comfort first'. 'Think twice before wearing clothes' should be 'think twice before choosing what to wear' for clarity and correct verb usage.

× I love wearing T-shirts and I see myself, I find myself wearing T-shirts most of the time.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts and I find myself wearing them most of the time.

Redundant phrasing 'I see myself, I find myself' should be simplified to 'I find myself'. Pronoun 'them' replaces repeated 'T-shirts' for smoother sentence.

× Even at home I'm wearing my mom T-shirt because they are larger in size and I I really find them comfortable.

✓ Even at home I wear my mom's T-shirt because they are larger in size and I really find them comfortable.

Present continuous 'I'm wearing' is acceptable but habitual action is better expressed with simple present 'I wear'. Missing possessive 'mom's'. Duplicate 'I I' removed.

× I feel like I am able to breathe more.

✓ I feel like I am able to breathe more easily.

Adverb 'easily' needed to modify verb 'breathe' rather than using 'more' alone. This corrects adverb use.

× I used to spend a lot of time when I was a child, but umm as I grow up I tend to buy clothes really quickly and I do not trouble my parents a lot.

✓ I used to spend a lot of time when I was a child, but as I grew up I began to buy clothes more quickly and I did not trouble my parents as much.

Mixing past 'used to' with present 'grow up' is inconsistent. 'Grow up' should be past 'grew up'. For change over time use 'began to buy' or 'now buy'. 'Do not trouble' should be past 'did not trouble' to match timeframe; 'a lot' to 'as much' is more natural.

× So I quickly choose my clothes.

✓ So now I quickly choose my clothes.

Add 'now' to indicate current habitual action contrasting with past, keeping present simple. Original is grammatically acceptable but clarifies timeframe.

× Whatever colour I like and I whatever size fits me, I'll take it.

✓ Whatever color I like and whatever size fits me, I'll take it.

Redundant 'I' before 'whatever size' should be removed. Also 'colour' vs 'color' spelling variation acceptable; kept consistent as 'color' here. Sentence structure corrected by removing extra pronoun.

× If I'm going out, I would completely change my style.

✓ If I'm going out, I completely change my style.

Mixing present real conditional with 'would' is unnatural. For habitual present situations use simple present in the main clause: 'If I'm going out, I completely change my style' or 'I will completely change my style' for specific future events.

× I would go from baggier clothes to much better clothes and clothes that would stand out.

✓ I would go from baggier clothes to smarter clothes or clothes that stand out.

'Much better clothes' is vague; 'smarter' is clearer. Repeated 'clothes' can be reduced. Use 'stand out' not 'would stand out' for habitual contrast.

× If I'm staying at home, I would wear loose clothes. I would wear my mom's clothes. Umm, I would see.

✓ If I'm staying at home, I wear loose clothes. I wear my mom's clothes. I would see.

Use simple present for habitual situations: 'I wear'. 'I would see' is vague; recommend 'I'll see' or 'it depends' but left minimal.

× I like light colored clothes because I feel like if I would wear dark colour clothes they would attract more heat and it would I would end up uh, feeling hot.

✓ I like light-colored clothes because I feel that if I wore dark-colored clothes they would absorb more heat and I would end up feeling hot.

Conditional form: use past tense 'wore' in the if-clause for unreal present condition, not 'would wear'. 'Attract more heat' better expressed as 'absorb more heat'. Removed duplicate 'it would I would' and fillers.

× That's why I like to wear light coloured clothing and plus I think light coloured clothing fits with all other coloured of clothings.

✓ That's why I like to wear light-colored clothing, and I think light-colored clothing goes with all other colors of clothing.

Awkward phrase 'fits with all other coloured of clothings' corrected to 'goes with all other colors of clothing'. Removed 'plus' and fixed pluralization 'clothings' to 'clothing' or 'clothes' and consistent spelling.