Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details or reasons. Avoid vague phrasing like "a kind of clothes" and use linking words if you expand.

예시: I prefer clothes that are comfortable. For example, I often wear soft cotton tees and loose jeans because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed all day.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence and a clear reason; correct grammar and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to add a supporting detail.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. For instance, when I go out with friends I usually choose sneakers and a hoodie since they are practical and comfortable.

제안: Expand slightly with one specific reason or example to make the answer more informative while keeping it short and natural. Pay attention to article and plural forms ("T-shirts").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile. I wear plain T-shirts at home and printed ones when I go out as they are easy to match with jeans.

제안: Provide a clearer, grammatically correct reason and one specific detail. Use linking words (e.g., "because" or "so") and avoid awkward phrases like "the particular reasons."

예시: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look stylish in front of my friends. For example, I often try different outfits and check them in the mirror before going out.

제안: Give a brief topic sentence then add a specific contrast between weekday and weekend styles using linking words (e.g., "On weekdays... but on weekends...").

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform or smart casual clothes, but on weekends I prefer more relaxed outfits like jeans and a T-shirt.

제안: State your preference clearly and add one brief explanation or consequence. Avoid repeating "but"; use a linking word to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I like green clothes because the color feels fresh and calm. However, I mostly wear a school uniform during weekdays, so I usually choose green items on weekends or at home.

× A kind of clothes that I am comfortable with.

✓ Clothes that I am comfortable in.

Use plural noun 'clothes' without 'a kind of' because 'a kind of' requires a singular count noun (e.g., 'a kind of shirt'). Also use correct preposition 'in' with 'comfortable'. Suggestion: say 'Clothes that I am comfortable in' or 'A kind of clothing that I am comfortable with.'

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it's very comfort wear.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are very comfortable to wear.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'they are' not 'it's'. 'Comfort' is a noun; use adjective 'comfortable'. Add 'to wear' to complete the expression. Suggestion: 'I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they are very comfortable.'

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Alternatively use the singular with an article: 'a T-shirt'. Suggestion: 'Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.'

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because the particular reasons I want to look good in front of my friends.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes because I want to look good in front of my friends.

The phrase 'the particular reasons' is unnecessary and makes the sentence ungrammatical. Remove it and use a clear subordinate clause 'because I want...'. Suggestion: keep cause-and-effect structure: 'because I want to look good in front of my friends.'

× The color clothes that I like is green, but mostly I wear uniforms in school but that's OK.

✓ The colour of the clothes that I like is green, but mostly I wear a school uniform and that's OK.

Several issues: 'The color clothes' is incorrect—use 'the colour of the clothes' or simply 'I like green clothes'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the colour... is green' is OK after fixing subject. 'Uniforms in school' is better as 'a school uniform' if referring to typical single uniform; keep consistent number. Remove duplicate 'but'. Suggestion: 'I like green clothes, but mostly I wear a school uniform and that's OK.'