Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer direct and grammatical. State a clear preference (or say you like many kinds) and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it under five sentences.

예시: I like wearing a variety of clothes rather than sticking to one style. For example, I often wear jeans and a sweater for casual days, but I choose a shirt and blazer for special occasions because they look more professional.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Explain reasons with specific details and linking words (because, therefore). Avoid vague words like 'easily'.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they are more practical for my daily routine. For instance, casual jeans and a soft hoodie are affordable and allow me to move freely when I commute or study.

제안: Answer directly and correct grammar. Give a specific reason or example and use linking words. Avoid confusing time references like 'in a week winter'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, in winter I layer a T-shirt under a sweater, which makes dressing simpler and quicker.

제안: Provide a clear, grammatical explanation with specific reasons. Replace unclear words like 'species' with 'options' or 'styles' and finish your thought. Use linking words to structure the answer.

예시: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because there are many styles and colours to consider. For example, I compare different outfits to decide what matches my plans for the day.

제안: Be clear and use correct vocabulary. State your weekday and weekend choices and give a reason. Avoid inappropriate or nonsense words like 'banana' and 'underwear' unless you mean them; choose suitable clothing items.

예시: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I usually wear jeans and a plain T-shirt because I need to look neat for work, while at weekends I prefer comfortable loungewear like joggers and sweatshirts for relaxing.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words and avoid repetition. Explain how the colour suits you (practicality, style, mood).

예시: I prefer black because it suits my personal style and is easy to match with other items. For instance, black jackets and trousers hide stains and make it simple to create a smart, cohesive outfit.

× I would like to wear any clothes because I didn't manage all.

✓ I would like to wear any clothes because I didn't manage to buy everything.

The original sentence uses 'manage all' which is ungrammatical. The verb 'manage' usually requires an infinitive (manage to do something). Also 'all' is vague; 'everything' or 'all of them' is clearer. Correction supplies the infinitive form and a clearer object.

× I would like to wear casual clothes because these were very affordable and easily and they will give comfort.

✓ I would like to wear casual clothes because they are very affordable and comfortable.

The sentence mixes past 'were', adverb 'easily' misplaced, and future 'will give' incorrectly. Use present tense 'are' to state a general fact. Replace 'easily' with adjective 'comfortable' or 'easy to care for'. Remove redundant future phrase.

× Yes, definitely yes. I would like to wear T-shirt because is it this very comfortable and easily to maintain in a week winter.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like wearing T-shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to maintain in a cold week.

The original has word order errors ('is it this'), incorrect article 'T-shirt' singular after general statement, wrong adverb/adjective forms 'easily to maintain'. Use plural 'T-shirts' or 'a T-shirt' consistently, correct subject-verb agreement ('they are') and use adjective 'easy to maintain'. Clarify 'week winter' to 'cold week' or 'winter week'.

× Definitely, yes. I spend a lot of time in choosing clothes because there were many species, because there are many species, and I will.

✓ Definitely. I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because there are many styles to choose from.

Do not use 'in choosing' after 'spend time' (use verb+ing without 'in' optionally). 'Species' is incorrect for clothing; use 'styles'. Remove contradictory past 'there were' and unfinished 'and I will'.

× Yes, I will wear different style of clothes on weekend and weekdays. I prefer on weekdays as casual jeans and T-shirts and at weekends I prefer to wear any banana or any underwear.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I prefer casual jeans and T-shirts, and on weekends I prefer comfortable loungewear or underwear.

'Will' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use simple present. Use plural 'styles' and correct word order 'on weekdays and weekends'. 'Prefer on weekdays as casual jeans' is incorrect; rephrase. 'Any banana' is nonsensical; replaced with plausible 'comfortable loungewear'.

× I would like black colour because it is suitable for my personality. It is my favorite colour and this will suit my clothes.

✓ I like the color black because it suits my personality. It is my favorite color and it goes well with my clothes.

'Would like black colour' is awkward; use 'I like the color black'. Use 'suits' (present tense) for general truth rather than 'is suitable'. Replace 'this will suit my clothes' with 'it goes well with my clothes'. Also use consistent article 'the' and spelling 'color' or 'colour' consistently.