Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence (I prefer casual clothes), then give one or two specific details (types, reasons) using linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases (e.g. 'halfway T-shirts', 'small pants'). Use correct words (short-sleeved T-shirts, shorts, slim jeans) and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual clothes. For example, I usually wear short-sleeved T-shirts and shorts at home because they are comfortable. I also wear slim jeans sometimes, but I find very tight jeans uncomfortable. Overall, comfort is the main reason I choose casual wear.

제안: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and one exception. Avoid hesitations and repeated words ('enjoy the normal'). Use linking words (because, however) and finish the thought (e.g. mention smart clothes for meetings). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and confident. I don't have to worry about my outfit, which reduces stress. However, I wear smart clothes for meetings or formal events to look professional.

제안: Give a clear reason and avoid repetitive filler words. Use correct grammar ('since I was born' not 'since I born') and precise vocabulary (short-sleeved T-shirts). Limit to 2–3 supporting sentences and include a specific example or preference (color/type).

예시: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts. Since I was born in India, the weather is often hot, so short-sleeved T-shirts are the most comfortable for me. I especially like blue T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to match.

제안: Answer directly, then explain with clear reasons and avoid vague or incorrect phrases ('return the Microsoft'). Use linking words (because, so) and give a concrete example of your shopping habit. Keep to 3–4 sentences.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually go to the nearest mall or shop online and pick items I like. However, I prefer shopping in physical stores because I can try clothes on and avoid the hassle of returns.

제안: Structure your answer: state 'Yes' then explain the difference with reasons using clear vocabulary (long pants for safety, casual on weekends). Correct grammar and replace unclear phrases ('visited a launch pants', 'lots of cheap') with precise ones. Use linking words (because, so) and keep it concise.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear long pants and long-sleeved shirts because I work as a machinist and these protect me for safety reasons. On weekends I prefer casual clothes like T-shirts and shorts to relax.

제안: Answer directly with one sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons. Avoid vague claims ('extra skill') and correct grammar ('white clothes', 'I feel more confident'). Be specific about contexts when you choose white (work, events) and avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I like white clothes because they make me feel confident and comfortable. For example, I wear white shirts to job interviews or meetings because they look neat and give me a professional appearance.

× Usually I wear the casual clothing most of the times at home.

✓ Usually I wear casual clothes most of the time at home.

Use of articles and countable/uncountable nouns: 'the casual clothing' is unnatural here. 'Clothing' as a general concept is uncountable and does not need 'the'; more natural is 'casual clothes' or 'casual clothing'. 'Most of the times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time' or 'most times'. Suggestion: use 'usually' or 'most of the time' but not both together unless stylistically intended.

× Mostly I wear the halfway T-shirts and the small pants and halfway T-shirt is basically I like any colors.

✓ Mostly I wear half-sleeve T-shirts and small pants, and I like T-shirts in any color.

Word choice and adjective order: 'halfway T-shirts' is incorrect; the intended term is 'half-sleeve' or 'short-sleeve'. 'Small pants' is awkward; use 'small pants' only if referring to size—better 'tight/narrow pants' if that was meant. 'any colors' should be 'any color' after 'in' or 'in any color'. Reorder the sentence for clarity and correct adjective-noun pairs.

× I don't have any specific color but I can find all colors used on me.

✓ I don't have any specific favourite color, but I can wear any color.

Verb and phrase usage: 'can find all colors used on me' is ungrammatical. The speaker likely means they can wear any color. Use present simple 'I don't have' and 'I can wear' to express general preferences. Use 'favourite color' for clarity.

× When it comes to the pants it's like narrow jeans are usually weird.

✓ When it comes to pants, narrow jeans usually feel uncomfortable/are usually odd for me.

Preposition and article use: 'When it comes to the pants' should be 'When it comes to pants' (no article). 'it's like' is colloquial and unclear; rephrase to state the opinion. Choose a clear adjective ('uncomfortable' or 'odd') and use 'narrow jeans' without 'the'.

× So the casual is my favorite one and most comfortable one.

✓ So casual clothes are my favourite and most comfortable choice.

Article and noun use: 'the casual' is incomplete—use 'casual clothes' or 'casual style'. 'favorite one' is awkward; 'favourite choice' or 'my favourite' is better. Maintain parallel structure.

× As I told you, I mostly wear the casual clothes and I enjoy wearing them.

✓ As I told you, I mostly wear casual clothes and I enjoy wearing them.

Article use with plural nouns: 'the casual clothes' should be 'casual clothes' when speaking generally. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× Uh, whenever I wear this kind of clothes, I enjoy the normal, I enjoy feeling good, I don't have to stress out, stressed out by my clothing and I feel more comfortable and more confident whenever I need it.

✓ Whenever I wear these kinds of clothes, I feel normal and good; I don't feel stressed by my clothing, and I feel more comfortable and confident when I need to.

Pronoun-number agreement and adverb placement: 'this kind of clothes' should be 'these kinds of clothes' or 'this kind of clothing'. 'I enjoy the normal' is ungrammatical; use 'I feel normal'. Reposition adverbs and verbs for clarity ('I don't feel stressed by my clothing'). Simplify to avoid repetition.

× Apart from this, uh, whenever I have to attain any meeting or something.

✓ Apart from that, whenever I have to attend a meeting or something, I wear more formal clothes.

Sentence fragment and word choice: 'attain any meeting' is incorrect; the verb should be 'attend'. The original is a fragment lacking a main clause. Complete the sentence by stating the consequence (e.g., wearing formal clothes).

× Well, yes, absolutely. I love T-shirts since I born in India over there uh, the temperature is, is pretty high.

✓ Well, yes, absolutely. I have loved T-shirts since I was born in India because the temperature there is quite high.

Tense and verb form: 'since I born' is incorrect; after 'since' with a time point use past form 'I was born' and present perfect 'have loved' to show a continuing preference from birth. Also correct word order and causal connector 'because'.

× So the, the level of the temp, the atmosphere is high.

✓ So the temperature is high there.

Wordiness and noun choice: 'level of the temp, the atmosphere is high' is awkward and repetitive. Use 'temperature is high' for clarity.

× So at that time TT shirt is the most appropriate clothing.

✓ So at that time a T-shirt is the most appropriate clothing.

Article use: 'TT shirt' seems to be a typo for 'T-shirt'. Use the indefinite article 'a' for a general reference: 'a T-shirt is the most appropriate clothing' or better 'the most appropriate type of clothing'.

× So I would like to wear most of the times I enjoy the half sleeve T-shirt and the the blue 1 is.

✓ So I usually like to wear half-sleeve T-shirts most of the time, and I especially like the blue ones.

Tense and plurality: 'would like to wear most of the times' is awkward—use 'usually like to wear' or 'most of the time'. 'the blue 1 is' is ungrammatical; use 'the blue ones' to refer to plural T-shirts. Maintain consistent present simple for habits.

× Not at all. Uh, most of the times whenever I required to buy something, I usually went to the nearest mall or the shopping website and choose the whatever I like.

✓ Not at all. Most of the time, whenever I need to buy something, I usually go to the nearest mall or a shopping website and choose whatever I like.

Tense consistency: 'required' and 'went' are past; the speaker is describing regular habits so use present simple: 'need' and 'go'. 'the shopping website' should be 'a shopping website' or 'shopping websites'. 'choose the whatever I like' should be 'choose whatever I like'.

× But I prefer to offline shopping where I can, you know, taste, uh, taste fit and you know, I don't have to.

✓ But I prefer shopping offline where I can try things on to check the fit, and I don't have to return items.

Preposition and verb use: 'prefer to offline shopping' is incorrect; say 'prefer shopping offline' or 'prefer to shop offline'. 'taste fit' is wrong; use 'try things on' or 'check the fit'. Complete the clause 'I don't have to return items' for clarity.

× I don't like to return the Microsoft.

✓ I don't like having to return items.

Incorrect word choice and structure: 'return the Microsoft' is likely a mistaken phrase. Replace with 'return items' or 'return purchases'. Use gerund 'having to return' to express dislike of the situation.

× So most of the time I prefer to go to physical shop.

✓ So most of the time I prefer to go to a physical shop.

Article and noun number: 'physical shop' needs an article 'a' and could be plural 'physical shops' depending on meaning. Use present simple 'prefer' for habitual action.

× In weekdays I have to go to the job every day and over there I usually wear the the long pant because the my companies require the long pant because I work in the machine.

✓ On weekdays I have to go to work every day, and there I usually wear long pants because my company requires them since I work with machines.

Prepositions and articles: Use 'on weekdays' not 'in weekdays'. 'go to the job' should be 'go to work'. 'the the long pant' and 'the my companies' are incorrect; use plural 'long pants' and 'my company'. Streamline repetition and clarify reason 'since I work with machines'.

× I work as a machinist over there, lots of cheap.

✓ I work as a machinist there; the environment is quite dusty/noisy (or 'there are many hazards').

Nonsensical phrase 'lots of cheap' is incorrect adjective use. Possibly intended to describe conditions ('lots of dust' or 'many hazards' or 'it is dangerous'). Replace with appropriate descriptive adjective and restructure the sentence.

× So for the safety reason, I visited a launch pants and the long shirt, T-shirt, long shirt.

✓ So for safety reasons, I wear long pants and long shirts.

Wrong verb and phrasing: 'visited a launch pants' makes no sense. Use 'wear long pants and long shirts' to state clothing worn for safety. Use plural 'reasons' and correct verb 'wear'.

× But on the weekend, as I told you, I like to wear the casual clothes most of.

✓ But on the weekend, as I told you, I like to wear casual clothes most of the time.

Incomplete phrase 'most of' should be 'most of the time'. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'casual clothes'.

× Personally speaking, I like white one.

✓ Personally, I like white ones.

Pronoun and article: 'white one' is vague; if referring to clothes, use 'white ones' (plural) or 'the colour white'. 'Personally speaking' can be shortened to 'Personally'.

× Whenever I wear the white cloth I feel confident, I feel comfortable also and I feel I have the extra energy and an extra skill that I can utilize.

✓ Whenever I wear white clothes I feel confident and comfortable, and I feel I have extra energy that I can use.

Wrong noun form: 'the white cloth' should be 'white clothes' or 'a white shirt'. 'an extra skill' is odd; likely meant 'extra energy'. Use 'use' instead of 'utilize' for natural speech.

× So I feel might more comfortable, more confident whenever we are the white one.

✓ So I feel much more comfortable and confident when I wear white.

Pronoun and modal errors: 'might more comfortable' is incorrect; use 'much more comfortable'. 'whenever we are the white one' is ungrammatical—should be 'when I wear white'. Keep subject consistent.