Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because or so) and correct small errors (e.g., "must be" → "must be" → "and they must be").

예시: I prefer light Japanese or Korean-style clothes because they look cozy and are easy to move in. For example, I like loose linen tops and wide trousers since they give a relaxed vibe and are comfortable for everyday activities.

제안: Start with a clear direct statement, then give a specific reason using a linking word such as "because". Correct grammar (plural/singular, articles) and simplify phrases to sound natural.

예시: I prefer comfortable casual clothes in daily life because I work in a hospital and need to move around a lot. For example, I wear breathable scrubs or loose jackets rather than tight coats because they let me move freely.

제안: Give a direct answer then one clear reason. Avoid fillers (umm) and unclear words. Use correct vocabulary ("T-shirts", "shopping", "events"). Keep it to two or three sentences.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are casual and comfortable. For instance, I often choose a plain T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends because it looks neat without being formal.

제안: Answer directly and correct tense and phrasing. Use a linking phrase (for example, when) and give a specific time estimate and reason. Avoid extra vague phrases like "feeding them."

예시: Yes, I often spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes. For example, before an important appointment I might spend about an hour deciding what fits me well and suits the occasion.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then contrast with specifics using linking words (however, but). Correct word choice and grammar ("same style", "depend on the occasion"). Provide a concrete example of when you change style.

예시: Usually I wear the same style on weekdays and weekends, but it depends on the occasion. For example, I wear casual clothes at the weekend, but for a formal event I choose a smarter outfit like a blazer and trousers.

제안: Begin with a clear preference sentence, then explain why using a linking word (because). Use correct capitalization and grammar ("light gray"). Add one specific example of clothing in those colors.

예시: I prefer soft colors such as soft brown, pale yellow, and light gray because they suit my skin tone and look more subtle than bright colors. For instance, I often wear a light gray sweater or a soft brown coat because they make me feel calm and put-together.

× I would like to wear a cozy style light Japanese or Korean style but the case is must be easy to move and give a cozy vibe as well.

✓ I would like to wear a cozy, light Japanese or Korean style, but the clothes must be easy to move in and give a cozy vibe as well.

The original sentence uses awkward noun phrasing and a misplaced modal structure. 'the case is must be' is incorrect; use 'the clothes must be' and include the preposition 'in' after 'easy to move'. Also add commas and reorder adjectives ('cozy, light Japanese or Korean style') to improve clarity and correctness. Grammar problem type id: 10

× In daily life I prefer to wear a comfortable clothes instead of smart clothes because I work in hospital that require to move a lot so welling tight coat can make me feel uncomfortable.

✓ In daily life I prefer to wear comfortable clothes instead of smart clothes because I work in a hospital that requires me to move a lot, so a very tight coat can make me feel uncomfortable.

'a comfortable clothes' is wrong because 'clothes' is plural and needs no 'a'. 'work in hospital' needs the article 'a hospital'. 'that require to move' should be 'that requires me to move' to match subject-verb agreement and include the object. 'welling tight coat' seems intended as 'very tight coat' and needs the article 'a'. Grammar problem type id: 22

× Definitely 2 shirt is a part of casual cloth for me and I usually wear T-shirt a lot, especially when umm going to shirt because T-shirt is kind of like not that formal but still looking good.

✓ Definitely a T-shirt is part of my casual wardrobe and I usually wear T-shirts a lot, especially when I'm going out, because a T-shirt is not very formal but still looks good.

'2 shirt' is unclear; likely meant 'a T-shirt' or 'T-shirts'. 'casual cloth' should be 'casual wardrobe' or 'casual clothes'. 'when umm going to shirt' is unclear; corrected to 'when I'm going out'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'T-shirt... looks good.' Grammar problem type id: 1

× I am a person who spent a lot of time choosing clothes such as before I have some appointment I spend one hour to choosing cloth and feeding them. Like is it fit for me or is it suitable for that occasion?

✓ I am a person who spends a lot of time choosing clothes; for example, before I have an appointment I spend an hour choosing clothes and preparing them. I ask myself: does it fit me and is it suitable for the occasion?

Mixed tenses: 'spent' should be present 'spends' to match 'I am a person who'. Use 'an appointment' with article. 'spend one hour to choosing' should be 'spend an hour choosing'. 'feeding them' is incorrect; 'preparing them' fits. Questions need correct word order: 'does it fit me' not 'is it fit for me'. Grammar problem type id: 5

× Normally I wear a same styles both weekdays and weekend is very depends on occasion. If for more I will shame my style to be more formal cold but if it casual then wear casual.

✓ Normally I wear the same style on both weekdays and weekends; it very much depends on the occasion. If needed, I will change my style to be more formal, but if it is casual then I wear casual clothes.

Pronoun and determiner errors: 'a same styles' should be 'the same style'. Use plural 'weekends'. 'is very depends on occasion' corrected to 'it very much depends on the occasion'. 'shame my style' is wrong verb; likely 'change my style'. Add subject 'I' in second clause and article 'it is casual'. Grammar problem type id: 12

× I prefer a tone like soft brown, soft yellow, maybe light Gray because is I think I look best when I'm wearing that kind of color rather than bright color.

✓ I prefer tones like soft brown, soft yellow, and maybe light gray because I think I look best when I'm wearing those colors rather than bright colors.

Use plural 'tones' and 'colors' for lists. Capitalization: 'gray' should be lowercase. Remove redundant 'is' and reorder to 'I think I look best'. Use 'those colors' to refer back to the list. Grammar problem type id: 13