Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid hesitation and repetition.

예시: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I often wear jeans and a T‑shirt when I go shopping or meet friends, since they suit most informal occasions.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., singular/plural, pronouns) and avoid vague phrases.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they let me move easily and feel relaxed. For instance, a simple T‑shirt and jeans are suitable for running errands or meeting friends, so I can dress the same for many everyday activities.

제안: Answer directly, then give a concise reason and one specific example. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “depends on the ones wearing it.”

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I wear a T‑shirt with sweatpants for studying at home or with jeans when I go out with friends.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about how much time you spend, then use linking words to contrast everyday choices and special occasions. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and be specific about what makes special occasions harder.

예시: It depends on the occasion. For everyday wear I usually choose a T‑shirt and sweatpants quickly, but for special events like parties I spend more time deciding because I want to look appropriate and well put together.

제안: Give a clear contrast using a linking word (e.g., "however"). Correct small errors (articles, plural forms) and be specific about typical outfits for each period.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear a T‑shirt and sweatpants because I want comfort while working or studying. However, on weekends I prefer a simple dress, especially when my family goes to church.

제안: Answer directly, then give a clear reason and one specific example. Use precise language (e.g., "lighter shades" -> "light colours") and avoid redundant phrasing.

예시: I prefer light colours because they feel cooler and more comfortable. For example, I often choose white or pastel T‑shirts in summer because they reflect heat and help me stay comfortable.

× To be honest, I like clothes, but I'd rather wear a casual one because it's it makes me comfortable and it's easier to move and it's easier to, uh, navigate to which which places can I use it?

✓ To be honest, I like clothes, but I'd rather wear casual ones because they make me comfortable and they make it easier to move and to know which places I can wear them to.

Problems: redundant 'it's it', incorrect noun phrase 'a casual one' (singular) after general 'clothes', and awkward clause 'navigate to which which places can I use it'. Use plural 'casual ones' to agree with 'clothes', replace 'it's it makes me' with 'they make me', and rephrase final part to 'know which places I can wear them to'. Maintain present tense and modality 'would rather'.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes, it's easier to move and you can use it everywhere and it makes me be myself by just wearing a simple ones.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes; they're easier to move in, you can wear them everywhere, and they let me be myself by wearing simple ones.

Problems: pronoun and agreement errors — 'it's' refers to singular but 'clothes' is plural; 'it makes me be myself' is awkward; 'a simple ones' mixes singular article with plural noun. Use plural pronoun 'they' and correct verbs: 'easier to move in' and 'they let me be myself'. Use 'simple ones' without 'a'.

× Yes I do, I find it casual and it's easier to move. I can wear it whenever and wherever I want it and it depends on the ones wearing it, but for me I like it. I will definitely go wearing T-shirts every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I find them casual and easy to move in. I can wear them whenever and wherever I want, and it depends on who is wearing them; but for me, I like them. I would definitely wear T-shirts every day.

Problems: pronoun agreement — 'it' used for T-shirts (plural) should be 'them'; awkward phrases 'it depends on the ones wearing it' should be 'depends on who is wearing them'; 'go wearing' is unnatural — use 'wear'. Use conditional/modal 'would' for habitual preference is acceptable, or 'would definitely wear' to express inclination.

× Sometimes it depends upon the occasion that I'm going to attend to, but if it's for an everyday use, I'll go definitely with the T-shirt and a sweatpants. But if I'm going to a party or I'm gonna attend something special, I find it hard to make time to fix.

✓ Sometimes it depends on the occasion I'm going to attend, but for everyday use I'll definitely go with a T-shirt and sweatpants. If I'm going to a party or attending something special, I find it hard to make time to get ready.

Problems: unnecessary 'upon' and trailing 'to' after 'attend'; article and number mismatch 'a sweatpants' — 'sweatpants' is plural so no 'a'; word order 'I'll go definitely' is awkward — use 'I'll definitely go'; informal 'gonna' should be 'going to' or 'attending'; 'make time to fix' is unclear — use 'get ready'.

× For weekdays I usually go for a casual look I wear AT shirt and a sweatpants. However when on weekends I usually go with a simple dress, specially when the family's going to church.

✓ On weekdays I usually go for a casual look: I wear a T-shirt and sweatpants. However, on weekends I usually wear a simple dress, especially when the family is going to church.

Problems: missing preposition 'On weekdays', capitalization and typo 'AT shirt' -> 'a T-shirt', article and number 'a sweatpants' incorrect (use 'sweatpants' without 'a'), missing punctuation between clauses, 'specially' should be 'especially', and 'the family's' ambiguous — expand to 'the family is' for clarity.

× I definitely go on the lighter shades of clothes because I find it easier to wear and comfortable. I feel like when I'm wearing the darker shades of T-shirts I feel like I sweat more.

✓ I definitely prefer lighter shades of clothing because I find them easier and more comfortable to wear. I feel that when I'm wearing darker-colored T-shirts I sweat more.

Problems: preposition 'go on' is incorrect — use 'prefer' or 'choose'; 'shades of clothes' is awkward — use 'shades of clothing' or 'lighter shades'; pronoun agreement 'it' should be 'them' for plural 'shades' or 'clothes'; 'darker shades of T-shirts' better as 'darker-colored T-shirts'; avoid repeating 'I feel like' — use 'I feel that' or a single 'I feel'.