Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be slightly more concise and add one specific example to make the answer more vivid. Use a clear topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking word.

예시: I prefer simple, comfortable clothes. For example, I often wear a plain T‑shirt with jeans because they’re easy to move in and still look neat for most occasions.

제안: Deliver a direct topic sentence and reduce fillers like “you know.” Add a concise reason and a short example of a special occasion.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I’m outdoors a lot for study and work. However, I wear smart clothes for special occasions, such as job interviews or formal dinners.

제안: This is a clear short answer; you can strengthen it by giving one specific example or describing a favorite T‑shirt to add detail.

예시: Yes, I do. I especially like plain cotton T‑shirts because they’re breathable for daily activities; my favorite is a navy one I wear almost every weekend.

제안: Good structure. Improve by adding a linking word and a specific example of a special event to make it more concrete.

예시: Not really; I pick clothes quickly most days. However, when I have a special event — for example, a friend’s wedding — I spend more time choosing an outfit that flatters me.

제안: Avoid vague phrases like “a little bit.” Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words and give a specific contrast between weekday and weekend styles.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear simple, practical clothes like chinos and a shirt for comfort at work, whereas on weekends I switch to relaxed outfits such as hoodies and jeans for leisure.

제안: Finish the sentence and provide one specific example of how you combine those colors. Also correct grammar (colors look). Keep it to one topic sentence and one supporting detail.

예시: I mostly like black, white and blue because they look classy and pair easily with other items; for instance, I often wear a white shirt with a navy jacket and black jeans.

× Most of the time I prefer T-shirt, shirt and jeans.

✓ Most of the time I prefer T-shirts, shirts, and jeans.

Countable nouns for clothing items when listed generally need plural forms and articles if singular; here T-shirt and shirt should be pluralized. Also add a serial comma for clarity. Use plural when referring to general preference.'

× It is very easy to wear and stylish at the same time.

✓ They are very easy to wear and stylish at the same time.

The subject refers to clothes (plural), so the verb and pronoun must be plural. Using 'it' with plural reference causes agreement error. Replace with 'they'.'

× I would prefer to be comfortable and casual clothes, because I spend a lot of time outside for study and work.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable, casual clothes, because I spend a lot of time outside for study and work.

After 'prefer' the correct structure is 'prefer to + verb' (not 'to be' before a noun). Also use 'wear' to indicate clothing choice and add a comma and parallel adjectives form. 'Be comfortable and casual clothes' mixes verb 'be' with noun phrase incorrectly.'

× But sometimes, you know, occasionally special occasion, I like to wear smart clothes.

✓ But sometimes, on special occasions, I like to wear smart clothes.

The phrase 'occasionally special occasion' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use preposition 'on' with 'occasion(s)' and pluralize for generality: 'on special occasions'.'

× Yes I do. I love wearing T-shirt because it's simple, comfortable and suitable for daily use.

✓ Yes, I do. I love wearing T-shirts because they're simple, comfortable, and suitable for daily use.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally and plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural noun. Also add commas after introductory 'Yes' and between adjectives.'

× I choose clothes very quickly unless it is a special event or occasion.

✓ I choose clothes very quickly unless it is a special event or occasion.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. (No error from provided list.)'

× On weekdays I usually like to wear simple and practical.

✓ On weekdays I usually like to wear simple and practical clothes.

Adjectives 'simple and practical' need a noun after them when used predicatively with 'wear'. Omitting 'clothes' leaves the sentence incomplete. Add 'clothes' to complete the object.'

× On weekends I prefer more relaxed and casual.

✓ On weekends I prefer more relaxed, casual clothes.

As above, adjectives need a noun when describing what is preferred to be worn. Add 'clothes' and use a comma between adjectives for clarity.'

× I mostly like black, white and blue clothes because these colors looks classy and match easily with different styles.

✓ I mostly like black, white, and blue clothes because these colors look classy and match easily with different styles.

'Colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'look' not 'looks'. Also add serial comma for clarity. Ensure verb agrees with plural subject.'

× Sometimes I also.

✓ Sometimes I also do.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a verb or object. Adding 'do' completes the idea (meaning 'I also do [like those colors/clothes]'). If more specific, add the verb phrase (e.g., 'Sometimes I also wear other colors').'