Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more direct and organized: state a clear preference in one topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details. Avoid filler words (um, uh) and repetition. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., dresses, shirts, casual clothes) and keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I usually wear comfortable dresses or shirts at home. For example, at night I prefer loose shirts because they are more comfortable for sleeping, while during the day I choose simple dresses that are easy to move in.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give a clear reason and one brief example. Remove repetition and filler. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because comfort matters more to me than fashion. For example, I often wear loose T-shirts and jeans when studying or meeting friends because they let me move freely.

제안: Be concise and respectful while explaining cultural or religious reasons. State your habit first, then briefly explain the cultural reason with correct grammar and no hesitation. Use a linking word like 'because' to explain.

예시: Yes, I wear T-shirts at home and when I sleep, but I usually avoid them in public because, as a Muslim, I prefer clothing that covers me more in daytime settings.

제안: Give a clear general statement and then one specific example. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure: use past/future correctly and link ideas with 'but' or 'however'.

예시: I don't usually spend much time choosing clothes, but I do prepare more carefully for important events. For example, before a wedding I check what is appropriate and try on several outfits to make sure I look presentable.

제안: Start with a clear answer, then give a reason and one detail. Avoid colloquial phrases like 'like a first said' and clean up grammar. Mention who chooses clothes and how that affects style differences.

예시: No, I usually wear similar clothes on weekdays and weekends because my mother chooses most of my outfits. As a result, I often wear the same simple styles both during the week and at the weekend.

제안: Reply with a clear topic sentence naming preferred colours, then give one specific reason or example. Avoid repetition and contradictory statements; be confident about preferences.

예시: I usually prefer dark colours, especially dark blue and dark purple, because they suit me and are easy to match. However, I sometimes wear light colours for special occasions, such as white at a family celebration.

× I usually like to wear frocks or umm, uh, shirt at night, so I don't have a real, I don't really have a, uh, preference for closets clothes, so I don't know.

✓ I usually like to wear frocks or shirts at night, so I don't really have a preference for clothes.

The original uses inconsistent and incorrect pronoun/word forms: 'shirt' should be plural 'shirts' to match 'frocks' and general habit; 'closets clothes' is incorrect and redundant. Use 'clothes' without 'closets'. Also remove filler words and redundant phrases for clarity. Suggestion: keep nouns consistent in number and avoid extra words. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer to wear casual and loose clothes because I prefer I prefer comfort over beauty. So I don't know. I usually wear the I already told.

✓ I prefer to wear casual, loose clothes because I prefer comfort over style. I usually wear what I mentioned earlier.

Redundant repetition ('I prefer I prefer') and incorrect reference 'the I already told' should be replaced with 'what I mentioned earlier'. Also 'beauty' is better expressed as 'style' in this context. Keep pronoun references clear and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yeah, I wear T-shirts on when I go to bed usually and uh, but not daytime because I'm a Muslim and that make me feel like I'm exposed, so I don't.

✓ Yeah, I usually wear T-shirts when I go to bed, but not during the daytime because I'm a Muslim and that makes me feel exposed.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'that make' should be 'that makes' because the subject 'that' is singular. Also fix word order ('on when' -> 'when') and use 'during the daytime'. Remove unnecessary filler. Ensure verb agrees with its subject. Grammar problem type ID:2

× Sometime, sometime when I when I have to go to an important event, I would spend more time on what I have to wear and what I can't wear there. And when I go to school or college, my dresses are or organized and I can wear anything so.

✓ Sometimes, when I have to go to an important event, I spend more time deciding what I should wear and what I shouldn't wear. When I go to school or college, my clothes are organized and I can wear anything.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) and simple present 'I spend' to describe habitual actions instead of conditional 'I would spend'. Replace awkward phrases 'my dresses are or organized' with 'my clothes are organized'. Also replace 'what I can't wear there' with 'what I shouldn't wear'. Maintain consistent present-tense for habits. Grammar problem type ID:6

× No, like a first said I don't have a preference and I don't really like my mother basically choose clothes for me so I wear what she give me most of the time.

✓ No, as I said, I don't have a preference and my mother usually chooses my clothes, so I wear what she gives me most of the time.

Pronoun and verb form issues: 'a first said' -> 'as I said'; 'choose' should be 'chooses' for third-person singular; 'give' should be 'gives'. Remove unnecessary words like 'basically' for clarity. Ensure subject-verb agreement and clear pronoun references. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I like usually dark colours my my most favorite is dark blue colour or dark purple colour, but I can wear other colours too. I can wear light colours too because I don't like them but I can wear them.

✓ I usually like dark colours; my favorite ones are dark blue and dark purple, but I can wear other colours too. I can wear light colours even though I don't prefer them.

Word order: 'I like usually' should be 'I usually like'. Remove repeated words ('my my') and redundant 'colour' after colour names. 'Most favorite' is incorrect — use 'favorite' or 'most preferred'. The second sentence is repetitive; rephrase to express contrast ('even though I don't prefer them'). This fixes adjective/adverb placement and redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:13