Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or example. Avoid filler words and contractions that are awkward (e.g., "not that much fashionable person").

예시: I'm not very fashionable; I prefer comfortable clothes such as jeans and T-shirts. For example, I choose these outfits because they are easy to move in and suit my everyday activities.

제안: Reduce repetition and fillers, and give one or two clear specific reasons with linking words. Correct sentence structure (e.g., "it can be worn in different" not "it can wear").

예시: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because they are easier to move in and more versatile. For instance, casual outfits can be worn in different weather and are suitable for both the office and going out.

제안: Finish your sentences and avoid repetition. Use a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail and an example. Use correct verb forms ("I usually wear").

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and match many items such as jeans or skirts. For example, I usually wear a T-shirt with jeans when I go shopping or meet friends.

제안: Make your meaning clear and avoid unclear phrases. State directly whether you spend time choosing clothes and give one specific reason or habit. Use simple correct phrases (e.g., "I am not very fashion-conscious").

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I am not very fashion-conscious. I usually pick a simple outfit quickly, such as jeans and a T-shirt, before leaving the house.

제안: Organize your answer: topic sentence, then a clear contrasting detail with a linking word. Correct word order and vocabulary (e.g., "on weekends I choose slightly more fashionable clothes for going out").

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear comfortable and simple clothes for work, but on weekends I choose slightly more fashionable outfits when I go out with friends.

제안: Avoid repeated words and improve grammar: say "black is my favourite colour" and give a specific reason and one short example. Use singular/plural correctly ("black clothes").

예시: Black is my favourite colour because it matches many items like skirts and trousers. For example, I often wear a black top with jeans because it looks neat and is easy to pair.

× Well I am not that much fashionable person that's why I like to wear very comfy clothes like jeans and T-shirt.

✓ Well, I am not a very fashionable person, so I like to wear comfortable clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

Use 'a very fashionable person' (adjective + noun) and 'so' for cause. 'That much' is informal and awkward here. Use 'comfortable' instead of informal 'comfy'. Make 'T-shirt' plural when speaking generally: 'T-shirts'. Add commas for clarity.

× I do prefer to wear casual and comfortable clothes rather than these smart clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear casual and comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes.

'Do prefer' is unnecessary unless for emphasis; simple present 'prefer' is correct. 'These smart clothes' is awkward in general statements; use 'smart clothes'. Removing extra words makes the sentence natural.

× However, casual dress is easy to move and it can it can wear uh, views, uh umm, weather, office and out.

✓ However, casual clothes are comfortable for moving around and suitable for many situations, such as the weather, the office, and going out.

Original has repetition, missing collocations and unclear nouns. Use plural 'clothes' with plural verb 'are'. 'Easy to move' should be 'comfortable for moving around'. List examples clearly: 'such as the weather, the office, and going out'.

× Well I do like to wear T-shirt however it is very comfy and can match every clothes like jeans or skirts.

✓ Well, I do like to wear T-shirts; they are very comfortable and can match many clothes like jeans or skirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general habits and plural pronoun 'they'. Use 'comfortable' instead of 'comfy' in formal correction. 'Match many clothes' is better than 'match every clothes' (every needs singular noun).

× That's that is easy to to wear also and I usually used to wear T-shirt when I.

✓ They are also easy to wear, and I usually wear T-shirts when I am at home or going out.

Remove duplicated words and incorrect 'used to' (which implies past habit). Use simple present 'usually wear' for habitual actions. The original sentence is incomplete; add likely completion 'when I am at home or going out' to make it grammatical.

× Well, I do not spend lots of time to choose the cloth.

✓ Well, I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Use 'a lot of time' not 'lots of time' in this context; 'choosing' (gerund) follows 'spend time'. Use plural 'clothes' when speaking generally.

× However, I am not a fairy face enabler conscious, so I used to configure clothes with usually not take a time to choose.

✓ However, I am not very fashion-conscious, so I usually do not take much time choosing clothes.

Original contains unintelligible phrase 'fairy face enabler'. Use 'fashion-conscious' as the correct adjective. 'Used to' implies past; use 'usually do not' for current habit. 'Do not take much time choosing clothes' is natural word order.

× Yes, I do wear a different style of clothes on my weekdays and weekend.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Use plural 'styles' and plural 'weekdays and weekends' for general statements. 'Do wear' is unnecessary; simple present 'wear' is fine.

× However, I prefer to wear comfy and simple clothes when I go to work and on weekend I choose a little bit fashionable clothes when outing the with.

✓ However, I prefer to wear comfortable, simple clothes when I go to work, and on weekends I choose slightly more fashionable clothes when I go out.

Use 'comfortable' not 'comfy'; add comma between adjectives. 'On weekends' plural. 'Choose slightly more fashionable clothes' is natural. 'When I go out' completes the idea; original phrase 'outing the with' is ungrammatical.

× Well black colour is my favorite colours that's why I prefer to wear black colour.

✓ Well, black is my favorite color, so I prefer to wear black.

'Black' alone denotes the color; do not repeat 'colour' twice. Use singular 'color' (or British 'colour') correctly and keep consistent. 'Favorite colors' plural is incorrect when referring to a single favorite.

× However it match to every cloth like skirt, pants so I mostly wear a black clothes.

✓ However, it matches every item of clothing like skirts and pants, so I mostly wear black clothes.

Use verb agreement 'matches' with singular subject 'it'. 'Every' requires singular noun: 'every item of clothing' or use plural 'skirts and pants'. 'A black clothes' is ungrammatical; use 'black clothes'.