Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and directly state your preference, then give one or two clear reasons. Use correct sentence structure and avoid repetitions. For example, start with a topic sentence: “I prefer wearing sportswear.” Then add details with linking words: “because” and “so that.” Also correct grammar (e.g., “I need to wear sportswear such as shorts so I can train”).

예시: I prefer wearing sportswear because I often go to the gym with my friends. For example, I like shorts and a breathable T‑shirt so that I can move comfortably during training.

제안: Answer directly, then give a short reason using linking words like “because” or “but.” Avoid hesitations and repetition. Correct grammar: “I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed, while I wear smart clothes only for events.”

예시: I prefer comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed. However, I wear smart clothes when I attend events or parties.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting reasons. Use linking words like “because” and avoid filler sounds. Correct phrasing such as “easy to put on” instead of “easy to wear off.”

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they make me feel relaxed and are suitable for school, casual parties and many other occasions. They are also easy to put on and comfortable for everyday use.

제안: Begin with a direct answer (“No”) then explain briefly how you prepare. Use clearer vocabulary: “I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I plan outfits in advance.” Provide one specific method. Keep it concise (1–3 sentences).

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I plan my outfits in advance. I usually put a few sets together so I can grab them quickly before leaving for school or other activities.

제안: Answer directly and remove irrelevant phrases. Use linking words like “while” or “whereas” to contrast weekday and weekend clothing. Be specific about examples (e.g., “suits or shirts” for work, “sportswear or swimwear” for weekends).

예시: Yes, I do. On weekends I usually wear sportswear or swimwear because I go to the gym or pool with my friends, whereas on weekdays I wear formal clothes like shirts and trousers for work or interviews.

제안: Start with a simple topic sentence naming your favourite colours, then give a brief reason or example. Use correct article usage and smoother phrasing: “I prefer dark blue, black and white because they are versatile and easy to match.” Avoid repeating the list unnecessarily.

예시: I prefer dark blue, black and white because these colours are versatile and easy to match. For example, when I shop with my mom I usually pick items in those colours so they match my existing wardrobe.

× The best type of clothes that I prefer to wear, it's just supposed to wear 'cause I always go to the gym with my friends and I need, I need to wear a sportswear like shorts, so I can't train.

✓ The type of clothes I prefer to wear is sportswear because I always go to the gym with my friends and I need to wear things like shorts to train.

The original sentence has redundant fragments, incorrect reference ('it's just supposed to wear'), article misuse with 'a sportswear', and a confusing result clause 'so I can't train'. Restructure the sentence into a single clear main clause and supporting reason: use a singular verb 'is' to match the subject 'type', remove redundant phrases, use 'sportswear' without 'a', and clarify purpose 'to train'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I like to wear comfort, comfortable and casual clothes cost make me feel like more relaxed and smart clothes Are you are you like to wear them when I go like to events or parties.

✓ I like to wear comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel more relaxed; I wear smart clothes when I go to events or parties.

Errors include wrong word 'comfort' instead of adjective 'comfortable', extra words 'cost', repeated 'Are you are you', and awkward phrasing 'like to events'. Correct by using the adjective 'comfortable', combining clauses with 'because' and using 'when I go to events or parties' for time. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I do like wearing T-shirts 'cause it makes me **** makes me feel relaxed and it's good for school, parties, events, any other occasions. And it's easy to wear off also.

✓ I like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel relaxed, and they are good for school, parties, and other occasions. They are also easy to put on.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural noun 'T-shirts'; remove filler 'I do like' or keep 'I like'; replace unclear 'wear off' with 'put on'. Ensure consistent verbs: 'make' for plural subject. Grammar problem type ID:27

× No, I don't take a lot of time to include clothes 'cause I make this make a set of clothes together so I can take them when I want to leave the house to go to an adventure, school or anywhere else.

✓ No, I don't take a lot of time choosing clothes because I prepare sets of clothes in advance so I can take them when I leave the house for an outing, school, or other places.

Original uses awkward verbs 'include clothes', repeated 'make this make', and unnatural 'go to an adventure'. Correct by using 'choosing clothes', 'prepare sets', and clearer destination phrases. Maintain simple present for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes I do. Where's the front side of clothing? On weekends I wear sportswear 'cause I go to the gym with my friends or go to swimming pool. And for weekdays I wear formal clothes 'cause I go to work or to an interviewer.

✓ Yes, I do. On weekends I wear sportswear because I go to the gym with my friends or go to the swimming pool. On weekdays I wear formal clothes because I go to work or to interviews.

Remove irrelevant question 'Where's the front side of clothing?'. Use correct preposition 'to the swimming pool' and plural 'interviews' or the phrase 'for an interview'. Keep consistent conjunctions and simple present tense. Grammar problem type ID:11

× The most likely color that I would like to wear is dark blue and black and or white. I always when I go with my mom to buy clothes from the store I only choose the dark blue or the black or the white clothes.

✓ The colors I like to wear most are dark blue, black, and white. When I go with my mom to buy clothes, I usually choose dark blue, black, or white items.

Use plural 'colors' and correct word order 'like to wear most'. Avoid unnecessary 'would'. Simplify and use adverb 'usually' and correct article use: no need for 'the' before colors. Maintain present tense for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:6