Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn (1 chủ đề + 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ); thay các cụm từ lặp lại bằng từ vựng phù hợp (comfortable, casual, sporty). Nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: "I prefer to wear comfortable clothes." Sau đó giải thích lý do và đưa ví dụ cụ thể (khi tập thể dục, khi đi dạo). Tránh câu dài rối và lỗi thì.

예시: I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they make me feel fresh and relaxed. For example, when I exercise I usually wear breathable sportswear that helps me move freely and feel stronger.

제안: Cải thiện mạch nghĩ và ngữ pháp (thời, chia động từ, đại từ); trả lời trực tiếp với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng: nêu sở thích rồi giải thích lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn; dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" đúng vị trí; tránh những mệnh đề không rõ nghĩa.

예시: I prefer to wear smart clothes because they make me feel confident and attractive. For example, when I meet friends I like to dress neatly so people see that I care about my appearance.

제안: Sửa từ vựng sai (T-shirts, dresses) và cấu trúc câu phủ định; trả lời rõ ràng (Yes/No + lý do) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể; tránh câu bỏ dở. Nên dùng từ mô tả như "too old-fashioned" hoặc "not my style".

예시: No, I don't like wearing T-shirts because I feel they make me look older than I am. For example, when I go out with my friends who wear fashionable dresses, I prefer something more stylish that suits my age.

제안: Giữ câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ; sửa ngữ pháp và số nhiều/đơn (hours); cung cấp lý do rõ ràng và cụ thể. Dùng linking words như "because" hợp lý và một ví dụ cụ thể về thời gian.

예시: Yes, I do. Because I care about my appearance, I often spend a lot of time choosing an outfit. For example, before going to a restaurant I sometimes spend two hours picking clothes because I want to look attractive.

제안: Trình bày rõ ràng sự khác biệt giữa ngày thường và cuối tuần; sửa từ vựng (uniform, comfortable) và mạch lời; tránh lặp 'weekend' hay tiếng ừ ừ; dùng 2 câu ngắn: chủ đề + ví dụ.

예시: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear a uniform for school, while on weekends I prefer comfortable casual clothes so I can relax and feel free.

제안: Sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản và chính xác để nêu sở thích về màu sắc; sửa lỗi từ và cụm từ (look smart, look neat, stand out) và tránh từ không tồn tại ('licious'); cung cấp lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn.

예시: I like white clothes because they make me look smart and neat. For example, when I wear white to a restaurant people often notice me and I feel more confident.

× Well, I think I very like to go comfortable clothes because it is made me feel fresh.

✓ Well, I think I really like wearing comfortable clothes because they make me feel fresh.

The sentence has incorrect word order and wrong verb forms. Use 'really like' instead of 'very like' (English uses 'really' with like). Use 'wearing' for clothes and plural 'they' to refer to clothes. Use present simple 'make' for general fact. Suggestion: say 'I really like wearing comfortable clothes because they make me feel fresh.'

× For example, when I do exercise I can feel very comfortable and fresh and help me many have made me stronger when I.

✓ For example, when I exercise I feel very comfortable and refreshed, and it helps make me stronger.

The original mixes tenses and fragments. Use 'when I exercise' (not 'do exercise'), 'feel' present simple, 'refreshed' as adjective, and 'it helps make me stronger' to express result. Avoid misplaced phrases like 'many have made me stronger'.

× I think I prefer to wear smart clothes because when I usually hang out with my friends, so if I were a smart clothes will make people work see that I very beautiful and don't know have a room beauty.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes because when I hang out with my friends, smart clothes make people see that I look attractive.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions ('because' and 'so') and incorrect conditional 'if I were a smart clothes'. Use 'when I hang out' (no 'usually' needed here) and 'look attractive' instead of 'very beautiful' word order. Remove unrelated phrase 'don't know have a room beauty'.

× Well, I don't like wearing a dishes because it's make me feel that I'm older than my age.

✓ Well, I don't like wearing T-shirts because they make me feel older than my age.

The student used 'a dishes' incorrectly; likely meant 'T-shirts'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for T-shirts and correct verb 'make' (not 'make' with it). Use 'feel older than my age' or simply 'feel older'.

× For example, when I go to hang out with my friends, they usually were beautiful dress, but I think I usually wear desserts.

✓ For example, when I go out with my friends, they usually dress nicely, but I usually wear casual clothes.

'Hang out' with 'go to' is redundant; use 'go out'. 'Were beautiful dress' is ungrammatical—use 'dress nicely' or 'wear beautiful dresses'. 'Wear desserts' is wrong word; likely 'casual clothes'.

× I think it's very old fashioned and.

✓ I think it's very old-fashioned.

The original ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and.' Remove 'and' and use the compound adjective 'old-fashioned' to complete the thought.

× Yes, because I'm a girl so I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, because I'm a girl, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Sentence is acceptable but needs a comma. No major grammar error matching list, but cleaned punctuation. Keep present simple 'spend'.

× For example when I go to the restaurant I spend 2 hour to choosing courses because I want to make me make me feel that I very beautiful and small.

✓ For example, when I go to a restaurant I spend two hours choosing outfits because I want to feel very beautiful and petite.

Use 'a restaurant' (article), 'two hours' (plural), 'choosing outfits' (not 'choosing courses'), and correct phrase 'I want to feel' not 'make me make me'. 'Petite' expresses 'small' in appearance better than 'small'.

× Yes, I usually wear different style of clothes on weekday and weekend.

✓ Yes, I usually wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

Use plural 'styles' and plural 'weekdays and weekends' for general statement. 'On' with plural days.

× Uh, for example on weekend I usually uni uniform to go to school and on the weekend I usually umm you uh, you comfortable clothes to make me feel comfortable and uh healthy.

✓ For example, on weekdays I usually wear my uniform to go to school, and on weekends I wear comfortable clothes to feel relaxed and healthy.

Clarify 'uni uniform' as 'uniform' and differentiate 'weekdays' vs 'weekends'. Use 'wear' verb. Replace filler words and correct purpose 'to feel relaxed and healthy.'

× Well, I think color clothes I like is white because it's very make me feel I look like very smart.

✓ Well, I think the color I like is white because it makes me look smart.

Use 'the color I like is white' and 'it makes me look smart' (not 'very make me feel I look like very smart'). Remove redundant words.

× And when I go to the restaurants, people can feel that I'm very licious.

✓ And when I go to restaurants, people can see that I look elegant.

'Restaurants' plural without 'the'. 'People can feel that I'm very licious' is meaningless; 'look elegant' or 'look attractive' conveys intended meaning. 'Licious' is not appropriate.

× So I think the white color white clothes I very like.

✓ So I really like white clothes.

Remove redundancy 'white color white clothes' and use 'really like' instead of 'I very like'.