Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail. Correct verb forms and combine ideas to avoid repetition.

예시: I prefer baggy clothes because they are comfortable for long lectures. For example, loose trousers and oversized shirts let me sit and stretch without feeling restricted.

제안: Be specific and avoid filler words. Use linking words for contrast and finish your reason clearly. Replace vague phrases like “gives out” with precise explanations.

예시: It depends on the situation: for the gym or meeting friends I choose casual clothes for comfort, but when meeting professors or going to work I wear smart clothes to appear professional and confident.

제안: Correct sentence structure and word choice. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give clear supporting details. Remove incorrect words and ensure sentences are complete.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. They are versatile — they pair well with jeans, skirts or shorts — and are comfortable and easy to style on days when I want a simple, relaxed outfit.

제안: Make your answer more concise and fix grammar (singular/plural, word order). Use one or two specific reasons linked with a result.

예시: Yes, I spend more time choosing clothes for special occasions or important meetings because a professional outfit boosts my confidence and helps me make a better first impression.

제안: Avoid unclear phrases and pronunciation-like spellings in writing. Use linking words to contrast weekday and weekend choices and give one concrete example each.

예시: Yes, my weekday style is practical — I wear comfortable clothes for long lectures, like loose jeans and sneakers. At weekends I dress up more, for example wearing a nice dress or smart top when I go to cafés with friends and take photos.

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use precise adjectives and one clear reason plus an example of combinations.

예시: I prefer white because it looks clean and bright and appears professional. For example, I often pair a white blouse with a colored bag or patterned scarf to complete the outfit.

× I do like clothes in baggy style because it makes me feel more comfortable whatever I'm doing, like attending lectures.

✓ I do like baggy-style clothes because they make me feel more comfortable no matter what I'm doing, like attending lectures.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'clothes' is plural so use 'they make' not 'it makes'. Use 'baggy-style clothes' for natural word order. 'Whatever' is better as 'no matter what' for clarity.

× When I'm sit in the long hours I can stretch easily.

✓ When I sit for long hours I can stretch easily.

Incorrect verb form: use base form 'sit' after 'When I'; remove 'am'. Use preposition 'for' with duration 'long hours'.

× Actually it depends on different situations.

✓ Actually, it depends on the situation.

Use singular 'the situation' or 'different situations' but 'depends on different situations' is awkward; 'depends on the situation' is natural. Add comma after 'Actually'.

× If I'm going to do gym or just meeting friends, I would prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

✓ If I'm going to the gym or just meeting friends, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes.

Collocation: 'go to the gym' not 'do gym'. Use present simple 'I prefer' for habitual preference; keep 'meeting friends' as gerund after 'just'.

× But if I'm meeting with professors or uh going to work, I will prefer to wear smart clothes because it gives out.

✓ But if I'm meeting with professors or going to work, I prefer to wear smart clothes because they look more professional.

Use present simple 'I prefer' for general preference. 'It gives out' is incorrect; use 'they look more professional' to refer to 'smart clothes' (plural) and express reason clearly.

× Yes I do Advantageous are very versatile because they go well with jeans, skirts or shorts and are suitable for casual occasions.

✓ Yes, T-shirts are very versatile because they go well with jeans, skirts, or shorts and are suitable for casual occasions.

Sentence fragments and wrong word: 'Advantageous' is wrong here. Restore subject 'T-shirts' and proper punctuation. 'Yes, I do' is unnecessary; combine into clear sentence.

× They are also comfortable and easy to style so aware that most days when I want something simple and relaxed.

✓ They are also comfortable and easy to style, so on most days when I want something simple and relaxed I wear them.

Pronoun/reference and sentence fragment: 'aware that' is incorrect; create full clause and specify action 'I wear them'. Add 'on' before 'most days'.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I'm meeting someone special and or having important meetings because I want to have a more professional looks and this gives me more confidence and I want to have a better first impression.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I'm meeting someone special or having important meetings because I want to look more professional; this gives me more confidence and helps me make a better first impression.

Plural/uncountable and verb agreement: 'a more professional looks' is incorrect; use 'look more professional'. Improve sentence flow by using semicolon and 'helps me make' for natural expression.

× These are different files.

✓ They are different styles.

Wrong word choice: 'files' is incorrect; likely meant 'styles'. Use 'They are different styles.' for clarity.

× On the weekdays I usually attend lectures, so I usually choose clothes that are more comfortable for me for sitting long period of time.

✓ On weekdays I usually attend lectures, so I choose clothes that are more comfortable for sitting for long periods of time.

Redundant 'usually' removed. Use 'On weekdays' (no 'the'). Use plural 'long periods' and correct preposition order 'sitting for long periods of time'.

× But for weekends usually I hang out with friends. I will choose to we're more beautiful because we usually go on a cafe dates and we would take pictures so I would dress up.

✓ But on weekends I usually hang out with friends. I choose to dress more nicely because we often go on cafe dates and take pictures, so I dress up.

Pronoun and verb errors: 'we're more beautiful' is incorrect; use 'dress more nicely'. 'a cafe dates' incorrect article and plural; use 'cafe dates'. Use consistent present simple for habitual actions.

× In general, I would like to pick white because it gives us a feeling of brightness and more clean and more professional look and it goes well with any other colors if I have to match with some special colors when I'm choosing bags or or.

✓ In general, I prefer white because it gives a feeling of brightness, looks cleaner and more professional, and goes well with other colors when I choose bags or accessories.

Modal and tense: 'would like to pick' is less natural than 'prefer' for general preference. Pronoun 'us' unnecessary; use 'a feeling' and comparative 'cleaner'. Remove duplicate 'or' and use 'accessories' for clarity.