Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, correct vocabulary (e.g., 'shorts' not 'underwear' for outerwear), and keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences). Add one specific detail about why you prefer those clothes (comfort, climate) and use a linking phrase.

예시: I usually wear T-shirts and shorts because the climate in the Philippines is very hot. For example, I prefer cotton T-shirts as they are breathable and dry quickly. Also, I often choose plain or light-coloured tops to stay cool.

제안: Good structure with contrast. Improve by using better linking words (e.g., 'however', 'but') and more precise phrasing ('suitable'→'comfortable'). Add one specific example of smart clothes you wear for work.

예시: I prefer casual clothes at home because they are more comfortable and keep me cool. However, when I go out for work I wear smart clothes, such as a button‑down shirt and chinos, because they look professional.

제안: Short and clear. Improve vocabulary and provide a brief specific reason or example (e.g., fabric type, occasions). Replace 'easy to use' with 'comfortable' or 'convenient'.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For instance, I often wear cotton T‑shirts for running errands or relaxing at home.

제안: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary mistakes ('clouds'→'clothes', avoid irrelevant words like 'horror'). Explain briefly how you choose clothes online and give one detail about your criteria (price, style, reviews). Use linking words like 'usually' or 'because'.

예시: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I usually buy online through shopping apps or TikTok shops because it's convenient and I can read reviews. I mainly choose items that are affordable and have good customer feedback.

제안: Make the answer clearer and correct errors ('son though' unclear). If you do wear the same style, explain why (comfort, routine, job). Use linking words and one specific example about what you wear on both days.

예시: No, I don't change my style much between weekdays and weekends. I usually wear casual T‑shirts and shorts every day because they are comfortable and easy to care for.

제안: Avoid awkward or culturally confusing statements. Keep it simple: state a preference and a positive reason (calm, flattering). If you give an emotional reason, explain it clearly and positively. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: I prefer blue clothes because the colour feels calm and suits me. For example, navy or sky blue shirts are my favourites since they look clean and are easy to match with jeans.

× Umm, I want to wear a T-shirt person though, because in the Philippines it's so hot right now.

✓ Umm, I want to wear a T-shirt, though, because in the Philippines it's so hot right now.

The original has the incorrect word 'person' which is not a grammatical participle error but a wrong lexical choice causing sentence confusion; corrected by removing 'person' and adding commas. Suggestion: use only relevant words and punctuation to keep meaning clear.

× It's summer so I wear it always.

✓ It's summer, so I always wear it.

Adverb placement: 'always' typically comes before the main verb in present simple. Also add a comma after introductory clause. Suggestion: place adverbs of frequency before the main verb (I always wear).

× And shorts for, uh, for my underwear. Underwear.

✓ And shorts as my underwear.

The phrase is awkward and repetitious. Use 'as' to indicate function. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use clear prepositions: 'shorts as my underwear.'

× I always prefer to wear casual clothes inside my house or at home because it's very suitable and very cool for me.

✓ I usually prefer to wear casual clothes at home because they are comfortable and cool for me.

'Always prefer' is awkward; 'usually prefer' fits habitual preference. Use 'they' to refer to plural 'clothes' and avoid redundancy 'inside my house or at home'. Use appropriate adjectives 'comfortable' rather than 'suitable' for clothing comfort. Suggestion: simplify and use correct pronoun agreement.

× When I go outside, I want to wear smart clothes because it aligns to my work.

✓ When I go outside, I want to wear smart clothes because they suit my work.

Use 'suit' rather than 'aligns to' and ensure pronoun agreement: 'they' for 'clothes'. 'Align with' would be possible but 'suit' is more natural. Suggestion: match verb to noun number and use correct preposition if using 'align'.

× Yes, I really like to wear T-shirts all the time because that's easy to use and practical to wash.

✓ Yes, I really like wearing T-shirts all the time because they are easy to wear and easy to wash.

Use gerund 'wearing' for general preference and plural pronoun 'they' for 'T-shirts'. 'Easy to use' is incorrect for clothing; use 'easy to wear'. Suggestion: use correct collocations for clothing.

× No, I usually don't spend time choosing clouds.

✓ No, I usually don't spend time choosing clothes.

Typo 'clouds' should be 'clothes'. Suggestion: proofread for typos that change meaning.

× I usually use online horror shopping or Tiktok to buy clothes via online.

✓ I usually shop online on platforms like TikTok to buy clothes.

Awkward phrase 'online horror shopping' likely incorrect; rephrase to 'shop online'. Avoid redundant 'online' and use 'on' with platform names. Suggestion: use 'shop online' and 'on TikTok'.

× No I don't wear different style clothes on weekdays and weekends.

✓ No, I don't wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends.

'Different style clothes' should be 'different styles of clothes' to match plural noun. Suggestion: use plural 'styles' with plural 'clothes'.

× I just wear the same T-shirt or son though every day and every time it will last my washing.

✓ I just wear the same T-shirt or so every day, and it lasts through my washes.

'son though' is incorrect phrase; likely 'so' intended. Use 'it lasts through my washes' for durability. Fix pronoun/verb agreement: singular 'it' with 'lasts'. Suggestion: choose correct words and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So for the color, I really want blue because the sky is blue, but I'm also a lonely person so that when I see blue it will encourage me to become lonely.

✓ As for color, I really like blue because the sky is blue, but I'm also a lonely person, so when I see blue it makes me feel lonelier.

Use 'as for' to introduce topic, 'like blue' is natural. 'Want blue' is odd for preference. 'It will encourage me to become lonely' is unnatural; use 'makes me feel lonelier'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for feelings and correct connectors.