Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant and natural but a little repetitive and slightly long. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and add one brief specific detail (e.g. favorite fabric or occasion). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word for clarity.

예시: I prefer casual clothes such as T-shirts, simple blouses, shorts and jeans because they are comfortable and let me move freely. For example, I often choose a soft cotton T-shirt when I go shopping or meet friends because it keeps me cool and relaxed.

제안: The answer repeats the same idea and includes an unclear phrase (“Damn smart”). Use one clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and explain briefly why you prefer casual clothes with a linking word (e.g. because, so). Replace slang or unclear interjections.

예시: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and confident. For example, I usually choose a simple blouse and jeans for a day out since they are easy to move in and suit most casual occasions.

제안: Good direct answer but watch grammar (subject-verb agreement and unnecessary words) and be more concise. Use one linking word to contrast with other clothes and give a specific example or context.

예시: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they allow me to move freely and are more comfortable than crop tops or tight dresses. For instance, I usually wear a T-shirt when I go for a walk or run errands.

제안: Strong content and relevance. Improve by removing filler (“Oh”) and combining sentences with a linking word for coherence. Give one specific example of how you match clothes to occasions.

예시: Yes, I usually spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I like to match my outfit to the occasion. For example, if I'm attending a family gathering I choose smart-casual clothes, while for a gym session I pick sportswear.

제안: Clear and well-structured answer with an example. Improve by using more precise vocabulary (avoid repeating 'wear') and a linking word to contrast weekday and weekend styles. Mention one reason for the change.

예시: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. During the week I usually wear simple T-shirts and trousers for comfort at work or class, whereas at the weekend I tend to wear dresses or crop tops when I go out with friends for a more stylish look.

제안: Good topic and idea but somewhat repetitive and awkward phrasing. State your preference in one sentence, use a linking word to explain why, and give a specific example of a pastel color and when you wear it.

예시: I prefer pastel colours, such as soft blue and mint green, because they look calming and pleasant. For instance, I often choose a pastel blue blouse for casual outings because it feels soothing and matches many outfits.

× I like to wear casual kind of clothes such as T-shirt, simple blouses, shorts and pants because it makes me more comfortable and allows me to move freely which I love which I love the most.

✓ I like to wear casual kinds of clothes such as T-shirts, simple blouses, shorts, and pants because they make me more comfortable and allow me to move freely, which I love the most.

Plural/singular and quantifier issues: 'casual kind of clothes' should be 'casual kinds of clothes' or better 'casual clothing' and items like 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when listing types. Subject-verb agreement: plural subjects 'they' with 'make' and 'allow'. Also removed repeated phrase 'which I love' and added commas for clarity. Suggestion: use 'casual clothing' or 'casual clothes' and ensure nouns and verbs agree in number.

× I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it gives me a relaxing feeling and I am not too bothered of what I am wearing.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they give me a relaxed feeling and I am not too bothered about what I am wearing.

Pronoun and verb agreement and preposition: 'it gives' should be 'they give' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'Relaxing feeling' is better expressed as 'a relaxed feeling'. Preposition error: use 'bothered about' not 'bothered of'. Suggestion: match pronouns to plural nouns and use correct prepositions.

× So in short, I feel comfortable wearing comfortable and casual clothes. Damn smart.

✓ So in short, I feel comfortable wearing casual clothes rather than smart ones.

Redundancy and sentence fragment: 'comfortable wearing comfortable and casual clothes' repeats 'comfortable'. 'Damn smart.' is an informal fragment that does not fit the test tone. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and informal fragments; contrast clearly with 'rather than smart ones'.

× Yes I like wearing T-shirts because it allows me to move freely and it doesn't really bothers me unlike such as crop tops and dresses.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they allow me to move freely and they don't really bother me, unlike crop tops and dresses.

Pronoun agreement and verb form: use 'they' for plural 'T-shirts' and 'allow' (not 'allows'). 'Doesn't really bothers' is incorrect; correct is 'don't really bother' for plural subject. Also remove redundant 'such as' after 'unlike'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number and avoid redundant phrases.

× So I can say that I am more comfortable of wearing T-shirts.

✓ So I can say that I am more comfortable wearing T-shirts.

Preposition error: 'comfortable of' is incorrect; use 'comfortable wearing' or 'more comfortable with wearing'. Suggestion: use 'comfortable with' or omit preposition: 'comfortable wearing'.

× Oh yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am a person who is very conscious of what I am wearing.

✓ Oh yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am a person who is very conscious of what I wear.

Tense and style: 'what I am wearing' is acceptable but 'what I wear' is more natural when speaking about habitual actions. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions.

× Usually I match what I wear to the occasion or to the event that I am going.

✓ Usually I match what I wear to the occasion or the event that I am going to.

Preposition placement: add 'to' at end of clause 'going to' or rephrase 'attending'. The verb 'going' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to an event. Suggestion: say 'the event I am going to' or 'the event I am attending'.

× Yes, I always like to wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends.

✓ Yes, I like to wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and on weekends.

Adverb redundancy: 'always like to' is acceptable but 'always' is unnecessary here; removing it makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary adverbs unless emphasizing frequency.

× For example, I wear T-shirts, pants, shorts and casual wears on weekdays and on weekends I wear pants, dresses and crop tops, especially when I'm with my friends.

✓ For example, I wear T-shirts, pants, and shorts on weekdays, and on weekends I wear pants, dresses, and crop tops, especially when I'm with my friends.

Word choice and article usage: 'casual wears' is incorrect; 'casual wear' is uncountable or simply list items. Also add commas for clarity and parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'casual wear' or list specific items and maintain parallel lists with commas.

× The color of clothes that I like or I prefer are the pastel colors because it feels like more relaxing.

✓ The colors of clothes that I like or prefer are pastel colors because they feel more relaxing.

Subject-verb agreement and quantifier: 'The color... are the pastel colors' mismatches number. Use plural 'colors' and plural verb 'feel'. Also 'feels like more relaxing' is ungrammatical; use 'feel more relaxing'. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and use correct comparative phrasing.

× It gives me a relaxing effect and calm.

✓ They give me a relaxing effect and a sense of calm.

Agreement and word choice: 'It gives' should be 'They give' to match plural 'colors'. 'Relaxing effect and calm' is awkward; 'a sense of calm' is natural. Suggestion: match verb to subject and use idiomatic phrases like 'a sense of calm'.

× It is good in the eye.

✓ They are easy on the eye.

Idiomatic expression and agreement: 'good in the eye' is incorrect; the idiomatic phrase is 'easy on the eye' or 'pleasant to the eye'. Also match plural subject. Suggestion: learn common idioms and ensure subject-verb agreement.