Clothing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be more concise and slightly more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, limit redundancy (e.g., “casual and sportswear” rather than both variants), and add one specific detail to support your choice. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer casual sportswear because it’s comfortable and practical for daily activities. For example, I often wear sneakers and a light jacket when I go shopping or take a long walk.

제안: Good direct answer but grammar and word choice need correction. Use a clearer topic sentence and improve cohesion by using linking words. Avoid repetition (“quickly and easily”). Aim for 2 sentences and correct verb and adjective forms.

예시: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel relaxed and allow me to move freely. For instance, I often choose loose trousers and sneakers when I need to commute or run errands.

제안: Strong, natural response with good details. To improve, combine short sentences for flow and add a linking word to show variety. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., “pair” and “match”).

예시: Absolutely—I love T-shirts because they’re versatile and easy to style. I have many in different colors and designs, and I usually pair them with jeans, skirts, or sometimes shorts depending on the weather.

제안: Relevant and direct answer but phrasing can be more natural. Avoid calling it “a waste of time” which sounds blunt; give a concise reason and use linking words (e.g., “because” → “so”). Correct minor grammar in the example clause.

예시: Not really. I don’t spend much time choosing clothes because I prefer to get ready quickly in the mornings, so I focus on having breakfast and preparing my bag first.

제안: Answer is relevant but contains errors and unclear wording (“do drink”, capitalization, singular/plural). Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and add a brief specific example. Use linking words to contrast weekdays and weekends.

예시: Yes. On weekdays I wear a uniform for work, but at the weekend I dress more casually—for example, I might wear a dress with sneakers when I go out for lunch.

제안: Good content and clear preference. Improve grammar (plural/singular agreement), be more specific about shades or reasons, and avoid small errors (“a basic jeans”). Use one linking phrase and one clear example.

예시: I prefer plain colours such as black and white because they’re easy to mix and match. For example, I often wear a black top with simple blue jeans for a neat, versatile look.

× I usually prefer wearing casual and sports wear because they are better suited for my daily tasks, especially for shopping or going for a walk.

✓ I usually prefer to wear casual and sportswear because they are better suited to my daily tasks, especially for shopping or going for a walk.

Preference verbs (prefer) are followed by the infinitive 'to' or a gerund; both are possible but using 'prefer to wear' is more natural here. 'Sports wear' should be one word 'sportswear'. Use 'suited to' rather than 'suited for' when indicating suitability for tasks.

× I definitely prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because it fills me more relaxed and easy to move around quickly and easily.

✓ I definitely prefer wearing comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel more relaxed and allow me to move around quickly and easily.

After 'prefer' the gerund is acceptable, so 'prefer wearing' is fine. The original errors are subject-pronoun agreement and wrong verb choice: 'it fills me more relaxed' is incorrect; use 'they make me feel more relaxed'. 'Enable' or 'allow' works with 'to move'; here 'allow me to move around' is correct.

× Not really, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me, especially in the mornings. I usually try to complete my other tasks, for example breakfast or prepare my bag.

✓ Not really, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because it's a waste of time for me, especially in the mornings. I usually try to complete my other tasks, for example, have breakfast or prepare my bag.

Mixing verb forms: 'complete my other tasks, for example breakfast or prepare my bag' is inconsistent. Use parallel infinitive/verb forms: 'have breakfast' and 'prepare my bag'. Also add a comma after 'for example'.

× Yes, I do drink Weekdays I wear uniform at work, but on weekends I wear informal clothes like a dress and sneaker for a lunch.

✓ Yes. On weekdays I wear a uniform at work, but on weekends I wear informal clothes like a dress and sneakers for lunch.

Original sentence has extra word 'drink' and run-on structure. Remove 'drink'. Use 'On weekdays' to indicate time, use article 'a uniform', plural 'sneakers' for shoes, and 'for lunch' (no article).

× I like plain colours like black or white because it is easier to match with other colors or clothes. For example, I choose a black top with a basic jeans.

✓ I like plain colours like black or white because they are easier to match with other colors or clothes. For example, I choose a black top with basic jeans.

Pronoun agreement: 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'colours'. 'A basic jeans' is incorrect because 'jeans' is plural/uncountable; use 'basic jeans' without 'a'.